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Reviews for An Innocent Joke?

By : freewater
  • From ANON - DBZVelena on May 07, 2004
    I really love this story.
    I hope jou will wake up and explain to everybody what happened.
    And then maybe they'll understand that Seto fell in love and that the moment that happened it stopped to be a joke and started to be something diffrent.
    post the rest soon ok?
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  • From ANON - MomOfFluffyAndFluffier on May 07, 2004
    awww...poor Seto, hope he can win back Jou's trust and his heart....please continue
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  • From ANON - yaoigoddess on May 06, 2004
    NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Please tell me your going to update this tomorrow? I started to cry at this last chapter. Please don't ruin this story. T_T don't make me beg.
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  • From itsallgood on May 06, 2004
    Kaiba's quite possessive. o.O

    Great story! I am now addicted to this little saga and I want to see what happens next. You've got good grammar and style, as well as flow. I like how Seto wasn't just alddenddenly 'oh I love you so much!' like in some fics. It's realistic, for the most part. Otogi seems a little out of character, but when you need to add an evil streak to characters, that's what you do.


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  • From ANON - Lord Agent D. on May 04, 2004
    Wow... I love this story so much! Thou wis wish Seto weren't so mean to Jou; after all, the pguyguy's just trying to bee. e. But I suppose that's how Seto is; if you were writing him any other way, I'd have to jump down your throat for OOC.

    I've been reading this for a couple of days, wanted to finish it before I reviewed. I felt so bad for Jou when he gave up the Red-Eyes only to have Seto be such a jerk to him right after. And I must say, though drunkenness isn't my favorite precipitant to a lemon scene, it did seem oddly appropriate for this fic. The lemon felt like a whirlwind, though... am I the only one that was scrolling back up and saying, "Now, when did Seto stop being fully clothed?" Of course, that could be the lack of caffeine in my blood right now...

    Anyway, once the next chapter's up, you can expect another review from me. See ya!
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  • From ANON - DBZVelena on May 04, 2004
    This is such a great story, you ARE going to write more right?
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  • From ANON - Aniya on May 03, 2004
    I read this before it was deleted on ff.net an i really like it! can't wait for you to put it all up and the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Hikari raine on May 03, 2004
    Hi I read this fic at that other site ( i won't say who but we all know *smirks*) any ways I'm glad that i found it here and i can't wait till you post up to the most recent chapter b4 it got deleted. I think this is the best s/j story in a long time i hope you update soon.

    Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - yugismine on May 02, 2004
    I just wanted to say how happy I am that this is here. I almost died when I went to look it up at FF.net and found out it isn't there any more! I'm so happy you're still going. Can't wait till you finally get to where you left off there! *dreamy look* such a wonderful story...Although I just realized that I don't know where you left off... wel well. -__-; I'm rambling. Goodbye...
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  • From ANON - Araki on May 02, 2004
    ^&^ YAH! YOU BROUGHT IT HERE!! SO WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO GET TO WHERE YOU LEFT OFF *baby eyes* ^^ that caps means excitement. Yah, I know, FF.net is being ASSes, but atleast they didn't DELETE your account!
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