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Reviews for An Innocent Joke?

By : freewater
  • From SlaveSarah on November 24, 2018

    this is really a good story, will there be a sequel of sorts? I hope so?


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  • From hyruleheroin24 on February 20, 2012
    fantastic story
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2011
    Okay, I don't remember ever flaming anyone before, and I don't intend on flaming you, but I always speak (or write in this case) my mind, so even though you won't probably even read this since this story is so old, I'll write it anyway, even if just to relief my own conscience.

    Well, I was about to say that Joey isn't a defenseless little girl, and he would never let Duke manhandle him like that, but then I remembered an episode of Buffy where Spike does the same thing to her, so I guess it happens.

    Also, not directed only to you, but almost every single fanfiction writer in the world, stop using the few random japanese words you know! It just looks stupid. Especially when you do it wrong.

    The first sex scene... well by know someone have probably already told you that it doesn't work like that.

    I know it's useless to say, I should say this in practically every fanfiction I read, but nobody calls him 'Jou'. Oh, and don't even get me started on the 'hikari' and 'yami' thing and how they don't call each other that and don't have separate bodies.

    Just in case you do read this and feel the urge to tell me to go fuck myself, I did enjoy your story a lot, it was original, fairly well written and fun. And who knows, by now you probably don't even make these mistakes anymore, if you're still writing, that is.

    Okay, you can tell me to go fuck myself now.
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  • From ANON - Carro on January 12, 2006
    Oh.. my.. God.. I.. How.. Wow... *silence*
    [Yami Carro: Uhm sorry for my hikari.. What she means is that it's one hell of a great fan fic.]
    Yeah.. exactly! That's exactly my point! I mean, I haven't read a SetoxJonouchi fic as great as this in a long time! It was really breathtaking at many times ^^ (Is that really correct English? =P) Anyway, I like that you've managed to keep them all in character, if you know what I mean =P Although, Jono maybe behaves a little to much like a girl sometimes.. But that's kinda great too.. Humm.. *thinking*
    [YC: What she's trying to say is that she likes when Seto is the dominated one *rolls his eyes*]
    *blushing* Hey too much information! What I'm really trying to say is that I looooove your story and I will definetly (correct spelling ne? =P) read your other stories ^^ Hope you'll do more SetoxJono fics! They are my favourite paring ^^

    Oh and one question! Why do you use all the Japanese names but not Anzu's? It's not a big a deal, really *shruggs* I don't even like her that much =P but I was just wondering...
    Also I want to apologise (how do you spell it??) for my English =P I'm from Sweden so I don't use English a lot.. Took me half a damned hour to wrote this =P

    Anyway, great job! ^^ I love it [YC: Yeah yeah, you've said it already. I think we all got that by now..]
    Take care!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2005
    hot, hell hot, hella hot, hot hot hot Yay
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  • From ANON - Debz on October 23, 2005
    Wow
    Really ! ! Wow ! !
    That's really good
    *Claps Hands*


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  • From ANON - Mu at Night on September 15, 2005
    Onisan is incorrect, oni is ogre, oniisan is older brother.
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  • From ANON - on September 06, 2005

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  • From ANON - on September 01, 2005
    Jounouchi, Katsuya

    Kaiba, Seto


    Like that.
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  • From ANON - taiko on July 19, 2005
    Seto better not be fuckin' dead!!!! >< if he is i will hunt you down and kill you *cries* please dont kill hiiiiiiim D:
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  • From ANON - Janai on June 30, 2005
    Comment on your having Katsuya be his first name...you got that one right. Jounouchi is his last name--good guess! ^ ^ And good story so far...I'm gonna go back to reading it now...
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  • From ANON - Death over Time on March 07, 2005
    Chapter 23 was so in character!!! That part where Jou was talking to Shizuka was so much like the show!!! I have never seen more in-charrie-ness in a fic except that for that moment
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  • From ANON - Trish on November 29, 2004
    GOSH!!!!!!!!!! This has to be the best j/s story i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Motje on September 30, 2004
    I'm not finished reading it all yet, but I just had to say that the way you write is outstanding. And bakura throwing the knive gave me goosbumps
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  • From ANON - BrokenDesire on July 18, 2004
    ok im not even done with chapter 2 yet but i HAD to put a little comment thingy.
    Katsuya is his LAST name and Jounuichi is his FIRST. and since they do use last names
    as the way to well...refer someone (im Japan), Kaiba should have called him JOUNUICHI when he wanted
    to see if Jou would get pissed. it should be Mr. KATSUYA....not Jounuichi. im sorry im not flaming or
    anything, it's just that whole thing pissed me off. >_< i dont blame you or anything either.
    i guess i can understand how that would be confusing...but whatever. i do like the fic so far :3
    it's just the first name, last name thing...god i wanted to eat my monitor i was so frustrated -_-U
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