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Reviews for Possession

By : Shakirah

From ANON - Kylie on July 16, 2004
This is the best trilogy (sp.?) I've ever read! I loved it sooooooo much. I give it all five stars!

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From ANON - Cinder on July 16, 2004
I love you. I love you so much. I think that's all I can say about the matter.
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From itsallgood on July 15, 2004
So you finally used the creamsicle. *applauds while drooling*

Amazing. Truly amazing story/trilogy thing. Wow.
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From ANON - ladyzephyros on July 15, 2004
*sheds away tears from eyes* THE ENDING IS PERFECT!
I love how they are putting with each other. I used to love the sad ending...but I couldn't tell nor describe how giddy I am now, after reading the end of this fic....heh ^^
Roberto and Eduardo, eh? Even the dildo's names match each other XD

*bows* Thank you for writing this. Love the happy ending, but I guess I'll miss Seto and Yami bickering and swearing at each other.... *lol*
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From ANON - Hikari (DJ Silence Yuy) on July 15, 2004
Wow. Your stories were absolutly brint ant and mind-blowing. Thank you so much for writing them, even if at times I was ready to choke Seto for being a prick and about to pull my hair out because you left all of those cliffhangers. And a few chapters ago when you used "I Hate Everything About You", I was like 'It's about time you used that song! I've been imagining that song when reading this!' And now every time i listen to that song, I'm going to think of this story and the two that it followed.

And it is a happy ending for Seto and Yami. They are absolutly perfect for each other and you had me extremly worried that Yami was gonna hook up with Mahad.

I'm gonna miss this story so much. I used to check for updates every time I got on the net. But in a way, I'm glad it's over, because now Seto and Yami's rollarcoaster is finally over.

But thank you so much for writing this ficcy! It was absolutly brilliant and well-written!! 10 out of 10!!!
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From ANON - diablo on July 14, 2004
BABE!!

wow, just wow... amazing...

it was so perfectly ended ... i like how you explained yourself ... how it seems that everything you did happened for a reason ... during the last scene with yami and seto in the room, i just wanted to kick seto so he would understand ... but that was expected, as relationships are realistic like that ... hmmm ... honestly, i dont think i have any right to say it was bad or anything, because quite frankly, this piece is so well written... your grammer, writing style, ideas, prose is just so fresh ... gods babe, you just keep getting better with every chapter you write... you took these two characters and made them your own- the mark of an excellent author. stand up and take a bow, shak-babe, because this was utterly, totally and completly amazing ... thank you for sharing this with us, i loved every second of it... its def. going down as my favorites... you bring good-quality writing wherever you go, with a well-developed plot *applauds*

-diablo
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From ANON - Nancy on July 14, 2004
*sniff* Well i guess the storys over.....amazing smut though. and intresting plot, well by plot i mean smut but its all great! I hope your next story is as amazing!
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From ANON - aspiker on July 14, 2004
It may have been a roller coaster but the ride sure has been fun! I've enjoyed this tale and really love how it ends almost exactly as it began --> dirty movies, m/s and some good old fashioned smut. 8-)
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From ANON - blackwidow10 on July 14, 2004
*criez* its over!! and it was so good! i just luv the ending that u came up with, it fit them perfectly. hehe...yami is the real san francisco treat...that was funny. u really r an awesome writer. i hope u do decide to write that new seto/yami story that u were talking about. if u do, could u possibly email me? pretty please? ^_^ the three stories in this little trilogy thing (i dont know what to call it) have all been incredibly amazing. keep up the good work, and for your fan's sakes, keep writing! ^_^
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From ANON - cve on July 14, 2004

Baby, baby, baby--

What can I say, I already knew the ending and the outline of your smut epilogue. To read it all fleshed out was fantastic. Seto and Yami so up/down, love/hate, ever fucking each other's brains out. They are so absolutely perfect for each othestilstill don't understand why they aren't more popular.

Glad you liked my ideas. And thank you our crazy late-night, early-morning completely bizarre conversations as well. And my husband wonders why I never go to bed early. Hah. I'm with my internet lover. ^_~

And I must hear this new idea you have cooking in that wicked little brain of yours. I will be bugging you shortly.

Much love always--

cve

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From ANON - Horizont on July 14, 2004
Hi Shakster!!!!

Not one of my expectations was high enough fpr what you wrote, you always topped every each and single one. Since this will b emy last review for this story I hope I can find th eright words for everything I have to say.
It was a rollercoaster, yes, but just as one it made me always want more. No matter how long a part was, it never was long enough, there was just no point to stop in between without calling it a cliffhanger.
But I loved every word you wrote.
"I'm in love with you, Seto Kaiba."
This remains my favourite part! I'm so glad you repeated it in the end! I've read it out aloud so many times to find the right pronounciation, to feel the mood and everything... I spoke their dialogues, exspcially the ones of Seto and Yamo or Bakura and Yami - btw I simply love Bakura, and his rol ein your story is wonderful! The way he acts, like he wouldn't be too frinedlich towards Yami but still help him in the end. he's an asshole, but the nicest one I've ever seen.
I don't know how you did it, but you came up with an end to a beautifucompcomplicated story that fits it perfectly! It does! This is how it should be. Seto and Yami went the whole long way, they found hell and heaven and even something in bet... ... They have verything and nothing at all.
Geez, there's so much more I wanted to say, but I'm probably getting on your nerves with that babling, so... let me finish this. ^_^x
This is about the best thing I've read in a really long time, maybe the best ever. But I'm not sad it's over. I thing part of the reason is, that I can still read "Beauty", which is a wonderful story as well. And then you promised another Seto/Yami - I'll be looking for it!
But I'll remember this one. There are many good stories out there that get ends they don't deserve. I like this end. It's perfect, honestly. There's nothing else I want to know, the line has reached its end.
I like the way Seto's getting emotional when he confesses why he came out. Yami just knows how to provoke him. To be vnt, nt, to be loving, to be honest. He can get his dragon anywhere. They know eachother so very well...
Well, that's all I have to say. I love it. Ever since it started I've read the different parts over and over again. I've waited...
I feel like hugging someone. I feel strangely sad but happy at the same time. It feels like crieing and laughing. I want it to continue forever and I'm so glad it ended since the end is beautiful. I better go and learn some now adjectives for my next review...

Cya!
Thanks for "Lost Longing and a Video Tape", "Rivals with Benefits" and "Possession". Thanks a lot.
I'm your fan!
Horizont
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From on July 14, 2004
Wow. I think I'm completely speechless. I really don't know what to say. It was so amazing, from beginning to end. And I love how the last part went back to Yami wing ing the movies, the same way the entire trilogy started. Thank you so much for giving all of us this wonderful story. It's definitely not going to be one I forget about anytime soon. XD
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From ANON - dragonkitty on July 14, 2004
^_______^ somehow "awww.." doesn't fit. It was a really good ending. The loose ends were tied up.
Yami and Seto have...stablized, as well as they can, or seem to (did that even made sense?)
The plot was wonderful. The smut was wonderful. The story was wonderful. I loved it!!
hmm...anything else I want to say..oh yea, I like that whole "happy ending" it works out well.
Can't to to see what your next story is. I look forward to it.
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From ANON - Kat on July 14, 2004
Ooo *claps* I loved it! Even had a sometime-ish happy ending! *smirks* Damn, I was even crying when Seto remembered what Atemu said to Seth in that flashback. Lordy girl, make me cry at work. Fortunately the smut at the end made it alllll worth it. Even if ya did fog up the whole store. *g*

'nother story? Hot damn! I know you, it'll be as great as all the others have been.

Bloody fantastic job!

Kat
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From ANON - Lightning Sage (having issues logging in) on July 13, 2004
OMFR!!! Yami and Seto were SOOOOOO close to getting back together, but that baka Mahad had to jump in!!!! TT~TT I was crying, I was so upset when Seto left and saidGoodGoodbye, Atemu." It's just not fair!!! Seto and Yami are MEANT to be together!! Not Yami and Mahaado! They were so close...Yami and Seto...but so far...

I'm so excited to read the next chapter! I hope to dear Ra that Seto and Yami make up, but it's sounding like it might not go that way. I hope we gore ore info on Seto's flashbacks. Keep up the nice job. I love this trilogy of Lust, Longing, and a Videotape, Rivals with Benefits, and Possession. It's been an amazing journey so far. I just love the whole psychology behind Yami and Seto's actions, and how they treat each other. At points you mentioned there wasn't much of a plot, but really, there was. This is definitely one of the more extreme versions of a Seto/Yami relationship that I've read, but it's still certainlauslausible. You've made the characters come so alive, and you've especially brought Yami and Seto's personalities out. I think given their situation in L, L, and a V that things would have turned out just like you portrayed them. I can definitely picture Seto and Yami both as being sadomasochists, and Seto being more of a sadist and Yami more of a masochist. That's kind of what makes them so compatible. Andhinkhink the readers can really understand the psychological effects that their relationship has had on each other, and that's what really made them who they are now. I believe you've conveyed the effects very accurately.
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