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By : Shakirah

From on July 08, 2004
Oh this chapter was full of so much turmoil! I loved it, but now I'm really sad because it means that this drama's coming to a close. *sniff*

It's really funny to think that this whole thing started out with a PWP that I happened to spot late one night. This is a great series! I think you managed to almost completely redefine the Seto/Yami relationship for most of us fans. Thank you so much!!

~Blue September~
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From ANON - YamiLisa on July 05, 2004
Hi Shakster. Feeling better already? Still very happy you managed to write another chapter though! It was awesome! Only one more chapter to go? One more??? Oh oh, I�m so gonna miss this fanfic! You�re not really serious about that, right? Anyway, if you are, then please make at a good and smutty one, okay? I don�t really know what I want now. Yami and Kaiba obviously still love each other, in spite of all the arguing all the time, but then again, Yami and Mahad are also so very cute together. And not abusive! *sigh* I love Mahad.
Hope you get better real soon
Hugs

YamiLisa
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From ANON - Jam on July 04, 2004
OMG! This get's better every time I think it can't! Cheers! You are a wonderful writer!!
Ahem...
They way Yami and Seto act reminds me of Ross and Rachel. xD
However, if you were to end the fic there, I'm sure you would get many e-mails asking you to write either another part, or actually finish this one. *is shot*
Just, keep writing!
Toodles!!
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From ANON - Renee on July 04, 2004
BAWL!!!!!

*sniffles*

That was so sad!! Stupid Mahad getting in the way!!

Very well written though.
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From ANON - Horizont on July 04, 2004
Hi Shakster!

Let's get to the point, Mahad should be taken aout of the picture (as it says so nicely in "I'm back", Seto's Image Song). Damn it, he ruined it all! Okay, on the other hand Yami now knows that Seto had flashbacks and that he accepts his past... wow. Poor Mahad, but neway, he can't just go and quit whatever rest of a non-existing relationship Yami and seto have!
And Seto's notgoing to sleep with Seig, is ne? And if, he won't buttom, right? That Seig guy, he's one to kill. >_
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From ANON - nikki on July 03, 2004
Okay...i just finished watching 'you got served' and i'm all hyped up...god where do i begin...oh yes...death to that pink piss ass seig!!! and yami needs some punishing, he's horrible---not that seto's any better but, oh well. i have a new favorite word compliments yami 'fuckrag' *snickers* how creative their vocabulary is!

God!! i'm not meaning to sound bad nor am i trying to be offensive and don't take this the wrong way but...Mahad is acting so...*gay* at duke's party...so sugary sweet *begins to gag* too...much...sweetness*falls over* X_x he seems a lil too sweet to be true if yuh ask me...almost like he's up to something...

Yami's being a royal prick...pardon the pun...

Awww...how sweet,they were gonna make up on their anniversary *wipes a tear*

Ahhhhhhhh!!! fuck it...fucking Mahad fucked it up!! FUCK!! *GRRR!! imagines seto running mahad over with his SUV then backing up for good measure before driving off---with Yami of course XD*

Ok my...now i know seto's serious...he called yami Atemu...*sighs* he doesn't believe in the past lives so that must mean something significant...
Oooo---looks like yami figured it out too...

You know you are still a bitch...what a way to end the chapter!...but thanks for the extra long reading...*i savored this for over and hour while smirnoff citrus twist vodka absolutelt be-oo-tiful* one more chapter to go eh? i can't wait!!

btw: incase my review seems weird...i started typing it out as i was reading and parts caught my attention so i wouldn't forget important stuff...so there you go a nice long review...talk to you in aol ;)

nikki
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From ANON - Moonlitspire on July 03, 2004
AAAAAAAAAAH!! not again! *throttles and glomps* lol SHAKSTER, THIS ENDING IS EVEN WORSE THAN THE LAST ONE! x_X is Yami REALLY going to have sex with Mahad this time? i feel so bad for both Yami and Seto again. the suspense is killing me ever so slowly...

anyways, still like your Bakura. he's as unhelpful as ever most of the time. ^_^ Mahad seems very..um...not sincere because he is too sincere...like he has an evil plot behind it all. who knows? maybe he was lying about that night too! i want to strangle mahad for ruining what's left of Seto and Yami's relationship ^^;; o yeah, the present was so sweet. *_* omg, please update as soon as possible! and only 1 more chapter left? aww shucks. this story's almost at the end...that's worth being sad over too. try making it a happy ending as possible please! ^__^
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From ANON - Kat on July 02, 2004
Sorry to hear about the allergies! I hope you find something to help you out with that. I know exactly how sucky it is to have all that.

Crap! As if the cliffhanger wasn't bad enough, the teaser leaves us hanging even more! *G* You're evil!

I'm soooo glad he didn't fuck Mahad. Whoa... Bakura being a big-brother-protective. That's almost frightening. *smirks* The argument between Ryou and Yugi was funny. I think their arguments like that are just too cute. Loved Joey's blonde moment. That's just too cute!

So, are Seto's migraines and bloody noses by-produts of his flashbacks? Yesss, you caught me completely off guard with that. I never expected that event! I think the neighbors heard my jaw drop when he called him Atemu!!!

I loved the anniversary presenLordLordy but you've just made the roller coaster a lot more fun!

Gonna be difficult waiting for the next go-round on thasteaster!
KB
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From ANON - crimsonvioleteyes on July 02, 2004

Babe--

One word: LITHIUM. They need massive doses. Now. And I still think Mahad would be good for Yami. This coming fromiehaiehard KaiYami fanwoman.

Glad you liked the diamond-studded choker idea.

Great job as usual. I'm glad you're feeling better now.

And I'm good now. No need to break out the g-strap, heh...unless you really want to...

much love--

cve
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From ANON - blackwidow10 on July 02, 2004
oh wow, seto's having flashbacks too?! and now he's gone bipolar on us...those two r really screwed up. they were so close to making up too!! i blame Mahad! if only he had showed up about 5 minutes later...damn. but the next (not really the last chapter...right?) chapter sounds promising. ^_^ oh, and *hands u some medicine* sry that ur so sick, but it didn't stop u from writing an awesome chapter! good job, and update soon so i can read that yami and seto get back together! hopefully...
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From ANON - ladyzephyros on July 02, 2004
Holy Jesus, you have made me speechless again. A long chapter and a very nice, sweet twist, what more could a fangirl want? Thank God that Yami haven't s wit with Mahad...yet. I love the guy, though. Seto and Yami are pretty close to forgive each other and start making up again until Mahad come and Seto's world come crashing down, ooh the angst! But how in the name of Ra can Seto have flasbacks? When Yami was babbling on and on about his flashback, Seto didn't believe him right? Hell, the Seigfried guy really irritates me to no end...

I guess the answer will be on the next chapter, and I still can't get enough of this fic, please update soon ^-^!
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From ANON - ladyzephyros on July 01, 2004
Dear Ra, I am DYING to read the next chapter!

The whole alcohol and illegal club thingy is absolutely fantastic, the flashback even more so. Gosh, did Yami really sleep with Mahaado back then? Did Yami *just* slept with Mahad? ( I mean, with no shirts on, what else could possible happened? O.0 ) Oh, I love Seto's jealousy too, but after all, this is his own fault right? He dig his own grave, now it's his turn to lying on it. I pity him, though. Oh God, please don't stick Seto with the Seigfrid guy, I beg you! Seto's interview really make me want to strangle him right now. I used to like the angst and all the good stuff but right now I just want the happy end O.O!

P/S: You *must* update soon! I am seriously can't get enough of this, and my curiosity is going to kill me soon If you don't update any sooner! Pretty Please?
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From ANON - Moonlitspire on June 30, 2004
Nooooooooooo! that can't happen! *screams* you've done it this time, Shakster! it's gone from horrible to... bottomless pit. now only have you left it hanging...you've also killed seto's health...even more... poor him...in his jealousy, he's turning to that pink haired dude for a partnership?? -.- *sigh* what could get worse now? bakura's helpfulness? XD lol hope you update soon!
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From on June 30, 2004
No! Please don't say Yami slept with Mahad! Or Mahaado!

Man, Shakster, what are you doing to us?! I'm going crazy here with this story. I'm just dying to see how you pull this off and you being so unpredictable sure doesn't make it any easier for to guess your next move. I hope you can update soon again, because I'm so far on the edge of my seat that I think I might fall off!

This story is so great!

~Blue
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From ANON - yamislove on June 30, 2004
Hi Shakster,

What a very naughty and yummy chapter this was, I loved it! I really enjoyed the Seto and Yami's encounter in the dressing room, very Hot!
Poor Seto getting all jealous when Yami called him being very drunk and telling Seto he thinks Mahad wants to sleep with him, SUCH A BAD BOY!
This was one of my favorite chapters, No fair leaving such a cliffhanger at the end. ^_~

Just a adore your fic!
take care,

yamislove
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