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By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - YamiLisa on June 30, 2004
    Heeey!! A *big* thank you for dedicating this chapter to me! That’s probably the biggest of a thank you I can get for my drawing. But it was no trouble at all. I like drawing, especially when they’re pretty boys with a “Cum Slut”-chocker on.
    And what a great chapter it was. The part between Yami and Seto in the dressing room was verrry hot. And that Mahad guy, yeah, I didn’t really know what Mahaado looks like, couldn’t find uresures on the net too, but does he really look like the Black Magician?? Oh sweet lord, that guy is so gorgeous!! So Mahad must be too. Okay, I definitely have to stop drooling now. Looking forward to next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Alyssa on June 29, 2004
    AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!! a cliffhanger from hell! U can't end it there!! No, that's is sooooooooooo evil! And y must u update this thrusday?! I'm gonna be on the airplane. ;__; I won't be able to read it. WAH WAH!! this sux. I'm gonna be on vacation for over a month and this story will be over probably..this is the only thing I miss in America.. hehe..can I go online in Japan, or HK, or China? I hope so! Anyways, omg! Yami slept with Mahad! I thought he slept alone when Yugi said Yami was sleeping upstairs. *whispers* Please don't update this week or the next week or the mon month! I no, I'm a selfish bitch. PLEASE?! Try to update slowly and very slowly, say a month or so...hehehe. I will miss this story and you too.
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  • From on June 29, 2004
    Yay for long chapters!

    Is it odd that I absolutely LOVE all the jealousy and possessiveness? I think I'd kind of like to see something happen between Seto and Seig. Not necessarily a hook up, just something to make Yami go crazy with jealousy. But poor Seto, he's gotta do something to get back at Yami. ^O^ Can't wait to see how Yuugi's phone call to Mokuba goes. And also can't wait to find out why Mahad is in Yami's bed. o_O
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  • From ANON - Tanya Maxwell on June 29, 2004
    Oh no! Yami, what have you done?!?!

    Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I just caught up on what's been going on in this wonderful world you've created. I love how what happened in Yami's past is re-occurring in his future. This story is truly captivating and I can't wait to read more!

    Tanya~

    PS - drunken phone calls really do stab you right in the heart. Poor Seto. Give him a hug from me!
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  • From ANON - Morghann on June 29, 2004
    O.O What was Bakura thinking, giving Yami that drink? It makes me think he knows something. And Seto, what's wrong?! I'll forgive him for not thinking too clearly, but he shouldn't wish for a tumor, especially with all these things happening. Argh! What's going on with Yami?! And Mahad? Bakura knows more than he's letting on!
    Great story. Makes me really want to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Yukari on June 29, 2004
    your story rocks!!!!!
    I CAN'T GET ENOUGH!!!! ;)
    i look forward to your next update
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  • From ANON - Horizont on June 29, 2004
    Hi!

    Thx for your mail! ^_^x Mahad is cool, I like him, write that lamon between him and Yami, 'kay? ^^;;;;;;
    Okay, let's see, this has to be a VERY good feedback to get that thursday-update...
    Was Yami involved with mahaado, was he, was he??? I like him, he's bit too, uhm, friendly, but I guess he knows what he wans an gets it... I'd like to have him as a card, Mahad. He would look great next to the other four Dark Magicians... ^^x
    Neway:
    That guy with the other game company, what's his name, Seigfrid? That sounds *almost* German! ^^;; Funny. But Seto and him? No way. ^^to lto loves Yami, he's obsessed with him! He wouldn't take someone else just for a change. *grabs Seto and holds him possessively*
    Hm... I could end this review right in the middle and create a cliffhanger myself, but... well, I want to know what's happening in your story so I won't threaten you (now). ^_^x
    I love "Possession"! Please write on!

    Horizont
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  • From ANON - Alraune on June 29, 2004
    Wow! This is soooo great! I really like the end :) I hope next chapter will be as long as this one! continue with this excellent story.
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  • From ANON - blackwidow10 on June 29, 2004
    awesome as always shakster! that club sounds like the kind of place i would go to... and the dressing room scene! that was brilliant! i would have never thought of that (that'compcompliment to u, by the way, considering i think that im the one who comes up with the best ideas in the world) ^_^ cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Lightning Sage on June 29, 2004
    Nice chapter! Very interesting. I am still so upset about Yami and Seto breaking up...Everything seems to be falling apart for those two. And don't worry, the cliffhanger was fine. It wasn't bad. It was, in my opinion, a great way to end the chapter.

    Can't wait to read the next update!
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  • From ANON - Kat on June 29, 2004
    Gods, what a roller coaster!! I mean, just this chapter. Wow, it was long. That drink sounded kinda good (shush, I'm weird that way). I'd have loved to have seen the ass-reaming Bakura got (no, just the yelling, really. No, honest). I can just see the mushroom cloud if Yami ever sees that interview! Dayum, talk about bitchfest. Although, the drunken phone call was kinda funny. Since for some reason, I keep identifying with Seto (post break-up!), I hope this story has a good, if not flat out happy, ending. Bakura driving has just become my new nightmare *smirks*. *giggles* Abiss... like that. *sings* Mahad is creeepy... Those flashbacks are getting kinda scary too!

    Okay, this is soooo much of a disjointed review. I'm sorry abouat. at.

    Ohhhhhh Pleeeeeease update soon! Now I'm all like (whoa, valley girl moment) all worried about Seto. Fantastic as usual, Shakster!

    KB
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  • From ANON - DirtyD on June 28, 2004
    Yup, I'm at the end of my rope. You can't blame me, how many reviews have I given you? 100? 200? 500? This story... this story is so emotional, crap, its entrancing. Captivating. Yeah calling people cum slut and bitch is award winning but it really is. I thought this wasn't going to be as good as Rivals with benefits but it is. This is like the Lord of the Ring trilogy. Just gets better and better with every sequel. I don't know how you do it but you do. Man I am so envious. If I only had half your drive I'd be set. Man I love you Shakirah, my Mistress.
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  • From ANON - crimsonvioleteyes on June 28, 2004

    Babe--

    You always manage to twist it up, fuck it up and I love every minute of it. I love the visual image of Yami in tight silver pants and black mesh shirt. wowza. And Mahad, I am telling you, he really should fuck Yami and I hope he did. Although I do feel bad for Seto, of course he did create the mess he's wallowing in now.


    Love your flashback dressing room sex, heh. fucking amongst all those mirrors too, hee hee.

    great job as always--

    much love--

    cve
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  • From ANON - dragonkitty on June 28, 2004
    OHh the plot thickens. i wonder did Yami sleep with Mahad or was it just a druken lets take off our clothes thing?
    And Seto with the nose bleeding, maybe it is just stress?
    Umm..and well idk, but this story is roX and i enjoyed this chapter very much.
    The drunken phone call was funny as hell!!
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  • From ANON - sam on June 26, 2004
    if u dont update i might to kill u i love the story mostly becaz im phyco. i use to think i knew what a love hate relationship was but u proved me wrong this is a really good story and im a drama fend so great work and i will kill u if u dont up date
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