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Reviews for Angels and Demons

By : YamiShadowcat22
  • From ANON - Kitty-yasha on July 21, 2004
    Ooo naughty parts lol another good chappie!!!! got to know the bakura in this story hehe onward to the next chappie! *hands you a cookie* good job btw :D
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  • From ANON - kitty-yasha on July 21, 2004
    and the plot thickens!!!!!! what shall happen next? *is exited to know* i shall find out by reading and reviewing the next 2 chapters posted muahahah >:D great chappie, you had me really into it. the way yami spoke is good too o.o you really gave him a story tellers voice lol
    great job! (and like i said i am reviewing every chappie) ^.~
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  • From ANON - zatken on July 20, 2004
    OMG....why did you have to leave us with an evil cliffie like that? What did he see? What did he see?

    Oh.... *pouts*w I w I have to wait for the next update. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - zatken on July 20, 2004
    Ah...the chapter where Yami explains the Illuminati was awesome :-D I liked how he explained things to Hawkins...
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  • From ANON - zatken on July 20, 2004
    Ay....the chapter's kinda short but I feel better knowing that there's a next one immediately after this. The lemon's kinda unexplored too, if you know what I mean. I can understand that brutal killers would probably not have any regard to the pleasure of their partner in bed, but it is expected that they would - to some degree - explore sex as an opportunity to express their dark sides with their partner....and even at times scare their partners since it's the fear from the other party which makes their bloods pump for more.

    But nonetheless, I will be readihe nhe next chapter. The comment above is meant to be a constructive suggestion alone, especially since I love this story of yours...
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  • From ANON - Valeria on July 11, 2004
    I hope you do realize that this story is not yours in any way, shape or form. Taking out the names of the original characters and putting in the ones from another series does NOT, in any way, change the fthatthat this is PLAGARISM. In all honesty, you could be sued for this and I hope you listen to me when I say that this should be removed immediately; at the very most re-written as to not be an EXACT retelling of Angels and Demons. No, I am not suggesting this because I don’t like yaoi. Hell, I LOVE yaoi (it's my oxygen =D) and would have preferred Vittoria to have been a man. This is most certainly not a flame. It is merely a piece of advice from a girl who does not want to see a fellow author in trouble.
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  • From ANON - Kitty-yasha on July 10, 2004
    Woot!!! i luv this fic!! it rocks! so mysterious! *eats popcorn* icant wait to see what happens! good work ^.~
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  • From ANON - zatken on July 09, 2004
    Ah, much better in the length ;-D And I like how things are unraveling for everyone. And I love Yami's character here....and felt some goosebumps of anticipation when you've mentioned in your story that Yugi's about to return to the lab.

    Please update soon ;-D
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  • From ANON - Kitty-yasha on June 25, 2004
    WOOOOO this story is getting better and better!!!!!!! XD *dies of exitement* x_x well i cant wait for next update... i think the three chapers were a brain overload o_o NOT that its a bad thing!!! its great!!!! its funny beacuse ofthe way you write, it gives anie fie feeling.. like something is coming.... which makes the suspense great!!! great job!!! i luv this fic please update soon!! *gives you plushies and chocolate* write write!!! (i write too but i've been neglecting my stories.... >.>;;)
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  • From ANON - zatken on June 23, 2004
    Ah...I wish the chapters are longer. Maybulduld've combined the three chapters into one. Otherwise, everything's good. Please update very very soon and please let me know via email when you do ;-D
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  • From ANON - zatken on June 23, 2004
    Ah, I love the descriptions! As short as this chapter was, I loved the way that it flowed....
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  • From ANON - zatken on June 23, 2004
    Ahh...thank goodness...an update. Short chapter 5 but the ending was a chiller. And you've ended the chapter with an ominous evil cliffie...how cruel of you ;-D
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  • From ANON - zatken on June 17, 2004
    Again, the chapter's way too short. At least 1000 words a chapter will make an avid fan such as me happy and giddy ;-D
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  • From ANON - zatken on June 17, 2004
    Owww....the third chapter is short **sob**

    Gotta read next chappie ;-D
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  • From ANON - zatken on June 17, 2004
    Much much better **applaud since the length of the chapter is longer than chapter one**. I love how you described Yami here (heart pounding like the rabid, lovesick fangirl that I am)....

    BTW, would it be too much to ask if you could email me if you update this story? As of now, aff.net doesn't have the capability of letting avid readers know if the authors posted something new. Pretty please?

    Thanks...and keep up with the good work...
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