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By : BishojoShadow
  • From ANON - Silveriss on April 14, 2005
    Yay! You're writing again. ^^ I'm still waiting for my happy ending...

    Otherwise, wonderful job, as always.
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  • From ANON - Kotori on April 14, 2005
    ohh poor Malik...hope his friends save him!
    Please keep going!
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  • From ANON - ShadowSlayer (Too lazy to log in) on March 31, 2005
    Have I ever told you that you are my absolute favorite yaoi author?! This was an awsome story and I can't wait for you to finish it! I want to find out what happens to Ryou! Not to meantion what's going to happen with Joey and Kaiba... I can so see them ending up together... big happy ending... =^-^=
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  • From ANON - anonymous on March 28, 2005
    Very cool..update soon!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Malik on February 16, 2005
    Hi again!
    I wrote a review before, but when I did this, I have read only two chapters of your story.
    *baka desu*
    Now I give you a longer comment than then ^.^
    This story is very interesting including the length of the chapters. The first of them are very long >
    < I haven’t read something like this before.. I also wonder that you can upload such a story. In Germany you haven’t to upload this. They delete the story. >_>...)
    I would really like to know what has happened in Maliks past.. I hope you write this quick and upload it in the next time. ^^ Please.. let Malik more suffer than Ryou and Yugi together >.< *beg*
    P l e a s e!!!
    I think you`ve write good, a lot and in a way exciting! You’ve got many ideas and that are aspects I like ^^
    But now.. I beg again to write quick and go.
    I think in this review are a lot of grammatical mistakes.. Please don’t look at them. I’m from Germany and I’m not good in English >< If I would be better, I would write more than this short comment..
    Bye bye
    Greez
    Malik




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  • From ANON - Silveriss on February 16, 2005
    This better have a happy ending or I'm going to cry even more than I have already. That was absolute AGONY to read through. You're a wonderful-terrible author. I could totally feel their pain. I don't know what else to say. Um... the formatting typos were rather bothersome. All in all you have excellent grammar and spelling. Still, you might want to keep a closer eye on being redundant in a sentence. Saying someone's name at the beginning of a sentence and then repeating it at the end can throw a reader off. Still, great job and write more soon. As I said, I need a happy ending. No way you can torture your characters (no matter that they belong to someone else and you're just borrowing them for now) and then not let them find SOME measure of happiness at the end. ~THX~ Silveriss
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  • From on February 10, 2005
    OMG! *glomp tackle hug* You updated! You finally updated! Yay! ^-^. I'm so happy you did! Great job on the chapter! Keep up the wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - Malik on February 10, 2005
    Hi ^.^
    It was long, but now I've read it. ^^
    It is a super fic and I wish you would write more
    The couples are super and you write very good
    Greez
    Malik
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  • From on September 12, 2004
    Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update this fic soon! I can't stand the suspense anymore! Please continue so you don't leave us all hanging? I can't wait to read what happens next so please update this!
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  • From Razzleteddy on August 04, 2004
    *waves*

    Hi!

    I'm so glad I’ve found your stories here also, that's so cool :) I was sad when your account was deleted off FF.net :( But anyways I found you once more so I'm happy :)

    Anyways..

    I love the story! wonderful! I'm glad the assholes got the crap beat out them finally, Yay! Bakura, Marik, Yami, *laughs* Poor Ryou and Yugi I hope they'll turn out fine and too traumatized by the horrible ordeal they went through and all. Anyway.. keep up the great work and update when you can ok. Read ya later :)

    ~Razzleteddy~
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  • From ANON - WIEJ! on July 29, 2004
    I never likes the fic

    ...

    I ALWAYS LOVED IT!!!!!! :D
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  • From ANON - WIEJ! on July 09, 2004
    NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

    Sthosthose innocent!!!!!!!!!

    KILL ERIC, SAVE RYOU!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Deb on June 30, 2004
    Aww im glad you're continuing! I thought you weren't going to! *breathes sigh of relief*
    Great chapter. Poor Yund Rnd Ryou, the thought of yug having sex with his father is horrible....
    I hope Yams, Kura and Marik find them soonies!
    Please update soon.....*puppy eyes*
    Much Luv
    Debs xxx
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  • From yaoiqueen on December 21, 2003
    Well it took me two days to finish it, but i'm not saying that i didn't enjoy it. I absolutly loved it. I wanted to jump in there and help out even though i knew that was impossible. I hope charles gets his. and his little friends too. Anyway i hope you update soon . no pressure or anything.
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  • From ANON - silverdragon_0120 on December 14, 2003
    ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DO NOT BASTARDIZE SETO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE IS NOT LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS A VERY DEPRESSING STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I haven't read the last chapter, but I will. I hate it when people make Seto look like the bad guy and I hate it even more when they write stories that have Seto doing something he wouldn't. I repeat : DO NOT BASTARDIZE SETO!!!!!!!! There are too many people who like/love him and besidees, es, he is definately gay, BUT he is not a shitty bastard like you have painted him in this fic. Seto is obsessed with Yugi/Yami and could become friends with Ryou/Bakura because of their similarities. Don't insult the beautiful genius of Seto Kaiba.
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