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Reviews for The Other Half

By : tsutsuji
  • From nikki7716 on March 11, 2008
    oh goooooodness this is good. there really aren't enough seme ryou stories. and this one is written so well. i love how much ryou and bakura love each other even if they are fucking kaiba. :D and that ryou is so talented. whew...good. stuff.

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  • From sweetciel on March 16, 2007
    OMG!!!!! *hastily wipes away nosebleed* That was HOT! I bow before you. Please take my soul to the place that you get these lemony thoughts!
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  • From NihilEtNemo on June 10, 2005
    Wow, that was good. Did you say that was your first lemon? Impressive... mine was kinda... lame. ^^ very nice. Uke Seto... YAY!!!
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  • From ANON - CrimsonDevil on August 21, 2004
    It seems to me that, in the entire collection of stories that fill the YGO sections, there's very few that I can enjoy. Fne rne reason or another. Your Steam fic led me to this one, as the...indulgence left over from your writing left me rather.....
    Inspired. Anyhow, I can understand how reviews really bost confidence level, and I hope this one encourages you to persure the secksiness that is smutty fandom!
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  • From ANON - Michela on July 20, 2004
    Initially, I believed the "pairing" of this fanfic to be extremely obscure, yet it was compiled beautifully. This is by far one of the most skillfully written fanfic I have read on adultfanfon.non.net (REJOICE, FOR I NOTED NO BASIC GRAMMAR MISTAKES! On this site, this is a cause for celebration. XD) This work is wonderfully addicting to the reader and planned superbly. My only trouble was the use of simple words such as, "ass;" within the flowery style of your writing, those words slightly distract. Aside from that, this fic has a magnificent quality far surpassing most others.
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on July 10, 2004
    Oh. Um... Wow. Very, very wonderful lemon. No, wonderful STORY. I know it PWP, but man...it was terrific.
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  • From ANON - Haruka666 on July 06, 2004
    That was definitely one of the best lemons I have ever read! It was not only incredibly sexy, but also very beautifully written. I loved the way you depicted Ryou as the seme, submissively even due to the fact that he was on top. Great job! I hope you will write more! ^_^
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