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Reviews for Regret

By : BishojoShadow
  • From ANON - Olivia on November 13, 2005
    ALTHOUGHIT MADE ME SAD WHEN SETO KILLED HIMSELF.

    I HATE CHARACTER DEATHS.
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  • From ANON - Olivia on November 13, 2005
    I LOVE THIS FUCKIN' STORY!

    YOU HAVE TO MAKE ANOTHER ONE!

    MAKE ONE LIKE THIS ONE, BUT DIFFERENT!

    PLEASE?!
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  • From ANON - Horizont on September 29, 2004
    I started reading this fic quite a while ago and didn't realize it was still updated... then I began reding it again starting with part 9 or so... and now that I reaches chapter 20 I figured it was time for a review.
    BRILLIANT WORK!
    I enjoyed reading it a lot!
    But since this is not just a Love-It-Update-Soon-review I also have something to criticize. You're doing a great work and I do think it's up to us readers to help to do your job even better - if possible. ^_^x
    The sex between Marik and Ryou doesn't have any progress during the story. There isn't anything new happening. I stopped counting how often Marik had Ryou tied to the bed just the way he did in chapter 20. Ryou always loves to bottom and Marik loves to be on top. A few blow jobs here and there and whenever Marik wants it. Ryou never objects, probably cuz he unconciously remembers that not doing Mariks will never was successful. I hope you work on that and let Ryou take some initiative himself. And if onl only that he tells Marik 'no' once in a while.

    That's it, I'm done!
    Ganbatte ne!
    ~Horizont
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