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Reviews for A Not So Innocent Joke

By : freewater
  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2004
    Ahhhhhhhh how could u just leave it at that!? Omg! Its such a good fic. I've never really thougth about Seto/Otagi but now that i do........damn its hot! Sure Otagi is being a big of a ass but youd be pissed if Seto left u for someone else too. Plllllllllllease update soon!
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  • From ANON - nicky on December 20, 2004
    Alright... honestly? I think I can't make it over Chrsitmas without another update here... so...
    I'm gonna try those puppy dog eyes again...
    *blinksadorablyupatfreewaterwithlovelyhugebrownorbsbegging"pweeeeeeaaaaaaaseeeeee"*
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  • From ANON - murrr on December 17, 2004
    better update soon or i'll shoot your mom and your dog
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  • From ANON - nicky on December 15, 2004
    oh my goodness...
    what's gonna happen??????????????????????????????????
    please update soon!
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  • From ANON - chibikitten on December 14, 2004
    oh man, oh man, oh man..... I love this story!!! This is so cool, the plot, the story, Ryou going evil ass on Jou and Seto, although Seto was a bit meany on Jou at the beginning *scolds scolds*, but this is going so well, and Ryou's gonna tell Yami!!!! I can't wait, you gotta update, I wanna know what's gonna happen.... What's Seto gonna do?? What is JOU gonna do???....... What is JOU'S DAD gonna do if he finds out!?!?!?!? I need to chatch my breath, thsi is too much for me.... *breaths deeply (just breath, breathing is good, breathing is your friend....)* ok, so I loved the way you twisted Ryou into an evil bastard, I was a bit weird out at first but I gotta admit it, he's better mean than good, his bare looks on the show don't make him look very good ya know, and Seto..... THANK YOU!!! Thank you for not turning Seto into one of those fic invented tough guys that turn into softies as soon as they fall inlove, I love you alone for that, I mean one of the coolest stuff about Seto is that he's a tough ass kind of guy, without becoming an actual bastard (sometimes)
    So anyways, like you already imagine I loved your fic and I can't wait for your next update.... make it soon.... please....
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  • From ANON - anonymous_fan on December 13, 2004
    OMG you simply MUST update! PLEASE I BEG YOU! Dont leave with such a thrilling cliffhanger! lol. i cant wait for the next chapte.....I hope all goes well in the end for jou and kaiba . theyre such a good couple and it seems like kaiba is actually starting to love jou now *sigh* so dreamy lol pls keep up the great story its fantastic!
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  • From ANON - Rachel Dracon on December 05, 2004
    Whoo hoo, I'm really getting into the story now, can't wait for Joey's reaction to the tape! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - T on December 05, 2004
    AAAH! I can't STAND the suspense!!...WHAT A GOOD fic...everyday I come back to it, hoping for an update..XD..aawwr...it's gonna be so sad....u.u;;...how will Kaiba even be able to make up for what's going to happen because of Otogi?..x.x;;...that bastard >.
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  • From ANON - Setsu on December 02, 2004
    OMG! Otogi is evil!! is he going to try and take andvantage of Joey? will Seto be able to save his and joey's relationship? Or will Joey save the relation ship? >.< Gah Update soon.
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  • From ANON - SetoKaibaWheeler *too lazy to sign in* on November 25, 2004
    FINALLY YOU PUT IN THE LEMON!!!!!!! HEHE, ANYWAYZ, PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! IF I'M NOT REVIEWING, I'M STILL READING AND WILL ALWAYS BE BEHIND YOUR BACK! UPDATE!
    -PS: the same thing on www.fanfiction.net
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  • From ANON - nicky on November 24, 2004
    wow, how those puupy dog eyes work... :D
    uhm... well chap. 15+16 are great. I was really surprised by jou's dad... I mean, I'm glad and all, but one day he's nice then he's mean and drinks and then suddenly, even though he's drunk, he's nice again... can't wait to see what's going to happen next with the whole drinking and accepting issue... please let him be nice to jou, he so deserves it *begs*
    oh, and seto... wow... actually caring about jou... and getting caught at it... thehehe ( he deserves it too!) and what a wonderful... uhm... lime? i get confused with all the different notions... you know what i mean anyway, don't you?
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  • From ANON - nicky on November 22, 2004
    I love this story. seriously.
    I read "an innocent joke" first and liked that one, but this is even better! It's all exiting and cute and fresh and... I don't know what to say...
    I really loved the idea of the food fight and the whole background story about moky and also the info about jou's dad.
    please update soon! *imitateshoneybrownpuppydogeyeslookingupatyou*
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  • From on November 10, 2004
    Love it so well, and i do agree with you making duke look like a jerk ~_~
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  • From ANON - DirtyD on November 04, 2004
    Ip fop forgeting to leave a review, did I remember to review A Innocent Joke?/? I like all your plot lines, the details and story chapters aren't always excellent but never the less your story as well as character writing is always a treat. Okay and the lack of lemons miff me but not everyone is good at those (myself included.) All and all I enjoyed your story, even Mr. Jounouchi's character is precoolcool!
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  • From ANON - Eddie on November 04, 2004
    YAY!!!! Fantastic as the rest can't wait for more...And was it Otogi ( spelling?) that ran Mokuba over?
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