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Reviews for Yugi's Heart

By : KasumiAlphax
  • From ANON - yaoigoddess on September 23, 2004
    OMFG!!!!!!

    How could you do tht to Yugi and Yami! Especially me!!??

    You have to update this as soon as possible! I'll update it for you if your computer is giving you troubles! But you have to update soon!
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on September 10, 2004
    ow bet that writers block has to hurt and please tell me that Ryu isnt doing what i think hes doing i mean Yami is going to kill him if he finds out i mean heck i bet even Marik would be happy to get involved in this shadow game if he found out this time huh well gtg now keep up the great work and i hope yugi is going to be safe from this point forword but as they always say only time will telll gtl gtg now TTFN TA TA FOR NOW ^___^
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  • From ANON - yaoigoddess on August 28, 2004
    What do ya mean 'not the best ending'???

    I think that rocked!! I still don't trust Ryu, but that was a great lemon!!

    EEEE!!!!!!!!! Yugi singing!!! Remember? Yugi....in a catsuit.....a leather catsuit!!! EEE!!!!!!!

    This was a great chapter!!! You have to update this one soon!! Can't wait!

    (p.s. he's still number 1)
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  • From ANON - Lys on August 26, 2004
    the thing with the reviews is rather immature of you, don't you think?
    what are you writing for? because you love writing or to be praised?

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  • From ANON - chanel on August 22, 2004
    i though that your story was good but,you made some of the people who did'nt matter(like the cab driver and the bartender)have lines.Your story would have been better.
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  • From ANON - DaRkNess oF VAiN on August 22, 2004
    This is ok. Some of it could use work and there is alot of OOC.
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  • From ANON - Cherazz on August 20, 2004
    Aww! Poor Yugi! And poor Yami, he must feel just as bad:( I really like this story! It has a very unique plot to it and I'm very intriuged by the idea of Yugi having to have sex with a Vampire. Very interesting...And poor Serenity:( I hope she's ok. I can't see why more people do not read this, I really like it. *pats author on back* And btw, I love YaoiGoddess' work too, she is amazing:) Update soon:)
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  • From ANON - megumi on August 07, 2004
    Hey, it's me again, I just finished reading all three chapters. Wow, this fic is pretty random, it made me laugh at parts i probably shouldn't have ^^;;
    Wow, Yugi and Yami going at it like that, with no foreplay or anything. Why would Yugi be nervous about being on top and not be nervous about his first time ever having sex. And they never ask each other "do you want to have sex?" it just kinda happens. Ryu d't e't explain WHY Yugi has to become a vampire to fend off the Tengu, isn't there another way? Why is Yugi more concerned about having sex with a vampire than the fact that he has to become a vampire? What 'C 'Chinese Vampire'? How do they differ from 'other' types of Vampires? Why is nothing ever explained? You've managed to OOC everyone and make this more AU than you probably intended. I know you haven't seen the show in a while, but that's no exscuse for all your little plot holes.

    I enjoy laughing at it even though you didn't intend for this to be comedic, it is ^^;


    Don't write serious fics, i like the ones where you intend to be funny much better ~_^
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  • From ANON - megumi on August 07, 2004
    It's pretty good so far (I've only read the 1st chp.) ^^;;
    It's just why would Yami and Yugi randomly have sex like that?
    I mean, if Yugi really was a virgin, he would atleast been a little nervous and/or hesitant.
    The way you wrote it makes it seem like they'd done it befo(may(maybe even many times)

    Anyways, there were also some things that were kinda random, but oh well
    it was overall enjoyable, and I can't wait til i finish reading all the chapters
    you have posted ^^

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  • From ANON - yaoigoddess on August 06, 2004
    O______________O!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Wah! Poor Yugi! It's not fair! T____T

    I'm gonna go cry now.......well maybe later.

    This is getting really good. You have to post a new chapter soon. I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Ok, back to crying. *runs off crying*
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  • From ANON - yaoigoddess on August 05, 2004
    T_T This story is good, so why you stop? Ok so you told me, but still. T_T

    I hope you get back to this story soon, or at least write a new one soon. You're a good author. Pwease don't leave me waiting. *hugs* Byez! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Karrissa-chan on July 31, 2004
    Wow! That was awesome! Please continue! Poor young innocent little Yugi! Yami leaving him out on the dancefloor alone like that..!! *Frown.* I don't like where this is going! For poor little Yugi that is! *Smiles.* I like how the story is going though! Please continue soon!
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