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By : MarikIshtar77

From ANON - Deb on September 25, 2004
Excellent chapter huni!!!
God i love this story! Im going to re-read again hehe!
I loved the whole Marik/Kura stuff! And yes you're right Marik is a slut! But we love him like that hehehehe ^__~
Cant wait to see whats going to happen next!! Bakura is so cute!
LOL when he stole the sunglasses that was excellent lmao!
Wow im just imagining him with dark glasses on now! WOW hotness! The white hair and dark sunglasses! Yum!
e ANe ANYWAY!
Chat to u soonies huni!!!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
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From ANON - Arias5 on September 25, 2004
*catches rose...but it misses and hits her in the eye* X_< ....ow....
wow! another update to this wonderful story...the only reason i come to AFF.net is to read your stories...yours are the only good ones i see here...
i loved Marik ..even though he's a slut...but a sexxy one! ^.^ i feel like going to a waterpark now...hmm...maybe i should go to one...anywa
I'm
I'm glad you're feeling better...hope you can update soon!
*~take cares*~
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From ANON - Kat on September 25, 2004
*cheers* I'm so glad you're getting better! Ooooo loved the chapter! Cracked up at the slide part. The visual of Ba fla flying through the air is just too damned funny! Gods, could Yami be anymore of a drama queen?! Umm, don't answer that. Please don't answer that! *G* Yami mooning everyone was just effing hysterical. Bakura's view on golf and his golfing habits are priceless. I gotta remember what he did the next time someone drags me out miniture golfing....

Feel better fast!

Kat
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From ANON - Nightmare on September 24, 2004
You�re so bitter Bakura, I�m not surprised you were banned from Hell and sent back to this mortal realm.�

A proud smile snuck across Bakura�s lips.

�Heh...I know, I�m the only being that ever existed who can say they were kicked out of Hell for taking over.�

Bakura took hell over??? cool. Stupid Mairk and his stupid sluteness but yeah really cool and it was nice to see that Bakura can still 'accqurie' things he likes
please update this story soon

Lots of Love from Nightmare

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From ANON - dragonkitty on September 24, 2004
hehe...i forgot about this little gem of yours.^^ Why is Mrik such a slut? lol he keeps things interestinng. Yami has to know something happened...
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From ANON - Tanya Maxwell on September 14, 2004
Marik is sexy. Bakura is hot. But you already knew that. Ooh, can't wait to see who's gettin' naked at theerpaerpark. I love where the story's going - Bakura's influence kinda rubbing off on Yugi and all. And the sarcasm!!! :D:D Sarcasm is my giongion.

*snuggles Bakura*

Great job!

Tanya~
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From ANON - angelus_2040 on September 04, 2004
I had to go to youth group once, it wasn't to bad, but i forced my friends to pay me to go. But going to Sunday morning church, well can you say torture. But now i kthatthat apparently i'm going to hell. Ah well you get that anywayz this is really good can't wait for the lemons *perverted grin* and i like the pairings Bakura/Yugi is more different then the usual ones well that is if you are going that way uhh yeah...

Update soon ^_^
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From ANON - angelstarfire_hikarist on August 25, 2004
Oh man... I'm really feeling sorry for Yuugi... *snickers* He's got a hell of a deal, and if he's gonna charm Bakura, he's got a hell of a trek ahead of him, too. ^__^ I'm enjoying this fic a great deal, and pretty much explintointo rainbow-joy ever time I see an update... (only a slight exaduradion... pardon my spelling..). This is excellent reading. *glomp*
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From ANON - Arias5 on August 19, 2004
yes! you updated another chappie to this kick ass story! you rock! ^_^
I'm starting to luv all the pairing...especially yami/marik.....t...they're great! ^.^
hehe...waterpark...hey aren't kids at waterparks...so if Marik is nekkie..then won't the kids be ..um..tramatized...? o.O
kuku...i'd love to see that! ...Marik nekkie...ahh! torture! Now i must wait & anticipate until you update....v_v
~*peace*~
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From ANON - Anakh on August 18, 2004
I've been reading your stories for awhile now (Or, more appropriatly, stalking your stories obsessively as to bookmark it under ever AOL account name I have..), and I only just NOW found the review button. x3 I've been meaning to review these buggers for awhile now.

I ADORE this story. Deffinetly feel sorry for 'Kura-Kun, tho.. *Giggle.* I believe Marik is right by saying he needs to get laid. *Snerk.*

..and, as other's have said, do we sense mild Bakura/Yuugi in the wings? Gasp. *Grin.* But.. if no one minds me repeating a question.. just what IS up with that bowling ball..? That darn thing.. =3

Anyway, keep up the great work, and I look forward to your next chapter! =D=D!
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From ANON - dragonkitty on August 18, 2004
OMG I love this story. Bakura is a riot. I almost feel bad for him, having to deal with Marik and Yami all touchy feely. And then Ryou got somebody. -_- It must suck. Well there is always Yugi. I just think that is cute! ^^
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From ANON - Nightmare on August 18, 2004
Good chaper I liked it. All these wierd relationships its just so crazy. Why is Bakura being such a bitch to Ryou. Please have some Ryou/Bakura at somint,int, by the ds ods o 'Ku 'Kura could teach Ryou to 'be a man' *winks*

Luv Nightmare
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From ANON - Camille on August 18, 2004
Cute story! Is little Ryo falling for Bakura, or worried? Will we see Bakura kicking Marik's ass? Will Yuugi get involved with Bakura? (Can't see this). Anyway, keep going and I'll be looking for this story because this place has no alerts!!!!
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From ANON - Deb on August 18, 2004
Fricking great story huni!!!!!!
Love bakura (you) in this hehehe!
Marik is so funny! lol!
The waterpark sounds so hilarious, i cant wait to read that!!!
Please update again soonies!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
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From ANON - angelstarfire_hikarist on August 17, 2004
*chuckles* I feel sorry for Bakura... he'll have temptation and revulshion all in one house... all night. ^^;;; Wow... *more chuckling* I can't wait to see what he does... and I've never really pictured Bakura with Yuugi, so I'm very anxious to see how this turns out. ^^
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