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By : MarikIshtar77

From ANON - Terri on November 26, 2004
You know..I have read that chapter a couple times..and it just keeps getting funier!!..^_^..Anyways..can't wait for the next update!! This my all time fav fan fic it is so great!
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From ANON - Ralphiere on November 22, 2004
The last three chapters were decadently enjoyable! Love the music, love the mahem! Keep it going for all it's worth!
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From ANON - LadyGrey on November 22, 2004
Heya, I really enjoy your story -- and honestly, I didn't think I would! I've been following it since the beginning though, and I have to say I'm intrigued by your pairings. I thought I'd tell you that your last few chapters have been posted screwy, tho -- Ch. 16 "I Hate Every..." was cut off after six paragraphs (right at the beginning) and Ch. 17 "Afraid" was cut off right after Ryou asked Bakura to make the pain stop. Ch. 18 "Red Light, Green Light" seems to be fully there with author's notes at the end, but I'd like to see the rest of the other two chapters. Also, I know you have a beta already, but honestly I'd like to help supplement that person's editing -- I'm a working editor and could help your story. Email me if you're interested -- no offense intended to your current beta, but two sets of eyes are better than one. And I really do like your story, and just want to help. Keep updating, please; you seem to be the only author I'm currently reading that can update.

~,~'~LadyGrey~,'~{@
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From ANON - War-chan on November 20, 2004
I've JUST read your new chpt.(18)and I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! BAKURA'S JUST THE GREATEST!!!!!!!!!!!!
Is he going to be KEEPING the Mil. Rod!?! What about more Marik, you've got to have more Marik!!!!
(poor,poor Malik having to read that odd book to Ryou*POOR Ryou!*)
Yami's finally with Yugi? Or is it just an act? *hope not*
PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE, ITS GETTING HARDER TO WAIT ALREADY, I JUST 'LOVE' YOUR STORYS!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!

Ja ne
YOURBigFan
Miss War-chan ^_^
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From ANON - War-chan on November 20, 2004
I've JUST read your new chpt.(18)and I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! BAKURA'S JUST THE GREATEST!!!!!!!!!!!!
Is he going to be KEEPING the Mil. Rod!?! What about more Marik, you've got to have more Marik!!!!
(poor,poor Malik having to read that odd book to Ryou*POOR Ryou!*)
Yami's finally with Yugi? Or is it just an act? *hope not*
PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE, ITS GETTING HARDER TO WAIT ALREADY, I JUST 'LOVE' YOUR STORYS!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!

Ja ne
YOURBigFan
Miss War-chan ^_^
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From ANON - Arias5 on November 19, 2004
*gasp* oh no, baku has the ring again..hehe...now this story is getting evil! w00t!
Weevil & Rex are stupid, annoying, ugly, & my least favorite characters...>_>
hehe...i love the whole radio gig that baku did to yami...hehe it was great!
who will confess their love?...c'mon, stop the anticipate...update, so we can know !
*~peace~*
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From ANON - Liz on November 19, 2004
YES!! New chappie! I never had time to review before since I read this before I left for school in the morn' and then I would be stuck with college essays >_< But this story is awesome and makes me live through another boring day at school ^_^ Haaaa, Bakura's great... ^_^
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From ANON - Nightmare on November 19, 2004
Cool chapie, I think we all would have done what Bakura did if we had the chance. So hows confessing true love, It had better not be Bakura hes just a better person when hes single (if sending people to the shadow realm makes you better, which it dose in my books) so yeah update see ya

Nightmare
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From ANON - bloodytenshi 07 on November 18, 2004
Why are you not updatign I love this story please please update I kinda only come to adult fanfiction when tehre are good storys and your story is good!!!!!!!
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From ANON - War-chan on November 15, 2004
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
*PLEASE!!!!!*

Ja ne
YOURBigFan
Miss War-chan ^_^

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From ANON - Elle-FaTe2x1 on November 09, 2004
I had a friend who's appendix burst the second week of school, I feel sorry for Ryou-chan. Great chappy! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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From ANON - Arias5 on November 09, 2004
yay! more chappies!! and poor ryou..going through the same pain that you went through...i just hope that my appendix doesn't burst >_
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From ANON - Nightmare on November 09, 2004
AH poor Ryou that hurts like hell, but at least he isn't going to die is he??

The doctor said that your appendix most likely burst, I remember when that happened to me. Too make a long story short, I ended up cutting them out myself. I bled like a stuck pig, it was a rather gruesome ordeal.�

Ryou made a sour face.

�I don�t think I needed to know that

Not the best thing Bakura vould have said to Ryou but at least it will all be over soon.

Luv ya

htmahtmare
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From ANON - Silvershadowfire on November 08, 2004
Why do I have the sick and distinct feeling that Bakura finding the ring again is not a good thing?

Excellent story so far. I like what you've done with everyone - except Yami. I have a thing about my fav bishie being an ass. But, if the story is good, I can put up with it. Anyway, keep going!
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From ANON - Tanya Maxwell on November 08, 2004
OMG! Did Bakura sleep with Marik? And may I say that I just *adore* the title of chapter 16... made me laugh for about 15 minutes or so before I started to read. Gosh, Carrie and Johnny sound familiar, gotta love bar brawls ;) Hope Ryou gets better soon... here's some balloons for him and some ice for Bakura, hehehe.

More soon
Tanya~

PS - Dr. Neil, didja used to be a musician??
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