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By : kerrysaulters
  • From ANON - mofaf on September 07, 2004
    forgot.....love the chappie...can't wait to see the next one
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  • From ANON - mofaf on September 07, 2004
    hmmmm.....Yami, Joey, Malik and Merik are my choices for fainting still.....too bad Bakura can't faint too....lol

    cravings.....sashimi with raspberry jam, tartare with cucumber cream

    names.....Josephine and Seth

    will send my title suggestions.......lol
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  • From ANON - Laika on September 06, 2004
    I love your story so far!!! Will you update soon? Pwease? *insert Liz's puppy dog eyes* If she were to do that I would have to say she gets it from Joey. ^___^ Umm sorry I can't help you out with the names I was never good. Do you want Japanese names or english names? Oh and one more question when will we find out the spell/curse thingy that they put on Yami?

    Darknessmiko always and forever Laika de Lioncourt
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  • From ANON - 26no on September 06, 2004
    hehe, um i had an idea for a title for the sequil ^^ how about SPIRIT'S BABY lol cuz technically (sry for Sp) Yami is a spirit ^^ so ya anyway and oh ya thanks for the whole delivery room thingy i really apreciate it! lol wutz weird is that some teachers at my shcool is going to have her baby around that time! ^0^
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  • From ANON - Sushi on September 05, 2004
    I'm really enjoying this fiction. You do so well.

    As for payback, my first thought was triplets. Of course, bad mood swings that maybe have Yami in tears or something. I think it would be funny for Yugi to take care of him and Yami have sort of a change of character, but that's just the first impression. I'll try to think of something better.

    I'm so excited for Joey/Seto
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  • From ANON - FuKouHei (2 lazy to sign in) on September 05, 2004
    It's good. But.......Malik is the hikari. I kinda got confused while reading. ^_^
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  • From ANON - OwaranaimonoAite on September 04, 2004
    Yeah, I'm glad you're happy to abbreviate. ^^() Is the shadow realm good for a pregnant Seto? If Ryou's not careful... demons will replace the kids. O_o I don't know a boy's name, but maybe Roselee (either first or middle) for the girl. Ooooo. Right after Seto has the kids, Yami suddenly like... falls over with pain and it's like what....? Yay for more strang cravings and grossness!!!!! *claps*
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  • From ANON - heyy13 on September 04, 2004
    Yay im in the birthing room. Woot! *cheers* I get to hug the babyy. :y. :D And yes i believe it could get corneyer.
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  • From ANON - 26no on September 03, 2004
    ^___^ it was still gooood, yay go u, i don't think anyone's ever had any guts to turn the coldhearted CEO pregnant, i soongrangradulate u! i really think u should have the twins be a boy and a girl, lol that way mokuba/liz won't be out numbered eh? as for the cravings (sardines, apple sause, and peanut butter) lol sounds horrible but it makes one hell of a craving! UPDATE SOON i'm really loving this fic!
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  • From ANON - mofaf on September 02, 2004
    hmmmm....craving suggestion.....chocolate marshmallow ripple icecream with caramel and caviar on top....with a side of mixed sweet and dill pickles with strawberry sauce and whipped cre
    wa
    wanna see a boy and a girl.....
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  • From ANON - heyy13 on September 02, 2004
    I want him to have a boy and a girl. That would be cool. And i still go for raw mucles and cream as a craving. ><

    Write a new chappy soon, heyy13
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  • From ANON - heyy13 on September 02, 2004
    This story rocks. i only discovered it yesterday and its realy good. i think Seto should have a girl... I cant think of any names... And i think Yami and Malik should faint. That would be funny. Oh and make him crave raw mucles with whipped cream on top. That is what my mum craved when she was pregnant with my older bro. Ive noticed that youve left out the t in Seto afew times.. Is that intentional? And you have a number of spelling errors. And one time you put the words the rong way around. ^.^ But thats ok. The story still rocks. ^.^

    Write a new chappy quickly, heyy13.
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  • From ANON - OwaranaimonoAite on September 02, 2004
    Yay payback!!!!!! I'm sure that by the end of the term, either Seto or Jou will be bald. From pulling out each others (or their own) hair. Bald, or Jou's going to be black and blue from mood swings... *imagines Jou as a punching bag for Seto* Well excellent chapter! You didn't sneak 2 in on me this time! ^-^ Can't wait for Chapter 9! Sorry about the mix up from earlier. I tend to get confuzed easily, and switch people around early in the morning, when reviewing at... oh... 12:30 AM. -___- Well update soon!
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  • From ANON - Saelbu on September 01, 2004
    I love this fanfic, update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - candy cane on August 31, 2004
    hey i think that your should have joey faint and maybe yami too. as for the baby/ies challenge i think seto should have triplets: one looks like joey, one looks like seto, and the third looks like the two combined...they could be named (seto look alike)seth, (joey look alike) jono, (seto/joey together)alex(i just love that name)...but chose any names that you wish...i think it would be neat if you used seth and jono because those are seto's and joey's names from ancient egypt
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