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By : Aten
  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on November 08, 2004
    You're really gonna use my idea? Yay! ^.^ I can't wait to see how you will get it to work. *sighs* Just thinking about what those three little chibis went through and are going through now makes me so sad whenever I think about it. I hope thet bet better soon. Let's just hope that for how long they are like this it doesn't have a toll on everyone else.
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  • From ANON - Kat on November 07, 2004
    *squishes Jaimen*

    The corof hof his lips curled into a weak smile. “Rob-----*pant*----bie.”
    Okay, all together now: AWWWWWWW that's so cute!!!

    “I was sure he wouldn’t wake up. I was going to tell the family to start making final arrangements today. I didn’t think Aten would mak.”
    .”
    *sniffles* Nope, can't happen. I don't want it to happen....

    Marik held up his Rod. “We do not have to stop!”
    The officers stopped their pursuit in a trance.
    Wow, Marik's Rod sure is handy... *blinks*

    “I-I-I’ll wait…for the next one.”
    Marik narrowed his eyes. “Good move.”
    *laughs* that poor doctor's gonna need clean shorts.

    Marik nodded. “I tried waking her up yesterday before her alarm and SHE sent ME to the Shadow Realm! ME! Luckily I had my Rod so I appeared back in her room.”
    *laughs hysterically* Seee, I said his Rod is handy!

    Ryou raised an eyebrow. “’Magical?’ When I discovered it, it didn’t look like magic.”
    Marik sighed. “It was a magic mess.”
    Oh yeah *says sarcastically* It's magic all right. *laughs*

    "Yet, once a month I still crave it.”
    *laughs* Ryou needs beef jerky and Marik has to have chocolate! Sign them both up for 'Togi's chick flicks! *ducks*

    *snorts* Father Vidello... boooo *hiss*

    Seto stood outside with his eyes closed and rubbed his temples, mentally trying to drown out the sound of screams.
    Poor Seto...

    *snickers* Watching financial shows on tv is not quality time! *smirks*
    hhhhhhhhh so that's why Hayden regressed to that stage.... Poor thing. It's so sad.

    “I haven’t had a living nerve in five thousand years, Chapman. You know that!”
    Chapman smirked. “Has it been that long? Time flies, huh?”
    *laughs* Gods, those two...

    I like the way Dr. Chapman deals with Robbie. That's just fantastic!

    “Aten doesn’t have them. che che-cked.”
    *snorks*
    “I kee-p c-cooties away from At-Aten.”
    *snickers*
    “You keep up that splendid job you are doing, Robbie. Because we all know that ‘Cootie-Patrol’ is a dangerous job.”
    *laughs hysterically*

    “I’m not leaving you, Aten. Daddy’s going to stay right here beside you…..always.”
    awwwwww *sniffles and blows nose* That's so damned sweet.

    Bakura crossed his legs in an automatic reflex.
    *laughs*

    Bakura stood up. “I better go check on Ryou and M. I’. I’m going to call the hospital and see how Chibi Marik is doing.”
    Bakura left the room.
    Malik scooped Aria’s half-cooked eggs onto a plate and heard the buzzer on the dryer go off. “Laundry’s done!”
    *cackles* Yup, Aria's in the room. Everyone run!!

    No mustard.
    No ketchup.
    Aria returned to hert. “t. “I’m in deep shit.”
    *falls over howling* I love it!!

    Kat
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  • From ANON - Caterfree10 on November 06, 2004
    Konichiiwa!

    Aww, poor Aten can't speak English temperarily. =( Poor little guy... Anyways, Hoo boy. Aria's gunna get in trouble when Malik finds out what she did to the Ketchup and Mustard (Not that imind about the mustard, but that's beside the point MUSTARD EVIL!!! *hisses* mustard gross! *Ahem*) And oh yeah! Anzu bashing in next chappie! ^_______^ can't wait! ^_^ Until then, I have to go now. Update quicker!

    Ja Ne! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Caterfree10 on November 05, 2004
    Konichiiwa!

    YAY!!!! Aten ish awake! YAY!!!! *Throws confetti everywhere* ^_____^
    Kyasrin: Finally! A chapter in hich Cat is happy after! HOORAY!!! NO MORE RUNNING AROUND!!!!! ^_____^
    Caterfree: and yeah! Go Aria! Teach Yami who the hell is boss! My three words for Yami....k ofk off bitch" *Ring* Ooh! Idea! How 'bout the next time Someone who's against Yami comes into contact with him, they say that phrase? It would be SOO funny I can garentee! =D Anywise,gotta go now. I think I'm gunna puke again soon (Having all six people in the same house who are all sick with the same disease is NOT funcan can assure you...) *Runs for restroom*

    Ja Ne! ^_~
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on November 04, 2004
    OMG! Aten's awake!!!! The poor little guy went through so much that I didn't expect to have him wake up for a few more chappies. O.O You actually used my PMSing Aria against Atem idea? I was so happy when I read that. You made me feel special. *hands Aten a Winged Dragon of Ra plushie* Get better sweetie. Oh, and THANK YOU fir having Seto catch Joey with his drinking. I was going nuts reading about him drinking and not having Seto catch him. I kept yelling at my screen to have Seto catch him. Now I am calm. Oh, new idea. Serenity should face the wrath of Yami Aten. That would be a fun thing to see...since we now know that his Yami is crazy evil. *patiently waits for your next update*
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  • From ANON - Kat on November 03, 2004
    “Try me! I’ve got brains, I’ve got looks, and I’ve got deadly PMS! DO. NOT. SCREW. WITH ME!”
    *howls* Put that on a t-shirt!!!

    He opened the curtain and saw the head of a giant black dragon. “The Nightmare Dragon…..”
    Okay, I know it's a really serious situation and all, but that would be just so damned cool!!!

    Whoa, wow! Bitchin' dragon fight!! *gets all into it*
    Oh my god Bakura!! *reads and sighs* Ohhh good, he's gonna be okay. Damn, sweet move on Aria's part!!

    “Who’s got daddy’s bloodlust?”
    “I do….and the pharaoh won’t forget it.”
    *falls over laughing* Yes, that's true!!

    Poor Hayden... such a pitiful sight!

    Ooooo Seto had a flashba Dam Damn, Yami's always been that cold. Butthead

    Awwwww Jaimen is the perfect balm for Seto. Such a sweetie. Must Squish! *grins*

    Seto opened the door and found Joey pouring Vodka into a glass. “JOEY WHEELER-KAIBA!”
    OOOOOOOOO Buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuusted! Finally!!!

    He clutched a pillow to his chest and started to cry. His body was wracked with sobs as he held the pillow tightly.
    Poor Seto. He's always gotta be the strong one. *sniffles*

    He grabbed Joey’s hand. “There always was.”
    awwwww, who knew he'd turn out to be so forgiving!!

    Was it right that they do this? Was it right that they make love while Hayden is sick ie hoe hospital and needs them? Was it right to make love at all with Seto?
    *swats Joey* you think too much at all the wrong times! Dude, ever hear of comfort?! Now, get on with it!

    Wow... that was more than a Lime! That was hot! Beautiful too. Very very good!

    Ohhhh I love Mrs. Jenkins! She made up for the priest's behavior! What a lovely, sweet lady. Glad you got her in here.

    WOOHOO!!! Aten's awake! *cheers* Damn, gotta wait 'til Saturday. Well, it'll be worth it!

    Kat
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  • From ANON - Caterfree10 on November 01, 2004
    Konichiiwa!

    Oh shit. Oh shit. Oh shit. Oh shit. Oh shit. Oit. it. Oh shit. Oh shit. Oh shit.
    Kya: Cat, do you HAVE to say "oh shit" SO MANY GODDAMN TIMES?!
    Cat: YES I DO!!! The bastard formorly known as Yami is gunna do sumthin' to Aten! I WON'T LET THAT HAPPEN!!!!!! *Tries to jump into moniter and is knocked unconsious* X_x
    Kya: *Sigh* By the reaction, she's gunna be pissed later so I'm heading off to get supplies. *Sigh* Well, you know what Cat likes to say. Update wuicker and she'll die by Wednesday.
    Cat: *Grogg It' It's miercoles...
    Kya: I'm using English, not Spanish. Gotta go!

    Ja Ne! ~_^
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 28, 2004
    Way to go Yami Aten!

    “Aten, watch where you are throwing those things! Ew!”
    *cackles* I agree. Squishy bounce...

    “What do you need the apple for?”
    “Nothing. I was just hungry,”
    *laughs* I love that part!

    Ben ben battle between the Yamis! I can see why you want Yami Aten's card.

    *sniffles* Poor Hayden...

    Malik looked at the body. “Remind me not to piss Aten off.”
    *laughs* Yeah, no kidding. Swiss Charlie and Vinnie Origami!

    Let's hear it for dedicated doctors! Shiiiit... Aten really is in bad shape. No wonder Marik's so damned upset. *snickers* Dr. Zira said shittin'.

    With a shaking hand, he saluted his father. “Y—Y—Yes…..S-sir.”
    Daniel saluted his son.
    *sniffles* That's just soooo damned sweet!

    Bakura flicked the Rod’s Eye with his finger.
    Marik emerged holding his ears.
    *laughs* I love it!!! That's just too funny!

    Wow, that whole scene between Marik and Aten.... Make me cry again, why doncha? *G*

    Seto and Joey have a really long road ahead of them with Hayden, don't they? *shudders* At least he isn't laughing anymore. That was just too freaky!

    “Our monsters will eat good tonight.”
    *grins* I'll say

    “A—Aten---I----love----.”
    Robbie’s eyes closed as he went limp.
    Okay... all together now: Awwwwwwwwwww

    Loved it even though I cried all over again. It's going to be hard to wait for Sunday!
    Kat
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on October 28, 2004
    *takes deep breathes to help her not attack Atem* What an ass he is! I knew it was him though but now that it's been actually told, I'm more pissed off than . Ho. How could he do that to those three sweet kids?!? The bastard. *hands Aten a chibi monkey plushie and gives Robbie a plushie of Cyber Commander* They all better get better. *hugs Aten, Robbie and Hayden* OMG, funny idea. Atem running into a PMSing Yami Aria. That wouldn't be a good thing for him.
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  • From ANON - Caterfree10 on October 27, 2004
    Konichiiwa!

    Hoo boy... Aria's started her period... This could get crazy... And why the piano? WHAT ARE BAKURA AND MARIK THINKING?! No I take that back, what is Bakura thinking? Oh well... and Oh shit... Yami Aten's a comin' and Charlie and Vinne and Doninic are gunna get it now... I just hope that they get it before Robbie does! *Panics*
    Kyasarin: Again, Bakurasgirl has already planned several more fanfics after this one. YOU DUN HAVE TO WORRY!!
    Caterfree: I CAN'T HELP IT!!!! I PANIC A LOT DAMMIT!!!!!!! *Goes into featl postion and suck her thumb*
    Kyasarin: *Sigh* I wonder if she took her medicine last night... Anyways, you know what Cat wants wuicker updates and she'll go crazy waiting until the next update, um, whenever it is. Dumbbutt over there forgot to look to see when the story was to be updated next...
    Caterfree: SCREW YOU KYASARIN!!!!!! *Bitch slaps Kyasarin*

    Ja Ne! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Caterfree10 on October 24, 2004
    KOnichiiwa!

    *Phew* Glad to know everyone who's not with those bastards are OK. But...Haveing to wait until martes?!?!
    Kyasarin: "Tuesday" in Spanish.
    Caterfree: GAH!!! I'm gunna die! *Falls over* Myaaaaan..... I hate waiting. =P Oh well. i shall live! I've l;ived this long with parents who hate homosexuality and biracial relationships and I will survive even longer! So, therefore, i shall wait until martes! ^_^

    Ja Ne! ^_~

    PS: MYAAAAAAAAAN!!!!! Save Aten, Robbie, and HAyden soon! *Gets knives ready for attcking Charlie, Vincent, and Dominic once everyone else is done beating their part of them*
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 23, 2004
    Yeah, okay.. I remember why I was crying yesterday....
    Hmm, Shadow magic, living mommy, shadow magic, living mommy.... Dude, can't fault Yami Aria's choice!

    “Don’t ‘young lady’ me, father!"
    Ooooooo they're gonna have massive rough waters ahead. *snickering*

    Malik grabbed the duster and turned on his music. He cleaned the living room as he moved his hips to the music.
    *laughs* I want him to clean my place!!!

    OHHHHHHHHHH Thank the Gods, they're all going to be okay!! Wait.. what about Maxine's baby or babies??

    Oh My God... those movies. Gah, waterworks...

    Seto turned to Marik, his eyes full of tears. “At least you didn’t see your son being raped, Marik. I…I just did.”
    Shiiiit, I hope Joey never sees these things. He'll never come out of that bottle!!

    The child snarled and the other hospital bed disappeared from the room.
    *cackles* I wonder who'll be dueling when that shows u.

    .

    “Dice-Boy, did you marry Coffee-Boy?”
    *laughs* "Mr. Coffee-Boy and Mr. Dice-Boy would like to announce their wedding... they are registered at Starbucks, Gevalia, Pottery Barn and Bed, Bath and Beyond." *cackles*

    Marik grinned at Miranda. “Hello, hotness. Oh, Hi, Daniel.”
    *snickers* He never changes

    “Marik, you haven’t changed since the last time I you you,” the man said.
    SEE! Even Daniel agrees with me!

    The woman shook her head. “I’m surrounded.”
    Wow, she makes it sound like a bad thing! *smirks*

    After all….everybody loves a good laugh, don’t they?
    *shudders* Shit, Hayden going mad is just scary... but you knew I thought that.

    Ryou turned to Bakura. “She’s not going to be a child forever, Bakura. She is getting to be a young woman.”
    Bakura shook his head. “Not my kid.”
    *howls* Bakura needs to learn that denial is not just a river in Egypt!

    Damn, Yami Aten's all... "grr" and so not a pushover. *grins* I like that!

    He just called me……… ‘lover.’’
    Okay, all together now: AWWWWWWWWWWWWW

    Damn, this was good!!!

    Kat
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 22, 2004
    Ooooo lemons! YAAAAAAAAAAY

    Wow, that lemon between Joey and Seto was fantastic!! I know, it's not saying a lot, but I had to read it three times and my brain kinda went "oooo Joey... oooo Seto.... OOOOO Naaaaaaaaaaaaaked" *insert Homer Simpson-type drooling here*

    Aria really is ill... Poor thing. She's always so strong....

    *laughs hysterically* that family picture!!! I love it! That's gotta be the perfect description of them too. *goggles* Ryou?? _Ryou_ tore Marik's shirt in half?? Daaaaaamn. *shrieks* Caveman Marik! I LOVE IT!

    “Hmm…I thought you were going to call me ‘sexy.’”
    *laughs* Marik has never lacked confidence!

    “Well, you are sexy….for a caveman.”
    *grins evilly* For a lunatic, for an Egyptian, for a Yami... *cackles*

    The yami let out a playful growl. “That’s it! Get over here!”
    Ooooo you's gonna get it now Ryou! and it a good way too!

    Wait... waitwaitwaitwait... Marik's gonna let Ryou.... whooooaaa. Lovely, simply lovely. Effing hot too!

    I'm sitting here all teary-eyed because of Seto's dream and then I read this: “Five thousand years and he still sounds like a motor when he sleeps.” I think I've just hurt myself laughing.

    The car was engulfed in flames.
    *screams* WHAT?! Noooooo *shakes head repeatedly* He isn't. He can't be!

    Aria watched as Ryou’s body was violently thrown through the windshield……
    Oh... My... God. You can't end it there... Okay, I'm gonna be over there crying. Yeah, I'm gonna be looking for the next chapter tomorrow. You betcha!

    Kat
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on October 21, 2004
    O.O How could you do that to Ryou and Marik and to have Aria see what happened to Ryou. Of course, this does answer my question of where Atem (Yami) dissappeared off too. Please say Marik and Ryou will be okay. Damn you and your cliffies :p
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  • From ANON - Caterfree10 on October 21, 2004
    Konichiiwa!

    NANI?!?!?!?!?!?! They'rew in CAR WRREAKS?!?!?!?! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KYASARIN!!!!! GET YO ASS HERE ON THE DOUBLE!!!!!!!!
    Kyasarin: Yesh?
    Caterfree: GET SOME FUCKING BATTERIES GODDAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!
    Kyasarin: ACK!!! Jeez, bakurasgirl-sama what now? *Runs off and h*
    C*
    CAterfree: DAMN!!! I Hate cliffies! *Falls into fetal position* WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! TELL ME THEY AREN'T DEAD!!!!!!
    Kyasarin: *Calls Cat on cell phone* Cat,
    Caterfre: *Snif* Nani?
    Kyasairn: Again, THEY'LL BE FINE!!! Like bakurasgirl-sama said, there are more fics to come. therefore, THEY SHALL LIVE!!!!!
    Caterfree: OWIE!!!! THAT WAS MY EAR BITCH!!!!! *Hangs up* *Bawls like a little kids* WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL SABADO!!!!!
    Kyasarin: *Sighs* Sabado means Saturday in Spanish. She's been taking Spanish in school this year....
    Caterfree: Update quicker!!! *Panics and sucks thumb in fetal position*

    Ja Ne! ^_~
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