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By : Aten
  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on October 21, 2004
    Hot damn, girl! The muses have certainly earned their overtime pay this chapter! I'm speechles........seriously great job. I didn't even realize I'd hit the "loop" button on my cd player and was listening to "Creeping Death" over and over and over.......
    You totally out did yourself this time, two phenomenal lemons and cars ing ing up. Not cool that it's Marik blowing up, but still, I love that kind of shit. I know you wouldn't kill off a hot piece of man candy like Marik though.
    *after thought* Too bad nic nic was standing in the path of Marik's car picking up a shiny new nickle.......
    *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 20, 2004
    A devilish smile crossed Tristan’s face. “Are you going to wear the frilly pink apron when you cook it?”
    *cheers* YAAAAY

    A playful slap from the Dice Master elicited a bigger evil grin. “You know I will, Silly Buns!”
    *howls* Silly Buns!? I love it!!

    Tristan grinned. “Looking forward to….stuffing the turkey with you.”
    Otogi licked his lips. “Mmm…stuffing the turkey.”
    *chokes on soda* Oh my god... *falls over laughing*

    Wow! I knew Robbie was smart but I didn't realize that he was that gifted. *snickers* Love the interaction between Daniel and Tristan. I'd almost feel sorry for anyone that pissed them both off at the same time. I said _almost_.

    Seto, don't be an ass, don't be an ass, don't be an ass... YAAAAAAAAY He didn't blow it! Oooo even he said he was being an ass.

    *cackles* Of course Asher's last name would be Sparx.*laughs hysterically*

    whoa... I think that's the most Asher has said, Ever!

    Damn, I love it when Seto goes all 'grrr' and dictator-like. *grins evilly* He's just so sexy that way!

    *snickers* Malik... bendable. *drools*

    Seto held up his hand. “I’ve had my brother tellhis his girlfriend is pregnant, my expert thief is pregnant, and I was shot in the ankle yesterday. The last thing I need to hear about is your and Bakura’s sex lives. I’ve been traumatized enough.”
    *blinks innocently* I haven't been traumatized enough...

    "Philosophical Marik did not appear many times."
    *nods* true, but it's wonderful when he does show up, even during such awful circumstances.

    Damn... Joey's drunk?! Ugh, drunk Joey and Serenity at the dinner table... Gee, can we hope he barfs in her lap? *crosses toes and continues to read* “Shut. The. Fuck. Up.” Ooooo I think.... *blinks* I think that was better that barfing in her lap! *thinks and nods* Yup, it was better!

    “One comment….one word against my child or the way that we live…..I will personally rip out your intestines with my teeth. Understand?”
    Oooooo I wanna see that! Dude, just floss afterwards!

    “Aten, I said, ‘Get off OF me’ NOT ‘Get off ON me!’”
    Aten snickered. “Well, I am dyslexic, you know.”
    “Nice excuse.”
    *falls over laughing* One Million Points to Aten for that resp





    Okay, I'm not gonna cry because of what they're doing to Robbie and Aten... I'm not gonna cry. *sniffles* again.

    Oooo Yami Aten's coming?! Hot damn!

    Fantastic chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Uke Kit and Uke Io. on October 19, 2004
    Uke Kit: Nice chapter~! ....chapters...hehe, just had to catch up on my reading. ^-^hehehee.

    Uke Io: Hey! the end of this chapter reminded me of something!!!! What the HELL ever happened to Aku??? Ryou's other yami.???????????????????? I know they didn't kill him. _> so then where did he go???
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  • From ANON - Caterfree on October 15, 2004
    Konichiiwa

    *Mouth hangs wide open* Anzu is a bigger moron then I though she was. I though she'd AT LEAST be able to idfy pfy people in a picture in Real life!!! RA, SHE IS SO STUPID A NAIL HAS MORE N CEN CELLS THAT SHE DOES!!!!!!
    Kyasarin: Same with you...
    Caterfree: TOJIKOMERU!!!!! (Shut up in Japanese) *Whacks Kyasarin with giant mallet* Wasn't as stressful as other chapters, so Kya won't have to get supplies for tonight, but still, Damn! I can't wait until Tuesday! I'll crack! *Goes into fetal position* Damn it. Damn it. Damn it. Damn it. Damn it. Damn it.

    Ja Ne! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Tifter on October 15, 2004
    Damn, do you EVER check for mistakes in spelling, gender and story plot???
    Give it up!!
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 15, 2004
    “When the baby arrives, can it sleep in my room? Please? I’m a light sleeper!”
    *groans* UH OHHHH

    Seto narrowed his eyes. “Get out of here.”
    Idiot, idiot, idiot. You big idiot.

    Anzu reached out to touch the man’s beard. “You’re fuzzy like a little bunny!”
    *laughs* Oh feck...

    The man stepped away. “What is the matter with you?”
    *laughs hysterically* Now dude, that's a loooooooooong lis



    *wipes eyes* Anzu would the be the only person who could scare away a room full of men like that....

    Poor Hayden. Aten's strength just becomes more and more apparent! Damn, he's good.

    “Anzu! For the first time in my life, I’m glad to see you!”
    *checks outside to see if pigs are airborn yet*

    Vinnie grinned. This girl was obviouslythrethreat. And, as frightening as she looked, tail was tail.
    *squeaks* ewwwwwwwwwwww w eww ew ew ew

    Aten shrugged with a smile. “Flattery will get you everywhere, Robbie Morgan.”
    *laughs* Aten flirts like Miranda!

    “No, I’m just Aten. Just plain, old, regular, boring Aten.”
    Tch, no such thing!!!

    Yaaaaay Daniel's back! Oooo I can't wait to see how he reacts to Asher's comments about Miranda being pretty. *cackles*

    Aria growled. “My face is not my breasts, Umi.”
    *howls* Ohhh that's funny!!! Damned good thing Bakura's out.

    “UMI AND ARIA ARE KISSING! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD!”
    *laughs harder* Yup, good thing Bakura's out.... A really good thing.

    *shudders* Charlie wanting to put Aten to the test?? Ohhh, the poor wee thing!

    Damn girl. Great chapter! I'm gonna hope for Tuesday. *G*

    Kat
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  • From ANON - Caterfree10 on October 14, 2004
    Koncihiiwa!

    NANI?!?!?!?! Vincent was OTOGI'S BOYFRIEND BEFO?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! WTFH?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
    Kyasarin: i'll be off getting supplies for her now before I'm thrown out... *Goes off to convinience store*
    Caterfree: GRRR!!!! DAMN!!! *Ahem* Anyways, YAY LIME AND LEMON! ^_^ Limes are good.... LEmons are good..... oh and one more thi*In *In response to Aria after the mindlink flood* Oh fuck. Oh fuck. Oh fuck. Oh fuck. Oh fuck. Oh fuck. Oh fuck. Oh fuck. *I think you get the point*

    Ja Ne! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 13, 2004
    Ohhhhhh laptop needs work. That's why you updated early! Damn, you scared the snot out of me. I thought I'd slept right through Wednesday and was now late for work!

    Gods, where to start? That lime between Aten and Robbie was wonderful. Especially with how Robbie handled Aten's fear. That was just so sweet!

    The lemon with Bakura, Malik and Ryou? Damned effing hot!! I'd forgotten how playful Malik can be, the stinker. *smirks*

    Vinnie dated Mirand and Otogi!? Okay, I'm not that surprised, but I was cheering every time one of them landed a slap, punch or backhand on the guy. That was good!! Yaaaaaaaay Tristan to save the day! Ohhhhh, I hope Maxine finds where the boys are.

    I'll keep my toes crossed that you get your laptop back for saturday.

    Kat
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on October 13, 2004
    WOW! *hugz* That chapter kicked serious butt! Lemon AND lime?!? Who'd have ever thought that sour fruits could be so sweet! I can't help but feel sorry for Umi though. Aten has a little fun and Aria gets rabid. LOL That was awesome! I love Bakura's fishy euphemisms.....Umi better be careful or he might just wake up with his errr.......Rapala missing one morning! eek!
    Keep up the great work!
    *hugz*
    Caroline
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  • From ANON - Bealmira on October 11, 2004
    This is... amasing. Nerve-racking, shocking... It's even scary at times. I love it. You are such a freaking talented author and I am both in awe of you and envying you abilities.

    Serenity's a bitch, huh? I never really liked here, but this is kind of making me hate her... It's great how you've done that too. It takes a lot of talent to make a sweet, innocent little girl into a homosexual-hating, prejudiced whore and I love you for that. *grins*

    I think Robbie and Aten act a little young though... They're twelve, right? That means at least sixth grade though, and that means that they can at least write correctly. Well, unless they have really crappy education... *grins* But yeah, they're acting a little young too. I'm pretty sure that by the time I was in middle school, I'd stopped calling my parents 'mommy' and 'daddy' and knew a least a little bit about the facts of life. But yeah...

    Anyway, I love you fic, it's gorgeous. Please, please, please, please, please keep it up. Too many good authors have just up and disappeared, never to finish their fics. Again, it's beautifully sad and I'm jealous of you as an author. Love you, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Camille on October 10, 2004
    I like your story, but I had one problem with it. If I were somewhere being held captive and my jailers were stupid enough to leave a revolver in a drawer, I would use it on them! I know it would end the story sooner, but you would have the three of them struggling to get home which could prolong the story.
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  • From ANON - Karimaru on September 30, 2004
    NICE!!! I love how they gathered all there followers, specially when It was Mariks Turn to gather them lol. anyways I can wait till the next story *sometimes when it gets really really good and the susspence is practically killing me, the updates are waaaaay to long lol but i know for that much writing in that amount of time is actually quite fast lol one problem though what was your pen nam ff. ff.net? that way i can read the stories that where writen on there. anyways gatta go read more of the previous stories *Ive read 4 so far including this one those other three took me 2weeks just to finish but i had school on some days too which sucks cause I just wanna read your stories theo goo good.* well anyways ja mata!
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on September 27, 2004
    Lol! Black bedsheets....that's so great. Well it serves him right to have a routine like that. Okay, I officially love Asher! *hugs the adoreable pyromaniac* Could I have a a plushie of him please? *puppy dog eyes* Oh, and to the person who bitched about your stories, don't listen to him/her. The continuations are amazing and I never want the series to end. Never stop writing! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 27, 2004
    *snort* that "reviewer" is just a putz. Writing for stars? You could never be a star whore. *blinks* Well.... you know what I mean, even if it that sentence does sound weird.

    Oooo thank you for the new blanket! Weather actually turned cold last night. *grins*

    Her father’s voice called from downstairs. “DO I HEAR SPAWNING UP THERE?!”
    *laughs through tears* Honestly Bakura, you need to listen to Malik and Marik if you really wanna know what spawning sounds like. Seriously, overly-protective-papa Bakura is just cute!

    *snarls* It figures, that silly bitch Serenity hears about a missing child and thinks about herself. *yells* Someone slap that stupid cow!

    I gotta go compose myself after that scene with Hayden being chained up... You've done such a good job with writing this that I'm just heartbroken. Thanks for the laugh with Alex's comment about Seto waiting to pound Joey through every floor of the building.

    Thursday, huh? Okay, reallod eod excuse to get to work extra early so that I can read the update before I open the shop (instead of waiting until I get home).

    *hugs*
    Kat
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  • From ANON - Uke Io and Uke Kit on September 27, 2004
    Io and Kit: *glares* we read that review that, that guy left. *glares more*

    Io: I CAN KILL HIM FOR YOU!!!!!

    Kit: *rolls eyes* I sware Io....are you SURE you're not a seme? Any way. ^-^ I do love this fic. And I don't care what any one else says. You just keep writing. I love Aten so much! He's just TOO kawaii~~!!hehehe. Any way~ gatta go now. I'll be looking for the update in a couple days. ^-^ ja ne.
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