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Reviews for Return To Hades

By : Aten

From ANON - ShadowofLight on September 27, 2004
*sighs deeply and rubs face* Man I wouldn't be surprised if I got more white hairs after reading this. this story is great as always and the suspense is murder on us! poor umi and mako and trevor's kids. and serenity *stabs serenity doll repeatedly* a child is missing and all she cares about is breaking up the wedding? please do something awuful to her in the end? and aten gets teh spotlight? yes!! so that's who teh third guy was!! huh, well that was a surprsie to me ^^ love your story and that person who didn't leave an e-mail... you know jsut forget them. so your story is long who cares? you are a fabulous writer and if u suddenly end it here that will leave like hundreds! (okay maybe not that much) very disappointed reeaders. and not leaving a e-mail addy for you to contact? can we say cowardly loser? *sighs* okay getting off track here. again i love your fic and oh! still my favorite part, bakura playing the role of over-protective father. ^^ now i can't help but imagine what aria's and umi's kids will look like!! waiting for the next update :)
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From ANON - Caterfree10 on September 25, 2004
Konichiiwa!

GAH!!!!! I hate cliffies! this is as bad as 'Watch Over me' and 'Anything for You'! MYAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cliffies are evil! *Hisses* Erm, anyways, I hate the time I have to wait! I'm gunna die by Monday! *Falls over* Myaaa..... Darnit! Update quicker!!!!! *Pummels plushies to vent frustration*

Ja Ne! ^_~
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on September 24, 2004
... unfortuantely you are right. man if i didn't like you so much and enjoy your storeis to so end i'd--i'd--i'd jsut explode!!! well, thank you VERY MUCH for not letting aten die but, waht about robbie? is he gonna pull through? poor miranda and ryou. ooh is aria gonna go all yami when she finds them? and i love sekhmet!! *huggles plushie of him* I'm obvious a dog lover. waiting for monday to come!!!
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From ANON - Jupitor Knight on September 24, 2004
oh that was good, and bad cause i feel bad for those kids. Well can't wait for you to update. I don't get my car this weekend like i thought i gotta wait a bit. so your whats holding me together while i pace waiting for the vehicle. LOL
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From ANON - Uke Kit and Uke Io on September 24, 2004
Uke Io: *SCREAMS* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I AM GOING TO KILL YOU!! UPDATE! UPDATE!

Uke Kit: *grabs Io by the hair pulling him back* You are NOT killing ANY ONE! I would like to see this fic updated. Don't you know how to read!? *roll eyes* baka Io. Any way! I love this fic so far! ^-^ I keep loosing track how many fics to this series you have, because they all blend toger. er. ^-^ any way! keep updating. And next time I'll tie Io up so he dosn't scream any more.
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From ANON - Pillaie on September 24, 2004
I have to say I'm not very please how this story is turning out but looking at your star rating I would have to say many people are feeling the same as I do. Please stop with the sequels and mon. In. I like you as a writer but the sequels are nerve racking now.

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From ANON - veggie_tart on September 22, 2004
hey, it's me ^_^ i absolutely love the new story! yay for new stuff! ; _ ; poor aten * huggles him* i really hope he doesn't do it...he's like - my favorite ; _ ; hayden's gone out, so has aten ...will charlie get to them? or not..i'm just thinking here ^^ i hope aten and robbie will find out what the other feels. i'm really looking forward to the next chapter- and i adore the story ' reunited'. *yawns* gunna get some rest now * huggles aten and hands him a giant bear - poor aten *

luv ya- can't wait till friday ^^

veggie_tart

- NB4 X-Mas Rules -
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on September 21, 2004
ohnonono!!! please tell me someone is gonna find aten in time!! not only would it probably kill his family but it'll kill us (the readers) as well!! I like the sweetie he's like a son i hope to have one day (i mean it i would love to have a son or daughter as sweet and kind as him). Serenity... i have hte perfect torture!! lock her in a room with tea. no wait maybe not so good... well tie her up and let anshe take her onj a tour of every building he's torched. i like him!! he's a fig bug but hey he's cool ^^
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From ANON - Uke Io and Uke Kit on September 21, 2004
Uke Io: O_O YOU BET YOU'RE IN TROUBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *SCREAMS* HOW COULD YOU LEAVETHERTHER CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

Uke Kit: *covers Io's mouth* uh.....great chapter ^-^ Can't wait to see what happens, But Io has had to much coffee this morning. So she is not alowed to talk right now. *gags and ties Io to a chair.* there...that should hold her for.........five minutes. Any way! I LOVE this chapter.....I love all your fics. ^-^ Poor Aten though! I'll be bac firday to review the next chapter! ja!............................Io don't chew through the ropes.......
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From ANON - Kat on September 21, 2004
*snickers* I love Asher and his running commentary. He's a hell of a tour guide!

How dense is Serenity? Umm, pretty dense is my best guess. I'm beginning to wonder if she isn't a walking case of "Surfing in Nebraska"

*falls over shrieking and wipes tears from eyes* Otogi... Tristan... Ogtogi's meat. Oh hell, that's just beyond funny! I love it!!

Oy Hayden is a teenager, isn't he.... He was almost cute when he was pouting (he was too!) about not needing a bodyguard.

Poor Aten... That note is heartwrenching! The poor thing. Friday? Oh you know I'll be here. With bells on!

Okay, maybe not...
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From ANON - Jupitor Knight on September 20, 2004
wow that was really good, so i'm wondering who the stranger is. Could it be serenity??? Sorry i didn't get to read it till today I went home the weekend and GUESS WHAT? I found a car finally. It's a mettalic forest green 1998 Ford Escort SE. It's really nice it's got good miles and it was a most excellet price. I'm so happy. Well later.
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From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on September 18, 2004
O.O I hope Aten's not thinking about what I think he is! You can't have him do that!!! *huggles the poor chibi* Everything will get better Aten. Just you wait and see. *hands him a plushie of BMG*
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From ANON - Kat on September 18, 2004
Somene drop-kick Serenity! Just open up a can o' whoopass on her pointed head. I hope Marik or Bakura does it. Although the popcorn bit with Aten and Robbie was cute!

Oooo I think I might have figured out who the "mystery man" is! Nope, not gonna say. I don't want to have everyone know if I'm wrong. *smirks* Poor Aten. He is just such a sweet thing. Every time something bad happens to him it just breaks my heart.

Safe journey and I hope things improve with your father.

Kat
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From ANON - Caterfree10 on September 18, 2004
Konichiiwa!

NYUUU!!!!! ATEN DUN DO IT!!! *Searches for ropew to tie Aten down so he doesn't hurt or kill himself* DUNDO IT!!!!
Kyasarin: Cat, if Aten really WAS gunna kill himself, do you think bakurasgirl would talk about how in the next fic, she'd put in an Aten/Robbie lemon?
Caterfree: Oh yeah...
Kya: 7_7
Cat: Anywise, darn Serenity! She's being so goddamn rude! *Digs out serenity plushie and burns it* DAMN YOU SERENITY!!!! *Kicks burnt plushie into nearest river* Anyways, I gotta go now. Please update again soon!

Ja Ne! ^_~
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From ANON - Uke Io and Uke Kit on September 18, 2004
Both: NANI!?!?!?!?!?!?! THAT'S IT?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!!

Uke Kit: Poor Aten! *huggles* T_T

Uke Io: UPDATE! UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uke Kit: *hits Io over the head* Stop that! The fic will be updated soon enough.

Uke Io: BUT I WANT IT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *cries*

Uke Kit: Gomen, Io's been having weird mood swings lately. Can't wait to see the next chapter~ *drags Io off*

Uke Io: NO! MORE. Must. Read. MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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