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By : Aten

From ANON - Caterfree10 on December 11, 2004
Konichiiwa!

EEp! not the happiness as in the first chapter when Joey and Seto made love! 'Twas interrputed by Hayden and now... WAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! He hed to go to the looney bin! *Cries*
Kyasarin: ALright Cat, you've gone through this before in a way. Only it was Sanzogoku39 when she tried to kill herself.
CAterfree: *Bitch slaps Kyasarin* DUN BRING THAT UP!!!! I'd rather forget that now that Sanzo-san is back, thank you...
Kyasairn: X_x Okies,I won't bring it up anymore... *Quielty sneaks off*
Caterfree: Meh! I dun wanna wait until domingo! (Sanday) DARNIT!!!! *Pouts* OH well, I gotta go now. Can't wait for the sequal! ^_^

Ja Ne! ^_~

Oh and one more thing... Gueswhat?Guesswhat?Guesswhat?
You: What?
Cat: *Holds up mini Malik firguine in your face* MALIK SEZ HI!!!!! =D
Everyone else: --;

(Dun ask, I've been in a weird mood at school lately...)
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From ANON - Kat on December 10, 2004
wow, hell of an ending! Damn... interrupted lemon though! *g* Well, I'm glad Hayden's out of it. For the time being. I was really beginning to dislike the kid. *shrugs* There ya have it. Okay, Sunday. Pity about the marriage though. Dang... hell of an ending.

Kat
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From ANON - Caterfree10 on December 09, 2004
Konichiiwa!

Yeah! Go Aten! Tell'em all that you don't hide your faith! ^_^ I knowI don'thide mine!
Kyasarin: Cat, technically you do since: one, you haven't the slightest idea what you really believe in for sure anymore and two, you haven't worn a cross for Ra knows how long.
Caterfree: Details, details. Anyways... Oh gods... Jeanie had the babies at Christmas... O.O What a time to have 'em though! Christmas babies! ^_^ Just like Malik-kun (Dec. 23) and my RL friend, Casey (Dec. 21)! And wow, going out of this fanfic like you came in... with a SetoXJoey lemon! ^____________^ Happy mind! ^_~
Kyasarin: And I shall be hiding in my soul room come tomorrow...
Caterfree: Whatever you say, Kya! I get to have more fun then!
Kyasarin: *Groans* Just don't make it loud... like last night in your dreams... *Shudders*
Caterfree: =D Anyways, gotta go! �Hasta ma�ana!

Ja Ne! ^_~
Note to self: screw the symbols from now on. much too difficult and takes too long... Now I know why I don't include the accent mark in miercoles...
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From ANON - Caterfree10 on December 05, 2004
Konichiiwa!

ooh! Time for a guessing game on Yugi's new boyfriend! *Grabs Shonen Jump YGO graphic novels* Oh! It is Hanasaki? I think they'd make a great couple! ^_^ or maybe it's...um...Rishid? Naw, I really don't seem them as a good pair... Shaid perhaps? Nah, same comment as Rishid... DARNIT!!! I can't think of nuthin'! *Bang head on desk* I *Bang* CAN'T *Bang* THINK!!!!!!!!! *BANG!* Owwie... my head hurts... *Falls over*
Kyasarin: *Sigh* Methinks my hikari needs to see a shrink... *Shakes* Anyways, you kow what Cat always says. She's gunna die before Wednesday.
Caterfree: *groggily* Thats...miercoles...
Kya: Whatever. And To please uypdate quicker. See ya!

Ja Ne! ~_^
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From ANON - Caterfree10 on November 28, 2004
Konichiwa!

OH... my...God... Aria... having babies.... and Bakura... having to help.... sweet Isis, WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON IN THAT HEAD OF YOURS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Kyasarin: *Stupidly imagined such an event* MY BRAIN!!!! MY BRAIN!!!!! *Falls over* and I though Cat's threesome fantasies were bad!!! And no, I was not involved. She has fun with two men in her fantasies... AKA Gippal from FFX-2 and Malik in the same bed as her. >< Gods... bad memories of stumbling into her soulroom while that dream was going on... *Shudders*
Caterfree: What? You didn't like that dream? Didn't wanna make it a foursome? Teeheeheeheehee...
Kyasarin: HELL NO!!!!! *Hides*
Caterfree: Baahahahaha!!!!! *Ahem* anyways, gods, I think this is gunna be your shortest story from what you're saying! Sheesh... That's creepy-ness, girl... Wait a sec, I recall something. An epilogue from after the story in which the house was burned down. In the Epilogue, it was Aria and Aten's 15th birthday and Marik got his son a Silver MIllennium rod. Incidently the ring that Aku was trapped in in that fic was part of the silver used to make the silver Millennium rod. Are you gunna build on that Epilogue at all or not? I'm just wondering and if you don't I'll have plenty of dreams so that it will live on. ^_^ Well, gotta go now. I gotta get going to Neopets so I can feed my Eyrie and my Gelert!

Ja Ne! ^_~
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From ANON - Caterfree10 on November 23, 2004
Konichiiwa!

Oh....my....fucking...gOD!!! TRIPLETS?!?!?!?!?!?! *Insert VERY high pitched scream* WTFH?! Are you crazy?! Jeanie having TRIPLETS?!?!?! OH MY GoD IT'S A SIGN OF THE APOCALYPSE!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kyasarin: CAT!!!!! SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!! *Thwaps Caterfree upside the head*
Caterfree: OW!!! DAMN YOU!!! *Throws Kyasrin out of the window* Anyways, Gods! I can't wait until Turkey-day! DARN YOU!!! *Throws paper ball at moniter* Well, I have to go now. I dun wanna wait until jueves!! *pouts*

Ja Ne! ^_~
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From ANON - Stableboy on November 22, 2004
Wow, some people need a reality check, you know? I liked your story, but you seem to repeat some things a lot and have some spelling errors. Maybe some college English classes in writing may help. Something to think about.
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From ANON - Pain Addiction on November 20, 2004
Awww...

That chapter with Aten and Robbie made me think of a Perfect Circle song called 3 Libra's.

Especially the line in the song, "Eyes of a fallen angel, eyes of a tragedy."

Maybe the baby is a hermaphadite?
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From ANON - Caterfree10 on November 19, 2004
Konichiiwa!

WHAAAAAAAAAAAA?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! OMAE WO KOROSU!!!! OMAE WO KOROSU!!!!!! *Gets out triple blade knife* OMAE WO KOROSU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kyasarin: TAKE COVER!!!! *Hides in dumpster* Great, now you've done it.... cutting off like that does not go well with Cat as clearly seen -_-u She'll blow over soon... I hope. Let's just hope she doesn't start an over land hurricane. >< ANyways, you know what Cat wants: quicker updates and Me to go out and get supplies *very BIG sigh*

Ja Ne! ~_^
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From ANON - PainAddiction on November 17, 2004
Loki- Hayden's got autism right? I haven't done much study into it, but the signs sound like it.
Once knew a person that had it...use to throw huge tantrums. I hope Seto and joey can handle it alright.
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From ANON - Caterfree on November 17, 2004
Konichiiwa!

*Falls over laughing* Gawd! That five hundred dollar moment comment in chapter 24 was priceless! And gosh those poor duel monsters... they got hit with mustard and ketchup *Bursts out laughing again* HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! *Ahem* Anyways, FINALLY! Serenity's stupid-ass butt is outta there! I think the only other person who's stupider than her is Anzu and that's saying a lot... Anyways I can't wait for the next chappie! and um, I can explain for not being here for a week. It's called computer being an ass and my sister having homework to finsh before the end of her grading period at her college. =_= OH well! i'm here now so yea! Gotta go now!

Ja Ne! ^_~
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From ANON - Kat on November 10, 2004
Bakura smiled. �I love you to pieces. You know that, right?�
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW

�This was made in a volcano, Anzu. This isn�t a living, breathing organism!�
�Orgasm?????�
*shudders then falls over laughing* Poor Bakura... He's so gonna remember this!!! Let's hope it doesn't have the same effect as Salt Peter!!!

�Did I just tell her where to find the kids???!! I�m in deep shit.�
*nods* Yes, yes he is.

�That romantic moment cosve hve hundred dollars.�
Ryou led. ed. �That�s all? I was sure that it would be at least twice than that.�
*laughs hysterically*

�Oh my god�he fell asleep as I was rubbing his hair!�
*is overwhelmed by the cuteness*

"The urge to squish them into next week is getting too much"
*nods* yes!! For me too!!!

I can see Gabby selling Mary Kay or Avon... *G*

Aria narrowed her eyes and grinned. �I know something we could do. Follow me.�
Uh oh... this doesn't sound good...

Beside Aten, the Millennium Rod vibrated with his laughter.
Oooo what what what?!?!?!

�Umm�I�d love to, �Kura, but umm�how shall I put this�.I�d hate to smear your lipstick.�
*blinks* *cackles*

Bakura ran upstairs and looked in the bathroom mirror. He had lipstick on him, eye shadow, blush, and eyeliner. Mascara was on his eyelashes.
*shrieks and falls over laughing*

*howls* Revolving Shadow Realm Door!!!

"But I know your daddy doesn�t appreciate waking up and looking like a drag queen.�
*laughs* He'd only appreciate it if it was someone else waking up looking like a drag queen. *snickers*

With a quick motion, he punched Serenity in the jaw.
*whistles, cheers, throws confetti* Way to go Mokie!!!! WOOHOOO One-shot Kaiba! *rings bell* Da Winner!!! *laughs*
Okay, okay... yesss, poor Jaimen. He's just such a sweet thing. Still... Go Mokie!

�That is a lie and you know it, Wheeler!�
Uh oh... he only calls Joey by his last name when he's had it. This is not good....

Whoa.... they're going to duel... This ought to be... interesting.

�Mustard? What�s mustard doing on the Red Eyes?�
*bursts out laughing*

�This isn�t blood. It�s�.ketchup! What the hell did this happen?�
*falls over laughing*

The two dragons growled low in their throats as the affectionately cleaned each other up.
*shrieks* Ooooo kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinky! *wipes tears from eyes*

Joey allowed Seto to bring him into his arms and lay him on the floor�..
*blinks* where's the lemon? *smirks*

�Ha! That�s my little girl! Growls just like her daddy!�
*laughs*

�What do you say we raid moneybags� fridge and go take a ride on the wave� again?�
�Yami, do you really want to make love on Seto�s waterbed again? It�s not such a good idea. What if he finds out?�
*falls over laughing* Seto's always happy to oblige. Sog asg as he never finds out!

I'm so glad I got the Monster back so I could read this!!
Kat
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From ANON - PainAddiction on November 10, 2004
"Bakura crossed his arms sternly. �This is not playing, Aria! You don�t go around putting make-up on your family members! What am I going to do with---?�
Bakura disappeared.
Aria bit her lip, laughing.
Bakura reappeared. �I AM YOUR FATHER, MISSY! DON�T YOU DARE SEND ME TO THE SHADOW REALM---.�
Bakura disappeared.
Aria fell back on her bed, laughing, as she clutched onto her Change of Heart plushie.
Bakura reappeared. �ARIA KANIKA! STOP THIS--!�
Bakura disappeared then reappeared. �ARIA-!�
Her father disappeared again then reappeared. �STOP!�"

Loki- LOL!!! I pity the guy who dumps Aria.

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From MarikIshtar77 on November 10, 2004
Dragons covered in condiments......BWAHAHAHA! That was very cute! Bakura is make up sounds very sexy....go figure I'd think that though....me and my strange tastes. LOL
I loved the part where Aria was sending Bakura to the Shadow Realm too...can I borrow her for the day? She's totally the shit! *squishes Aria*
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From ANON - PainAddiction on November 09, 2004
Loki- GAHH! I've been reading your stuff for a long time, just never revewied-
Suku- Cauhe'she's lazy.
Loki- *whacks Suku with stick* Never mind her *evil stare* she just lives here.
Suku- I'm a stalker ^^
Loki- =_=;; Back to the reveiw. You imagery and sensory details are so in depth, and you tie in plot so artistically with slash its incredible. I've been addicted to your stuff for awhile ^^

...and since I read yours you should read mine....but nones up yet. Just to be fair.

Suku- Fasci
Lok
Loki- =_=....your an idiot.
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