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Reviews for Darkness consumes the light

By : Sansi

From ANON - Arainaina on June 21, 2005
Oh please update soon I really want to know if Yami saves Yugi? I can't believe Yami would want to go back to the after life and leave Yugi is he that dense?? If that was me I would choose to stay with Yugi and forget the after life and start a new life with the people I cared for.

Anyway, very good please update soon for like I said I wish to see if Yami saves him or if the world will be doomed thanks to him and his stupidness.
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From ANON - chi on June 05, 2005
ow man, poor yami
pls update soon
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From ANON - Rachel Dracon on December 05, 2004
Good story, it was especially painful to see what Yugi did to Yami in the last chapter, very skillfuly done. Update soon?
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on November 23, 2004
RD: ARGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG YUGI MOUTU ENOUGH IS ENOUGH U SILLY IDIOT huh id never thought id say this of the king of games but REALLY YUGI ENOUGH IS ENOUGH TELL YAMI WHY UR SO MAD AT JEEZE and u u FUCKING DUMBASS OF A PHARAOH DID U REALLY THINK ANUBIS SENT U BACK TO YUGI JUST TO TAKE U BACK DID NONE OF THIS SINK INTO THAT THICK SKULL OF URS AUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG YOU TWO ARE SUCH BAKAS damit huh sry sansi i didnt mean to yel but as u can clearly see im mad cuz those two IDIOTS CANT TAKE THE GOD DAME CLUE they are ment to be together but cant they see that oh NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO they have to have there fucking heads so cramed up their asses they cant see the love thats clearly standing RIGHT IN FRONT OF THEM huh ok time to aleviate my anger weres those stupid shadows*changes into saint dragon of osiris and goes chasing after the voices blasting them with blasts until there nothing but moans of pain *ah much better well keep up the great work sansi hehe and tell me what u thought about the pictures i bet some of them made u drool didnt they hahahah well TTFN TA TA FOR NOW ^__~
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From HauntedReality on November 21, 2004
I am really enjoying your fic. The emotions you are conveying through the characters seem very realistic, even in such a complicated situation. My heart really goes out to Yami and Yugi in this chapter. I look forward to seeing it resolved.
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From ANON - Chikura on November 21, 2004
You really have to update more!!! The suspense is killing me!!
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From ANON - DracOnyx on November 21, 2004
Enjoyed the chapter very much! I can see Yugi being stubborn . . . been in the situation he is in (although not quite exactly) a few too many times. When someone you love hurts you, you want to hurt them back. Hopefully, now that Yami's pulled his head out of his ass, Yugi will do the same.

DracOnyx
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From ANON - Arainaina on November 01, 2004
Oh very interesting please have Ystaystay other wise Yugi will forever be broken doesn't Yami understand that Yugi needs him for with out the other one can not exsit. so please have Yami stay forever this time.
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From ANON - maggiemay on October 31, 2004
Hello; Just found the story and am enjoying it very m Pl Pl Con Continue!!! So ummm...is Yami really clueless or just self-deceptive? Maybe both?
BTW I HATE the way the series ended. I know it was logical and made sense in a way. But, darn it, Yugi deserved better. Really, he helped saved the world! Went through terrible trials! He should have been able to keep his other...and his other should have STAYED! I would have LOVED to have seen a clip after the final ep where Yugi and "Yami" come into the gameshop from school, maybe laughing and holding hands. I know gay couples are NOT the thing, but hey...everyone should understand that the love of a soul mate is beyond simple gender. Besides, nobody was terribly upset with the gay couple in Sailor Moon, and some of those scenes were a LOT more graphic than the one I just described.
'K 'nuff rant. Like the story...

Maggiemay

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From ANON - Zoe on October 30, 2004
Please don't stop posting.
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From ANON - DracOnyx on October 28, 2004
I do hope you continue . . . I like it so far. Now if Yami would just get his head out of his ass . . .

DracOnyx
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on October 27, 2004
RD:hey Sansi sry i havent updated in a while ive been busy with work pls pls do update and im glad ur going to see the fanarts on Janime hehe oh and pls be my guest use your wurmslayer to "persuade" yami aka the stupid idiot to stay with Yugi grrr yami i tried asking ni TRi TRIED being patient but enough is enough you have officiolly PISSED ME OFF for the last time pharaoh no baka * grabs her own Wurmslayer and her big Goron sword turns on Fear by Disturbed and goes charging after yami and slams him into a wall and beats him to a pulp then steack ack charges up her shadow powers and sends them flying at yami until hes nocked unconsiounce* grrr now u listen here mr. all powerful pharoah and king of games u get ur ass back into that room and u tell ur hikari your there for him cuz last i checked yami anubis DIDNT SAY U WERE GOING TO THE AFTERLIFE AFTER U SAVED UR HIKARI U IDIOT grr now im going to give u till the next chapter Yami if i do now see some improvement there will be hell to pay *changes her outfit till shes wearing blood red warrioress outfit with a guaze covering her hair and mouth and two crystal covered scimitars with her aura gleaming red and fire in her eyes* so u have been warned yami hehe great chapter as usual Sansi though im not too happy with yami right now if u havent noticed huh ANYways TTFN TA TA FOR NOW and update updat update update update and oh yeah update oh and enjoy the fanart on Janime your going to drool over them there so cool cya ^__^
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From ANON - Evilpixie on October 27, 2004
Please do cone I e I love this thing! Really good plot line and I love the play between the two's emtions. Please do continue.
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on October 18, 2004
RD:^_^ you welcome im happy i could tell you about the things they have on Janime .biz you should check out the fanarts oh theres this one in the Litte/yami yugi section and it has Yami sitting on a throne divided into halfs one half hes in his pharaoh outfit and hes holding a skull in his hands and that half of the throne is intact were as the other half has him in his leather outfit*drools*and he has yugi kneeling next to him hehe u should check it out along with a few others like this one in the Pharaoh Yami section beautiful artwork it was yami in his pharaoh garb minus the puzzle i think and the cape he has his hands at his sides his knees are slightly bent his head turned to his right gazing at the distance while hes laying on a bed of green leaves you should check it out OH and another one has him with his cape one and he has this adorable turtle dove perched on his hand and one of his eyes is closed oh and another thing if yur as big of a yami/yugi fan as i am u have to check out Klonoas work and her website just got to her author page on FF.net her magazines clippings or however u call it its not a manga but its like an anime porno magazine and it has yugi in it along with yami and the others one thing different though is that in the scenes wich u should recignize hes not a happy camper cuz everyone is after his yugi and we all know how he reacts when someone tries to take whats his hehe ^__^ now were was i oh yes keep up the great work Sansi oh and here *hands Sansi a Wurmslayer* take this its a large spear like weapon with a blade shaped like i capital upside down W with spikes on its top guess thats why its called a wurmslayer its big enough to slaughter a wurm (wich by the way is a giant lizard like creaturn that cant fly its looks like a dragon but it cant fly like i said its from EverQuest great game ^_^)now help me "slay"the Son of bitch pardon my language ^^;; who dares to threaten yugi *charges after the voices hurting *yugi oh and by the way joey *slaps joey in the face* snap out of it nows not the time to start feeling sry for yourself ok we all make mistakes no one is perfect and if u are sry for what happened to yugi then help him out in what ever way u can sheesh and same goes double for u Yami aka DUMBASS geeze at this rate its going to take him yet ANOTHER five million yrs before he gets it *shrugs *oh well TTFN TA TA FOR NOW and dont forget to update sansi now come on we've got voices to destroy*charges on ahead*
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on October 14, 2004
RD:^_^ thanks Sansi hehe im glad u like my reviews but uh one sec oh and hear*hands sansi ear pluggs* youll need them *takes a deep breath and screams at the top of her lungs YOU BAKA YAMI AND U TO JOEY HOW COULD U BE SO THOUGHTLESS YOU KNOW HOW MUCH YAMI CARES ABOUT YUGI AND THE FEELING IS VERY MUTUAL huh yami would die for yugi and the same goes double for yugi they bothe would risk their lives for each other how could u forgeat Eat EVEN EEVEEEN when Yami was the cause of them losing against that one blond dude from the dooms organization series even then yugi still supported yami damit the boy gave him everything friends family love compassion and new memories naturally yami would want to return the favor and he has protecting yugi and all that he cares for even Kaiba though the bastard dosnt deserve it half the time still yami helps cuz of what yugi has taughm hum huh next time look CAREFULLY before u do someting its like what merlin said on Sword in the Stone and i quote" always look before u leap* be wise to put those words to practice my friend ur a good guy but you just need to be careful sometimes and think further before u push through ok being reckless is a Kaiba thing and last i checked joey YOUR NO KAIBA *pants out of breath from yelling*huh baka inu sheesh oh well keep up the great work Sansi and we can only hope YAMI gets his act together and gets that "scrawny" ass of his up and after yugi before its too late grrr cuz if u dont yami i swear to ra ill send my Red Eyes Black Dragon and Hyozanryu after u you well gtg now TTFN TA TA FOR NOW ^___^
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