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Reviews for Grown Up Nice!

By : MLapalme
  • From ANON - Catchfire on October 17, 2004
    Great story!!!!!!!!! good plot, good lemons, cool pairing. want more now please '~'

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  • From ANON - Pack Raht on October 14, 2004
    OHOHOH!! Please keep goinng! I wanna see what punishment Mokuba will have in store for Bakura!!
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  • From ANON - Sisco on September 30, 2004
    Okay, this is absolutely my favorite story!! O_O I want more!! You're such a cool author and you're actually inspiring me to finish my "A Small Dragon's Fun" fanfic. It also has the main odd pairing Mokuba x Bakura...except Mokuba is only 15. ^^; Heh. Oh pretty please write more!
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  • From ANON - Nomalaz on September 19, 2004
    Ah, you've turned it into multi-chapters! I was wondering about the package. Now what about the envelope? SHould I feel sorry for Bakura? To a point, yes, but seeing what Mokuba is doing to him makes it hilarious!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2004
    ohhh yea!!!...u continued the story!!!!!! i can't wait!!!!
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  • From ANON - EgyptianGoddess on September 15, 2004
    I lOVE YOU!! People rarely doing spanking in fics which is a shame because if done right it can be VERY sexy! So i must congratulate you on this! I love spanking but unfortunatly i rarely get to see it. T_T So thank you! You have a very interesting writing style, i like it, although you need to spellcheck more. One more note. That dare between Mokuba and Bakura in the past, i would've love to have seen more of that, it would've been nice to see Bakura spank Mokuba and see how he would react. Any chance of you doing a prequel perhaps? Bakura got what he deserved however and it was rather funny in some places! ^_^ I know from experience how hard that pairing can be, i did myself as part of a challenge in a group that i belong to. The reason i didn't post it here is because i'ost ost my password and am unable to get into my account right now, hence the reason (Or 1 of them anyway) why i haven't been posting lately. So, good job, even if Bakura was slightly ooc, as in hating the dark etc...it was also amusing! ^^ I really hope that you do more of this kind of thing, i have plently ideas for such things if you ever need inspiriation, e-mail me...please, i'd love to talk and throw around ideas. Later! ^__^ Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Nomalaz on September 14, 2004
    It's true what they say: What goes around, comes around. ::snickers:: I have never seen this pairing before and I have to admit, it was goooooooood! My thanks to Shadow of Light for sending me the link to your fic. Can't wait to see more of your work!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on September 13, 2004
    Two words describe this story: HOLY. SHIT. And I mean that in a good way! First off, MokubaxBakura pairing? Okay I had my doubts but reading this I was floored! That whole dare about T.R. it took me a moment but Tomb Raidier? How could he not put that as his name? *giggles* Seriously, Kura a slave and Mokie the master? Ooh what could be hotter?? *day dreams then shakes head* Um scratch that. It's sad to see this story end but I am highly reccommending this to all my friends!! You have a superb creativity and writing style!! I bow to you *does a deep bow*
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