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Reviews for Blood Offering

By : Meredith
  • From Rachel000 on May 25, 2010
    Nice intro, is there going to be anymore?

    D/2
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  • From Shuman on August 16, 2007
    Update soon Plz!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ghostgirl932 on November 23, 2005
    This is a really good story and I hope very much that you update soon. It would be sad if you didn't finish it.
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  • From ANON - AngeloflightPd on September 29, 2005
    I have read this chapter so many times hoping you will up date soon. I am still waiting, and also i want you to know that i like this story. I would like to know what happen to yugi, and how you are going to end this story.
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  • From ANON - Yana on August 11, 2005
    Yugi please be ok
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  • From ANON - DarkGatomon on August 07, 2005
    Ooh, spiffy! Very nice start here. Your dialogue is quite nice. You're a little careless at times about proofreading, it seems ("...the village in the woods that had *reminded* almost completely unchanged..." for instance), but it isn't too bad. Your only major technical problem seems to be ignorance about a rule of quoting -- when a quote is followed by a phrase like "he said," "explained she," or "he asked," you use a comma at the end of the quote instead of a period (although if it's a question mark or an exclamation point at the end of the quote, that punctuation can still be used). A really, really stupid example:
    Yugi said, "This looks fun." He blinked. "What are you doing?" he asked. "It looks odd," he added, "but then, what do I know?"
    That was complete babbling, of course, and I would be horrified if you used so many descriptions of what he was doing in the middle like that, but it contained some examples of the proper way to do it. I hope that helps.

    Back to your story, though -- it's well-written except for that, and is very appealing. I hope you decide to write more of it! I'm curious what you'd been planning to do next.
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  • From ANON - Kira on March 25, 2005
    Update! Update! Update! Update! THis story seems really good from the first chapter and I wanna read more! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Liliath on February 25, 2005
    correct me if I§m wrong, but I think that you have this posted on ff.net...either way, I like it^_^ update soon!^^
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  • From ANON - cuussuoutclean on October 16, 2004
    nice, very nice.....has a kind of sadist twist to it.....lovely indeed....keep going....
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  • From ANON - cherry on September 21, 2004
    I read the other one before, i like them both but please update.
    You wrote the other one and did not continue with the story, Please do with this story.
    WRITE MORE. good story but write more...
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  • From ANON - kitty-yasha on September 17, 2004
    Ooo i like it! please continue asap!
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on September 16, 2004
    RD:well that was fun but when are things going to get heated up around here hehe if he is making yugi his slave I only hope he dosnt go to far i dont want to see that boy get hurt sry i just have this overwelming need to keep him safe at all costs well keep up the great work TTFN TA TA FOR NOW ^___^
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  • From ANON - pearlist on September 15, 2004
    get the nexts chapter out soon i love it
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  • From ANON - Empress on September 14, 2004
    ^^UPDATE^.^PLEASE^_^
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