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Reviews for Coalescence

By : TheCzarina
  • From ANON - Rez on July 13, 2003
    Awwww!!! I'm absolutely loving this story!!! Then again, I love almost all of your stories. Damn you and you're addictive writing. *shakes fist*

    In any case, this is an awsome story! I'm loving the whole tension that was between Yugi and Seto in the beginning. Plus all of that wonderful interaction between Yami and Seto. To make things even better you added some fluff between Seto and Yugi. Overall, KAWAII!!!

    It's also wonderful how you are just having the truth be known to all of Yugi's friends. In the beginning it would have been a little hesitant, however, as it is now, after they've established a good foundation to their relationships, its at a good time.

    I absolutely love the way you write. From the fact that you are decent enough to check your paragraphing, grammar, spelling and punctuation. So few authors respect their readers enough to do that. I would just like to thank you on that. Similarily, you don't overcrowd your story with detail or dialogue. You seem to have a wonderful mesh. Also the fact that you have such wonderfully long chapters. That is one of the things I appreciate most. Mainly because authors write maybe ten pages and feel it is enough to post. That's no where near long enough. You give your readers something to read, and not just glance over. Thank you!

    Finally, I would juste toe to say update often. When I find authors I really, really like, I find it agonizing to wait so long for a new chapter. I realize that you have a life away from your computer and writing some amazing fanfictions. However, I tend to have this little habit of reading constantly. With so few good quality fics out there, I try to cling onto those few that I can find. Updating just makes my day.

    Okay, I'm done now. Till next chapter then! Keep typin'
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on July 07, 2003
    RD:hey Red Dragon here great ficcs kes keep it up i want to see yugi and yami become seprete beings and fight with seto at there side one DM one BEWD and one um i another DM cuz it is his favortie monster and i cant really think of any other monster that is like yugi but i bet its like the most powerful ones like exodia and the magician of black chaos so keep up the good work i hope to read more soon so pls PLS PLS PLS continue to write more and let everyone know that together no one will stand a chance against yami and yugi well i gtg now bye
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  • From ANON - Yamislove on July 07, 2003
    I love your story !!!!! Yami and Seto are so hot!!!!! They are my favorite pair!!!!!!!!!!! The storyline is great!!!!!!!!! Please
    continue to write, you are one hell of a writer!!!!! I wish I could write like that!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Chibi-chan on July 07, 2003
    Sweet. Loved it. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - BuffyM on July 07, 2003
    Great!Super great!Write tons more!!!!!!Please?
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  • From ANON - lupusdragon on July 06, 2003
    Karen: "our Yugi?!" CUUUUUTTTTE!
    LD: *gag*
    Karen: Come on, you know you liked it.
    LD: I like the angst, the uncertainty, and the lemony freshness.
    Karen; Of course you did.
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  • From ANON - Debra on July 01, 2003
    Love the story. Can't wait for more!!!!
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  • From ANON - lupusdragon on July 01, 2003
    Karen: ^_^ Great chappie! So much happieness. And Ryou/Bakura they are so cute
    LD: Yami Bakura is not cute. Not cute! Hot, hot, hot!
    Karen: And seriously, Otogi and Ryou together *drool*
    LD: Really good, fun chapter. It is sad how the dubs destroy some of the deeper meanings in anime. Like american viwers aren't mature enough to uderstand some of the concepts *sigh* That is why I got the imported YGO DVDs instead of the engilsh ones ^_^
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  • From ANON - zatken on June 30, 2003
    Dang....I am soooo happy for Yami, Seto, and Yugi....but what will happen next?????
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on June 30, 2003
    YD: Jou's so funny!
    DD: And Otogi and Ryou ARE cute together.
    YD: That bitch Anzu BETTER keep out of it!
    DD: *waves M. Pencil* I may have to take her eye out!
    YD: NExt chappie? Soon? Please?
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  • From ANON - zatken on June 28, 2003
    Man - this story's getting better and better. And my golly, I joined Jounouchi on the floor when he heard that confession from Yugi....mya mya....

    Keep up with the story! Update very very soon, please :-D
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on June 28, 2003
    YD: HEHEHE!! Joey...hahaha
    DD: More! Wanna read more!!
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  • From ANON - Julia on June 28, 2003
    Hi YamiCzarina!

    WOW, what an awesome fic!!! This is one of the best fics I've ever read (and believe me when I say it must have been around 2000!) and I'm sooooooooo waiting for more. So please, don't let us hanging for too long! You're a great writer!!!

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  • From ANON - zatken on June 25, 2003
    Man, I read all 28 chapters - each one being more awesome than the next one! Please please please update very very soon :-D
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  • From ANON - Chibi-chan on June 25, 2003
    *shudder* Yuugi × Yami (or vice-versa) still creeps me out. @_@; The lemon was good. :) I enjoyed it.
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