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By : Aten

From ANON - Kaede on May 13, 2003
YAY!! Ryou's a Guy again!! YEAHH!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Michael on May 13, 2003
That... Dream... almost got me grab a nearly tough item to make the computer break into piece till I realize it a test as it gave me a HEART ATTACK. I was about to kill Bakura, Marik, Kabia, and Joey SOOOOO BADLY as they wish they never been BORN. But I am so grab it just a test. It just scare the hell outta me. Warn me next time. Would ya? lol It one freak out story. I like to said... YAY!!!!! I am so glad Ryou is back as one of us. ^-^ I was wonder if he ever come back toa maa man. I love him as a man. I don't mind a woman, but he was born as a man and I love him as a man. He so cute as one. ^-^ I can't WAIT for Bakura to mate with Ryou. No. Just a pair. Just Ryou and Bakura. This must be only for fully Bakura.. make it inteanse love yaoi between Ryou and Bakura.. make it like Ryou AND Bakura slip on ice and cannot get up. lol ^-^ I would be so happy. Maybe Ryou will get chance back with Malik and Marik, I think maybe next it be Marik... Marik is suffer the whole.... Busy bea lol lol ^-^ He need it, but not next chapter. Maybe AFTER Next Next chapter. Please. I am sure it be GREAT on Angst. ;) And then Malik and then... WHOLE EVERYONE. ;) lmao So.. Keep it up. And... Try to make the freak out less. lol Your creation, and I can't stop you. But I just like to ask. :) So, keep it up. You doing great job. Don't ever lose this interset. This is going to be one heck of the book. If only you can allow to make a book outta of it. :) I love ya all and BTW, Happy mother day Ra. *hugz ya tight* Keep in touch. As for Ryou, he once a woman and I wanna said this to him... Happy mother day to you. *hugz Ryou* You will make a great mom. I believe in you.. in my heart. *touch myself on the chest* Keep it real.
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From ANON - AngelicMouseGirl on May 13, 2003
HE'S A BOY AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!! ^__________^ LEMON LEMON LEMON ALWAYS!!! I don't have a preferance which one, just have a lemon please! ARIGATO! Oyasumi Nasai!
~Bakura/Ryou Yaoi Forever!~
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From ANON - BuffyM on May 13, 2003
Bakura and Ryou of course!lots of lemony goodness!!!You should have it where Ryou becomes immortal too.So, she-uh he now lol can be with his yami forever! like marik and malik.have them all immortal somehow!!!!! please?*joey's puppy dog eyes*Please??
Joey:*eyeless*ahh,where are my eyes?*trips over Anzu who was asleep waking her up*
*pops joey's eyes back in*
joey:eh,thanx.ahh Anzu!!! no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
anzu:*chases him*FRIENDSHIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
All:*sweatdrop*
Great story me and my Yami Spike love it!Don't we Yami?
Yami Spike:Hell yeah!
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From ANON - lupusdragon on May 12, 2003
LD: Give us the YAOI!
Karen: You really did set that up for a little lemony goodness...
LD: I vote foursome!
Karen: Of course you do.
LD: Well what do you want?
Karen: I don't really care... I mean it is not important. I definitely want a lemon, however.
LD: Yay for yaoi lemons
Karen: And Ryou is going to have to risk his (Yay, he is a boy again!) life to save the babies. With no one to help him... poor Ryou.
LD: He can do it. Ryou is stronger than he looks. He survived Evil Bakura afterall.
Karen: Yeah, if he can do that, he can do anything!
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From ANON - gralnak on May 12, 2003
HOT DAMN!
YamiGralnak:HOT DAMN!

NOW THINGS ARE BACK THE WAY I LIKE IT! WOOHOO!!!
YEAH! RYOU'S A BOY AGAIN! I DON'T CARE WHO IS IN THE LEMON, EVERYTHING
IS FINE WITH ME!!!!
heehee, I liked the little Seto X Joey part of the dream......mmmm
:)GRALNAK, you friendly reviewer who has been waiting day after day for this chapter to come.
Im so happy I could practectly jump right into the story, and dance around singing "RYOU IS A BOY AGAIN, BOY AGAIN" over and over again.......

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From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on May 12, 2003
Ryou's back to normal! Yay! I want foursome chappie! Haven't had one of those for awhile. The whole fire thing was creepy. Hehe, the lemony goodness is a good idea. ^_^
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From ANON - Michael on May 11, 2003
*laughing out loud* Oh dear Ra!! Marik new job is EVEN WORSE!!! Oh Ra... You are so mean to Marik... I gotta see him at work. I can't imagine in my head what he look like and what happen at work. lol It got to be 4 time WORSE than Mr. Happy Pickle. :P Hee Hee. And same for Bakura everyone. What an idea for buying a Dark Magican for Aria to play and chew on. Hee Hee. And that will make Auntie's temper go THOUGH the roof. Bakura is doing a GOOD job making the Yami piss off. lol As I agree with the logical. "You may kill us before Yami, but ya can't kill us twice." lol Poor Yami. I wish I could do something for my favorite person. Yami/Yugi. At least Yugi don't care cause he is Yugi. The most sweet guy for me. ^-^ He kewl and handsome. ;)

Ryou as a Man: What about me?
Malik: And me?
Joey: Me too?
Kabia: I thought I was your favorite.
Quad: Ryou, you are shy little guy when I learn from you. Malik, you are gentle as a kitty, but too much on Rod. Joey, go find yourself a bone cause you whine too much. And Kabia, you are my favorite... To play with. You are the most powerful guy I ever met. :)
Yami: HA!! Sure.. And he get his ass whop by me!
Quad: Not with me. ^-^
Yami: Bring it on.
Quad: ..... Maybe later Auntie. *run away*
Yami: GRRR!!!! GET YA BUTT BACK HERE!!! *chasing after Quad*

*Panting as I run* So, keep it up Ra. You doing great. It getting more love and funny with the creation ya making. :) I am proud of Aria first word. Daddy. :) It so cute. Keep it up. Who know it can call him Auntie? *point behind me* Yami: I will get you and when I do, I will summon Dark Magican to harm you SLOWLY! Quad: I hope I get to hear from you more. ;) Ciao! *panting hard as disappear*
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From ANON - The Mystical Dragon on May 11, 2003
:grabs a box of kleenax and hands out hankies, taking one for herself: ohhh my :huggles Malik, Ryou and the chibis: it's okay sweethearts.

Dear lord, that sounds scary.... but good work! :hugs Bakurasgirl:
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From ANON - Danae2120 on May 11, 2003
Aw! T'is soo kawaii! Aten and Aria are just adorable. Anubis better keep his grimy claws off of the babies or he'll face MY wrath.

Poor Marik. First it's Mr. Happy Fun Pickle or whatever, now it's Busy Beaver. How much worse can it get?
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From ANON - gralnak on May 11, 2003
Aten, makes me feel fuzzy inside......yeah........heehee......
I really hope that he does not become evil....sooooo fuzzy.....yeah...
:)GRALNAK

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From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on May 11, 2003
YD: Busy Beaver! BWAHAHAHA!
DD: Poor Marik..hehehe
YD: When are they going to go after Anubis?
DD: They need to kick some butt!!
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From ANON - Michael on May 10, 2003
Grr... Curse him. Every time the Yami leave, he show up. And I have feeling love is beginning to overcome, but it still not enough I know. It take more than love. It take knowedlge the love. :) Aten is going to be fine. He going to be strong like Ryou. He have a gentic that going keep on fighting for living. Aria, well.. For min I THOUGHT she was doing to harm Ryou, but I agree with Ryou AND Bakura. She is hurguy and she is a bloodlust. :P I can't blame her cause it in her Gene. :) I am so happy for those two kid. ^-^ *giggle* Keep it up Kid. Yes.. Yami is Auntie. He Auntie Yami.

Yami showing vien on it forehead: Mortal. You need to stop that.
Quad: What? It true. Beside, you look and sound good with a name Auntie. ^-^
Yami: Grrr... I thought ya have crush on my little Yugi and me.
Quad: I do. ^-^ That doen't mean I am on your side. lol Are you trying to gather people to be on ya side?
Yami: NO NO! What ever you talking about? o.o
Quad: Bakura and Marik... PLEASE keep it ith ith the Auntie. You are doing good job.
Yami: DAMN IT! I am not auntie.
Quad slap Yami: Hey... There kid here. Keep the cuss down.
Yami: ....

Anyway, Keep it upRa. Ra. ^-^ You doing great. The kid is growing up as so CUTE and that little boy Aten is so awsome with his Toy Rod hitting on his father. It so funny. I wonder what happen if that boy get hold of his Father's Rod. Who know what power that kid can unleashed. lmao I bet it be funny and cute, but danger. lol So... Keep it up. Take ya time with ya vaction. COME ONE everyone don't rush it. She need break. Everyone got break. She got a life ya know. Let have a big break and I am postive is she get more break, the better idea and better story she can come up with. ;) Trust me people. I know it. She can able pull off the BEST chapter of your LIFE!!! I know she can. I have faith in her. ;) Good luck. And Ra bless.
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From ANON - ssjgoddesschico on May 10, 2003
Awwww! The scenes wehre they tried to say everyones names was so cute ^_^
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From ANON - hato_chiisai on May 10, 2003
I love it! I absolutely love it! Aten is SO ADORABLE!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next cjhapter, and it's so cute how he calls Malik Mama! *Squeals, and glomps Aten* As for Aria, it's kinda creepy, but I found one of my fic ideas from a while ago, wich was basically the idea of Ryou turning into a girl and having a baby, (I told you about it when you were still working on the Fall of Icarus, remember?) Well, here's the creepy thing....... I was gonna make Ryou have a son, and name it Aryah. o_O yah.... wierd. But I love what you've done with all this. Hope to IM you soon, you haven't been on much lately! Anyway, keep going! The fic's great!!!!! ^_^
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