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By : Aten

From ANON - Danae2120 on April 24, 2003
Awww.....poor Bakura. Couldn't take a birthing movie, hm? Well, can't wait 'til your next chapter. Reading this story is always the highlight of my day!
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From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on April 24, 2003
Poor Bakura! *snicker* Serves you right boy, for that comment you made at the begining of the last chapter! Marik's sooo funny! and Malik's too cute! This is great!!
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From Lupusdragon1 on April 24, 2003
Karen: Yuck. All of those health videos are nasty.
LD: Especially the ones were the stick the tiny video camera up...
Karen: Oooookaaaayyy, lets stop that train of thought right there.
LD: * shrugs * Whatever. Hehehe, Malik learning about erogenous zones... practicing... practicing on Marik... oh my...
Karen: Hunh, she didn't even notice the Anzu bashing... oh well. Maybe the guys could stuff Anzu in her locker for a couple of days, then she could see how truly friendly locker are * grins evilly * And DAMN, Ryou is already into the second trimester, (S)he hasn't even been pregant for a week! This is gonna turn bad soon, I can feel it.

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From ANON - hotaruchan27 on April 24, 2003
Well, I can't get mediaminer to cooperate with me (for the 3rd day in a row) so I'll do this here.

Tigerlily: Lucky for you she updates both.

Yuppers! As usual we love it. Poor Bakura, having to relive his past. I hate Steven. I so wanted to strangle him when Bakura was introducing Ryou. That 'twas funny but sad. Seto is soooo generous. Looks like they won't have to worry about money now.

Tigerlily: Marik should be thrilled.

Marik: Yes!! No more Mr. Happy Pickle for me!!

Malik: Awww, but I thought you liked it when your pickle was happy. And there's something about a man in uniform. *snicker*

Yeah, but will they take it? It was easy with the money he got for the heart operation because it was anonymous and it was life or death. Hhhmmmm, I wonder. I love Seto and Jou's reactions to the news. When is Ryou is going to get his ultrasound? I can't wait until they find out that Ryou's carrying both their babies. Bakura seems really down in the dumps. It'll really cheer him up.
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From ANON - Michael on April 24, 2003
Oh GEE. I can't believe Joey is a such a horny puppy. lol It is funny when Yami said, "Gave a puppy a bone." lol That is funny. :P Also I can't believe Yami is STILL bei pri prick for Marik. I thought he would still be asshole for Bakura as well. o.O But you know what scare me? Yami is hurguy and decdie to eat where Marik's work. Oh lord. I know all hell will break loose apart. lol And I bet Marik would wish he bring his Rod with him that day to control Yami. lol Man.. It a ugly picture.... UGLY. lol It going to be fun for the baby shower! ^-^ I can't wait for the baby shower and what up with these guy? These guy don't know what a baby shower and know how to set-it up? I pity them all. But ya know what sweet? Kabia gaving money away and I love the joke he commit. "Heck, I make that much money in my SLEEP!" And you know what is sad? I believe it. lol He DOE make ton of money. Boy.... A guy like him is a better earn than BILL GATE. Speaking of Bill Gate, can anyone find a spell I can used to kill Bill?

Marik: I got my Rod! I can control his money earn and I don't have to work no more! LMAO!!!
Quad: Nah. You stay and keep up the working. ^-^ Mr. Happy Pickie! lol It fit you perfect!
Marik: .... I will make sure you fell asleep and I will KILL YOU!!!!
Malik: Oh chill up.. Mr. Happy Pickie. lol
Quad: At least someone agree.
Marik: Grr... I will curse your life Quad! Mark my word and...
Quad: Shut up. I wanna double Cheeseburger with large Soda.
Marik: ................ *mumble* That be 3.15

Anyway, back what I am saiding. Also great job on the last chapter. It was a bad exp. I hate to see the whole history what happen to our sweet Bakura and the Evil side of Bakura. I felt bad for Ryou. I understand it is painfully to listen. Who want to know the whole bad life again in history. It gotta to be harsh and hard. I can't believe Steven SOMEHOW got that tape. Grr!!! I wish I have my video cambra to tape everything what done between Steven and Ryou and Ryou being attack and then bring it to court, but I am just a reader. Damn it. I hope he BETTER be in jail or I will come after him with the thousand knife all over him. No motral like him shall need to live. Grr. Anyway, Great luck of writing of the Creation of your story my Ra. *bow* It is GREAT! In In fact I love it. Esp that Review joke ya left. Ya know about the Purishment it be make Bakura to become Anzu's Boyfriend. THAT is worse in hell. lol In fact, he will kill himself the moment he get the chance. lol Anyway, I bid you a greater luck on the creation and your life. ^-^
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From astracindel on April 23, 2003
****Seto pulled Joey out of the kitchen.
Yami called out to him. �Yeah, go give your doggie a bone.�
Yugi blushed and slapped Yami�s sleeve again. �I wish you didn�t say that. That was so wrong!�
Yami laughed with his hikari. �Hey, this is Seto we�re talking about! He can take it like a man.�****

ROTFLMFAO!!!!!!! Sorry I haven't reviewed before now. I'm so bad about that. Anywho....I love this. You're doing such a great job. Never thought I would like a "preggie" fic with someone turning female, but you've proved me wrong. This is just great. :D
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From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on April 23, 2003
BWAHAHAHAHA!!! That was SOOO funny! Seto...Joey...hehehehe...*falls over laughing*
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From Lupusdragon1 on April 23, 2003
Karen: Yay Anzu bashing. hehehe Anzu voodoo doll!
LD: Yay for Yami's hentai jokes! That was too funny. Hehehehehehe
Karen: That was a really funny chappie, everything about it really.
LD: Yeah, and it is nice that the guy want to have a baby shower for Ryou! (S)he has such nice friends.
Karen: Ok, what is with the '(s)he' stuff?
LD: * glares * you do it too. Because you don't want to call Ryou "she" and thereby dash all of your fantasies...
Karen: * interrupting hastily * Ok, ok, sorry I asked! * blushes *
LD: * Grins * I win!
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From ANON - AngelicMouseGirl on April 23, 2003
;_; So very very sad...a lot of it. I hate Ryou's father. Plus I am pissed at mediaminer...it has not been working for me lately! Grrr.. baka site! I am glad this fic is here so I can read it still! Arigato! Ja ne! I for more soon! Always!

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From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on April 22, 2003
Damn that asshole who calls himself a father!! Is Ryou going to be okay? And please tell me Yami's not planning the baby shower? Oh gods! Something out of Cosmo, I'm sure!
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From Lupusdragon1 on April 22, 2003
Karen: * sobs * Poor Ryou. Poor Bakura. Waaaahhhh
LD: * sniffs * That is so sad. Steven's lawyer is a little sketchy, but he has a point... so long as he doesn't try to switch all of the blame onto Bakura.
Karen: Oh I just know that that is what he is going to try to do. He must be stopped!
LD: Hmmm, a baby shower... that has great potential... for good Anzu bashing!
Karen: Yes, I think some Anzu bashing and some good Rod jokes could help this tragically depressing story ^_~
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From ANON - AngelicMouseGirl on April 22, 2003
Updating sooner is better than later. ^_^ You R Super Fab. Keep up the awesome work. I hope Ryou is having two babies...that would be great. Oyasumi Nasai!
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From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on April 21, 2003
aaawww....so sweet! And there IS no feeling in the world like hearing your baby's heartbeat for the first time. I think you did a really good job of expressing that.
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From ANON - Shelia on April 21, 2003
Ohhhh!!! I remember how i got to hear my nephew's heartbeat when my sister was pregnant with him... it's so wonderful and so cool.

PS i have my keyboard fixe...slightly
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From ANON - Michael on April 21, 2003
Awwww! It was a wonderful dream I see from Ryou. So pure love and memory. ^-^ He was acting so cute and funny with his mom. :) And I know WHY that EVIL fail prode the Ryou's dream. His mom is protecting him. She is STILL around him, protecting the child that she make and love. :D No mortal or immortal Shall destory Mother love protect. So Take THAT foo! And also I bet our Ra is protect Ryou as well. Ra is the greatest Ra I ever bow before. :) But I still feel sad and despression of Bakura. He get a flashback of his fear of losing his love one and I bet on the line, he going to feel the same again. Ra no, I hope not. I hate to see Bakura fear for it. Bakura should stand up and fight fear. Fear is NOTHING. Fear CAN be overcome. You have nothing to fear, BUT to fear ITSELF! *stomp my foot on the ground to create earthquake a little* He can do it. I have faith in him. :D With Ryou, Malik, and Marik on his side, he do ido it! ^-^ Have a good creation story my Ra. *bow* Have a great of luck of love and hope for these love. :) Ciao now!
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