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By : Aten

From ANON - Danae2120 on April 21, 2003
Ryou's dream was cute, but Bakura's was so sad...*sniff* Please update soon!
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From ANON - Shelia on April 21, 2003
oh, you are a goddess! media miner's acting cranky and all, i fly fly found this to read!
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From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on April 20, 2003
Oh poor Bakura! That so sucks! The last thing he needs now is more stress!
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From ANON - Michael on April 20, 2003
Pityful Marik. What you expect Money comming from? The Sky? If you ask Seto for some money, I bet he will make you his pet sex slave and Malik would not be TOO happy about it. lol Come on. At least is not daycare that Ra put you in, other wise I would just LAUGH my ass off when you have to deal with mmoremore kid as you would be so ready to know how to take care of your/Bakura or even BOTH. ;) Ya know what Marik need for his work my Ra? Bakura eye. I know he stolen it from Peguaus. I have not heard from him for a while. I wish I could hear from him, but not helpful he gone face off the earth. Pity man. So Marik can read the mind and spook them by ok... Your mind tell me that you wanna a large pop with cheeseburger and you wanna to know how the FUCK I know that. That will do the trick. Hee Hee. Anyway, beside what ya expect outta this from? Cheap baby? Baby NEVER come cheap. Believe me. lol And you welcome Ra. I try my whole best to leave the best Review I can and I wanna everyone to come join the review and read Ra creation story. It the best in town I tell yau wiu will never been disappoted. I know it. Ra is the best writer in town and you are in for it. :D So, have good time reading the story and Ra bless everyone of you people. :) You too Ra.

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From ANON - AngelicMouseGirl on April 20, 2003
I was on vacation and didn't read this for awhile. It's getting very good! I love Marik as Mr. Happy Pickle! That's totally hilarious! ^_^ Bitchy Ryou-chan is funny too! I hope we find out the father soon... the stress of them not knowing that is showing a little I think. Anyways... Love this fic as always and want to see more chappies for it to be out super fast soon! Onegai? Arigato!!! ^-^ I am gonna check all the time! ^.^ Ja ne!
P.S. Is it a girl or a boy? ^-^
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From Lupusdragon1 on April 19, 2003
Karen: So Ryou knows (s)he is going to have two babies?
LD: Oh, Ryou's gettin' pissy! Gotta love hormones!
Karen: Ryou will really make a good parent.
LD: Oh yeah, and STOP HURTING AND TOTURING MALIK AND MARIK! * pants *
Karen: Um, I think she is a little upset.
LD: Just a little. But it is ok. The story is really good. Really really good. I just want them to be able to be on big happy family with out all of the intolerant bastards
Karen: I think I am beginning to rub off on her ^_~
LD: The gods forbid -_-

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From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2003
Baby of mine is a great story.the only problem is Anzu. Have the crab slice through her neck while she
is giving an "ANZU Friendship Speech."
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From ANON - Danae2120 on April 19, 2003
Oooh, and the tension mounts...anyway, at least it was resolved. Bakura's the only one you can't feel sorry for now. You pity Ryou because of the baby, Malik because he got beat up and his chemistry class hates him, and Marik because...well, we all know that one, right? Anyway, good chapter, and get the next one up soon because I'm far too impatient to wait for very long.
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From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on April 19, 2003
Well, mm.org is giving me trouble, so I'll review here. Great chapter! Poor Marik...it's getting to him already! *snicker* That boy's got to learn to control his temper! Did Yugi feel the baby move? Leave it to a bunch of guys to not be able to figure out there's NO WAY sho should have a belly already! Hmf...MEN!
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From ANON - Michael on April 19, 2003
OK! That it. I feel so bas of Marik! Bakura just make it worse and make an ass outta Marik. It time for Bakura to get the job to shut him up and teach him what it feel like to be laugh at. lol..... Mr. Happy Pickie. lmao

Marik: Ok. Come here Mikie! Maybe I show YOU who Mr. Happy Pickie now. Michael: Ummm... Help? Please? >.> *run away*

Anyway, Take about PRESSURE! Boy Bakura. How can ya stand in court that ya have not been trail for long time ago? This is going to be a tough pressure I ever see. And for Steven.... SHUT UP!!! Or I will PERSONALLY make you a girl, scream like a girl, and ACT like a girl. You can just shut up, pay attendtion in court and face the CHAIR! Something that SLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOW, painfully, and DEADLY!! Grrr... I wanna be there to watch everything of his death wish. He will die. I have fate for it. If he don't die, I will personally kill him myself. Anyway, Keep up the good work. The Trail is a VERY pressure feeling. Same thing for the Mr. Happy Pickie... ROTFLMFAO!!!!! *Marik twitching his eye as going to get his Rod* Umm... Ra? Help me. He going to get his rod on me. lol Anyway, good luck of the write and all of those reader get alot people to read this story! You will not get disapported. This writer is the Best writer I ever see. Ra put in it heart out that I ever see my world life! Come on down. :) Have good night!
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From ANON - Michael on April 17, 2003
Awww! Marik and Malik are finally so gently and kind ach ach other now. I am so proud of them. *teardrop* And another side of story, Ryou. MY GOD. I thought Preg. women eat alot later in month, but JUST beginning?! Gee. And also Ryou so demand women. lol Poor Bakura. Deal with nine month of seeing Ryou eating strange food that he never thought or see his Hikari eat. I just hopefully she won't start get SO hurguy as she will go after Anzu's Crab. lmao If she doe, Bakura, You need to find a rope or chain and lock her up. lol She will go crazy. That not a good sign. lol As for Ra, I wonder what Marik newfound job going to be. :) Also, if Bakura going to court for Ryou, will they find Bakura different and not right. I hate to see Steven get his side favor win over Bakura and Ryou. If so, I will go after Steven myself and MURDER HIM and I don't care I get lock up. I be like... I did you Bakura and Ryou a favor. Have nice day. Death row, here I come. lol Anyway, I hope you like my gift. :) I know Marik not going to be please with me. lmao Tough s**t Marik. I think it look so cute for the boy. lol Just make sure ya know which one your and his. lol Good luck write my Ra and have good day.
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From ANON - Danae 2120 on April 16, 2003
Aw...that was a sweet lemon. Marik's taken a turn the theter,ter, eh? Too bad he has to get a job. Can't wait for those chapters.
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From ANON - Michael on April 15, 2003
OH NO!! Marik getting a job?! You know, I know expactly what look good for Marik as job. He can be a police. Why I said that? If a bad guy running from the law, ALL he have to do is.. *sigh* and pull out his rod(I ain't going for a joke here. lmao) and used that to control the running away bad guy. He don't need a gun, wacking stick(Not what you think it is. lol), and handcuff. All he need is his rods uns unforim(I wonder how sexy he look in the police clothes), and the badge! Just imgaine that. :P But that just my suggestion for 5000 year old spirit who used to be a ex-tomb robber. BTW, here my gift for the Two kid.
One for the girl is a shirt of pic of of Yu-Gi-Oh in fluffy style. So Anime clothes style. Inside picture of Black Man gin girl look cuddle as she picking up the rose as well with Change of Heart is playing with Exodia who is a sweet sweet looking unharmful person as playing tag each other as well the blue eye white dragon flying in the air growling as might, but not scarey.
Second for the boy is a man-make rattle that look like... *can't said it as trying to open it mouth* Marik's Rod. No power, just simple rattle. THAT will drive Marik NUT!!! ;) What else that could drive Marik nut? That Malik job. He can simple tease him with the horny level. :P That the best he can do.
Anyway, that my gift, and here my other gift. A picture of Marik holding Ryou from behind as Bakura is holding Malik from behind as both of them is holding hand as so as Ryou and Malik is outside from it house as showing how much they care and look out for each other. As they make a prefect bond for each other. :) This picture is for Marik, Bakura, Malik, and Ryou. :) As well, this: *A card I hand into them* is a card that symbol of true love.. Is a picture of that Yugi gave it to Reb. While she is a annoy girl who want her blue eye white dragon back. Plu-ese. As this symbol also that I am favor for Yami and Yugi so much, but I am getting more into Bakura and Marik and they Hikari. ^-^ Both of them show the true love as I wish I could have for my own. :) My bond for their bond. I hope that make them grow great together.
Oh, and here... *a dog Tag with a remote* This is for Anzu, put this on her neck and whatever you find her annoy, just push this button as create a shock for her neck. :P lmao It for dog, but I think a dog is even SMARTER than her. lmao Anyway, keep up the good creation my Ra. Marik, good luck finding a job. Bakura keep up the good safety for Ryou life. And for those Hikari, You two behave and have good time in school. ^-^ I best to leave you people. Have good day and good luck.
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From ANON - Michael on April 14, 2003
Oh gee. It IS going to be a LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG time. I feel sorry for poor Ryou. Look like it going to be a Bakara's manhood Vs. Marik's manhood. I KNEW it was a bad idea for them to have sex with Ryou. God. I know Ryou was so horny, but yet why can Bakara take the women womb and Marik take the backdoor? lol It can be shareable! lmao!! No. It alway will be for Bakara and only Bakara. But I hate to see what happen if this happen to be Marik is a father. I don't think Bakara going to be gentlemen for while. Or yet, How can be possible if this could be two! Marik AND Bakara. Can that be possible? Who know? Ryou could finally got a TWIN BABY!! YAY! lol But yet, I do not want to know what going to happen to the baby and Ryou's life. It going to be a very risky and dangerous. Ra have mercy on Ryou life and soul. Please be alive. Keep it up Ra, You doing good writing this story. ^-^ *thumb up* This is going to be the best and my favorite story of all time.
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From ANON - AngelicMouseGirl on April 09, 2003
Hey Bakurasgirl! I didn't know you had your fics here. Cool! This is farther than at mediaminer right now so I read it and now I want even more of course...I'm a greedy person when it comes to your fanfiction. ^_^ This is moving along so great and I hope there is more SUPER SOON! Arigato! Lemon!! Fast! ^^; Yay. Oyasumi Nasai!
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