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By : Aten
  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on May 28, 2003
    DD: *jumps up and down clapping* WOOHOO!
    YD: And to top it off...there's gonna be a lemon next chappie!
    DD: *rolls eyes*
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  • From ANON - hato_chiisai on May 28, 2003
    lol I love that. How do we get back? Uhhh....... Does this mean that Aris and Aten had their own souls the whole time and tht Cinetti was just along for the ride like a yami? I thought they WERE Cinetti. If that was so, then destroying Cinetti's soul would have destroyed their souls as well........ o_O Okay, I've done my heavy thinking for the day. I LOVE ATEN!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Elys on May 28, 2003
    ( looks at coumputer strangly ) i didn't push the review button............. oh well THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so glad you broght him back!!!!!!^_^ oh and i absolutly wuv your story and of cors you!^_^
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  • From ANON - Elys on May 28, 2003
    OH THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Falling Leaves on May 28, 2003
    *happy tears* Malik's back... evil dudes are gone... Malik's back...
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  • From ANON - bluesummers on May 27, 2003
    hummm....I not sure what to say about that chapter..........uhhhh......soul crush?????
    :}BLUESUMMERS & YAMIGRALNAK
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  • From ANON - Danae2120 on May 27, 2003
    Aw, the reunion between Malik and Marik was touching. Nice chapter. Now the problem is how they get out of the underworld. Well, you probably have a good idea.
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  • From ANON - Rhea on May 27, 2003
    Ah, I finally read up to this chapter 59, but didn't review knowing everyone was ahead of me.

    I was almost crying for Marik. But then he got Malik back. So now I'm happy. Of course, now they have to get out of the underworld...

    Anyway, nice story. I think you're doing a very good job. Keep it up, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Ryou\'sMistress265 on May 27, 2003
    Love the ending babe. I was actually thinking that when Marik jumped. MALIK'S BAAAAAAAAAAAACK!
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on May 27, 2003
    YD: YEAH YAMI!! GO YAMI, GO YAMI, YOU DA BOMB, UH-HUH!
    DD: Calm down yami...geeze!
    YD: But did you SEE that?! Yami soul crushed him!! WOOHOO!
    DD: Well, I'm just glad Malik's going to be ok!
    YD: I feel a l com coming on!!
    DD: *rolls eyes* You would
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on May 27, 2003
    YAY! Malik's safe!! *hugs Malik tightly* He better not leave them again. Now thanettnetti is gone things should be better. I have a question. Since Aria and Aten were infants in the underworld, does that mean that they will come back with Malik and the rest? I hope so! They are so cute! I want em myself!
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  • From ANON - Kaede on May 27, 2003
    ... ... I am ... ... so ... ... darn ... ... stunned .
    Yo
    You didn't REALLY kill Malik did you? I hope not...but still

    Well this is good...but I don't think Mind Crush kills people does it?
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  • From ANON - AngelicMouseGirl on May 27, 2003
    YOU KILLED MALIK!!!! OMG!! HOW COULD YOU!?!! That made me cry...the whole chappy... ;_; I hope you update soon and it doesn't have another death...of one of the people we lanywanyways. Sooo MORE! Arigato! Oyasumi Nasai!^_^
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  • From ANON - Elys on May 27, 2003
    (sobing as she wright this ) PLEASE PLEASE I OF YOU DON'T KILL MALAK OR HOW EVER THE HELL YOU SPELL HIS NAME PLEASE DON'T KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DON'T KILL HIM PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(Can't countiun to typ because she is sobing so hard that she can barly see the screen)
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  • From ANON - BuffyM on May 27, 2003
    Sorry I haven't revied lately I have meant to but..-starts sobbing-that chapter!=(But,yeah..see they can come back.Like with my idea before.Ryou gathers the power of the millenium items to defeat cinetti and anubis once and for all.But at a cost,the powers takes Ryou's energy killing him the only ones left are Yami,Bakura,Marik
    "It can't end this way!"bakura says losing control
    The others can't even speak,Bakura does something that no one expected,he cries.Really cries.,He
    cries over Ryou and it seems to set off something.Because the others tears fall down too onto the others.And suddenly the millenium items glow once more.and the battlefield which was turned
    no
    nothing more than dirt and waste and death.Becomes a rich field blooming with flowers.And miracuriosly the fallen ones start breathing again.
    "Ryou!"Bakura hugs the boy tightly too him"Are you alright?I thought I lost you!"
    "I'm ok Yami.."sees Bakura's tears"Don't cry Yami"
    He kisses him.And the other Yami's kiss and hug there hikari's.And the others hug each other too.
    And...
    Yami gets on one knee and asks Yugi too marry him,Yugi of course says yes!And even more amazing Seto suddenly gets on on knee too and asks Joey to marry him.He of course says yes
    One more thing...
    Yami:Uh guys....
    They all turn to Yami

    Yami:..I am going to have a baby..

    Everyone's eyes go super wide and then Seto coughs to get everyone's attention as well

    Seto:...So am I...

    Lol how's that?You can take it from there if you ever think of doing that i would like that XD
    ::blows nose into tissue::

    Yami Spike::hugs Buffy::
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