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By : Aten
  • From ANON - BuffyM on May 18, 2003
    Love the story,having his innocent would be cooler to see.Yay,seto and cotton candy!*drools*
    liked the previous chapter too along with the others sorry i didn't review i was buzy but i loved it too.I love that it's a long story i love long stories!Have Bakura make Ryou wear some hot
    tight leather,
    Ryou:*blushes*Do I have to wear this?
    Bakura:Yeah!I promise I'll dot yot you want next time.
    Ryou::smirks:Anything?hmm...
    lol cause I've never heard Ryou wearing hot tight leather...mm i mean having yami and seto in leather was so..mmm...lol Say bye yami!
    Yami and Yami Spike:Bye yami!
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  • From ANON - Danae2120 on May 18, 2003
    Awww...Aten is just so cute and fluffy and I wish I could hug him. And Aria is adorable too. Hee. "Who's got daddy's bloodlust?"

    Hum...Steven being innocent would make a lot of conflict in the story can can't decide. Do as you please. ^^
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess (don on May 18, 2003
    I think that Steven should be guilty. The idea of the restraining order sounds good but I hate Steven so much I t I think he should be guilty. Ryou shouldn't have to put up with Steven again. The stupid bastard he is. Aten and Aria get cuter in each chappie. I want them for myself!
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  • From ANON - Elys on May 18, 2003
    10th review. I hope this helps with the vertik or how ever you spell it. steven is guilty. how yeah i love you and your story!!!!!!! ^_^ kill anzu and steven is guilty . this is my last reviev for now (cackles evilly)
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  • From ANON - Elys on May 18, 2003
    8th review. steven guilty
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  • From ANON - Elys on May 18, 2003
    alright so this time i achuly counted my reviews and this is the seventh review. makeven ven guilty.
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  • From ANON - Elys on May 18, 2003
    steven guilty. chibis cute!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Elys on May 18, 2003
    steven guilty.
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  • From ANON - Elys on May 18, 2003
    make steven guilty please.
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  • From ANON - Elys on May 18, 2003
    I just read some of the reviews and i agree with Tiamat Ryou and ra hra have been thourgh so much already. make steven aka asshole guilty.
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  • From ANON - gralnak on May 18, 2003
    can't breath........still laughing.......need......air....
    HOT DAMN!
    now that was funny, this chapter and the last, made me laugh so much.
    as for steven, he is evil, but you should decide what happens to him.
    ok, it official, you better make a Yaoi lemon scene with Aten, when he gets older, or Ill go insae, he is soooooo cute now, just imagine him in a few years *drools*......sorry if Im a sicko some times but I can't help it.
    :)GRALNAK
    check out ch10 of undying light.....it's very odd.....well you could really like it.......or really hate it......but now I wont have to worry about it.
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  • From ANON - Elys on May 18, 2003
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DO NOT I REPEAT DO NOT MAKE THAT ASS HOLE INNOCENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE IS GUILTY! GUILTY I SAY!!!!! please(makes puppy eyes)pleeeeeaaaaassee make steven guilty. its just no right if you don't. you can still make a some what sad sequel BUT with a happy ending hopefully (eyes the aother waraly)
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  • From ANON - Michael on May 18, 2003
    I am back from my vaction. ^-^ I miss Three Creation, my Ra. So far, it getting more interseting and more danger laid ahead. I vote for.... HIS DEATH ROW!!!! No wait. I got better idea. Life in prison. Along with that he going to meet... BUBBA! Big, hairy, ugly SOB, Bubba. *evil chuckle* Then he TOO will learn the true meaning of .. YAOI! But this time.. he will become a BITCH!!! Hee Hee Hee Hee! HAHAHAHA!! *coughing* Anyway, I hope Everyone vote his in Jail. please. If he go free, I will beg for Yami, Bakura, Marik, AND Seto to MURDER HIM SLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWLY! And so painfully that he will WISH that his family life never been born. Heck, I could do WORSE than all of them together they can do. I will make sure he will get rape every MIN of it till he will learn to love it and then kill him.. bring back him as monster reborn and then try to find another way to kill him and then monster reborn again.. and SO on.. So on... He WILL beg me to kill him once and for all. *smile evilly* Anyway, I am sorry for ya death of the family. If ya like someone to talk to, email me. :) I try to cheer ya up. ;) You are my great friend. I hate to see you get work up on it. So, I hope I get hear from ya soon as for the vote... I choose Jail. Jail Jail Jail. ^-^ Ciao now.
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  • From ANON - kazuki on May 18, 2003
    I vote guilty for Steven
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  • From ANON - Alaya on May 18, 2003
    That was disturbingly amusing. I LOVE the chappies with Anzu (especially when Aria bit her). Keep going! Ganbatte! oh and i think Steven should be soo guilty.
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