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Reviews for Going On

By : DracOnyx
  • From ANON - UsagiLovesDuochan on March 10, 2005
    Gaaah, somehow I just can't believe that Yami is death. I think it's not just Yuugi's mind playing trick on him. ^^ If it was, why bother with the whole scene of Yami going through that door? And wasn't he told that he would live then if he pass that test? *tries to remember* Anyway, I hope Yuugi will not be able do what he is about to do. At last not before it is really confirmed that Yami is dead, which I am still doubting. This is also the reason why I am not about to kill you yet. ^^ I will wait till we know it's reeeeeeally true. But for now, I am still positive that Yami IS in the puzzle, maybe just too weak to really contact Yuugi. *sighs* Somehow this whole scene now starts to remind me of Romeo and Juliet. *groans* I just hope the ending will be a lot better, happy end. After all, how could someone be so cruel to leave Ryou and Malik with their Yamis and Yuugi is supposed to be left alone? ^^;

    The chapter was enjoyable by the way. I could really feel with Yuugi. His pain, the pain of his friends, the desperation. Very well written, well done chapter.


    *UsagiLovesDuochan /`^_^´
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  • From ANON - Cathrath on March 09, 2005
    HELL NO YOUR NOT DOING THAT TO ME.......You have...AAAAAAHHH (That was me dropping off the cliff, i just couldn't hold on anymore). If i start chanting SEQUAL, SEQUAL in a really annoying manner will you continue PLEASE. Despite my almost inhuman desperate need for a happy ending for Yugi and Yami and i really hope they get one finally in the sequal. Might i just say that was a fantastic last chapter. Neither one way or the other but just happily settled in the middle. Man you really know how to torture us :-). Poor Yugi he's so lost without Yami. Please don't let him do it. Yami's still there right....he'll stop him from doing the stupid thing...... My nerves just can't take this. Please do a sequal and soon my dramatic plundge was stopped by a conveniant branch so i'll be around to read and review...just don't leave me to long...think of my safety if not my sanity. Great work
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  • From ANON - Tashica on March 09, 2005
    WHHAAAAAAAAAAAAT?! but...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! *holds out offering of Creme Horns* I promise I wont kill ya, this offering is proof of that...BUT YA CANT JUST LEAVE IT THERE!! YOU JUST CANT!!!!! Its...Its...ITS NOT FAIR!!!


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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on March 09, 2005
    *shaking head* Now I can see why DracOnyx went into hiding...This chappie is way too angsty! Yugi, your death would hurt your friends! Besdies Yami wouldn't want you to kill yourself! He'ld want you to LIVE!
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  • From ANON - shy on March 09, 2005
    *knocks quietly at the bombshelter door before leaving a note and creme horn and shyly running away*
    Note: Ever so shy and quiet yay for updateness.....but oh poor everyone. I shyly want to just reach through the computer screen and pull them all into a shy firece hug. Pretty shyly please keep up the good work and oodles of shy sorries for disturbing you.
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  • From ANON - Lady Laran on March 09, 2005
    Must reach...wombats!!! *struggles under the dogpile of Yugi and Yami* Tell me you are not leaving it like this, girl!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Okay..I know what you were thinking..sorta..but you seriously can't end it like that!!! *huggles* Glad you updated!
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  • From ANON - Sansi on March 09, 2005
    WHAT *gives creme horns* Come out!!! I promise I won't hurt you - not too much at least!!!!! ARGHHH

    How could you leave it there ;_; Please please consider a sequel
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on March 09, 2005
    SSF: Oh DracOnyx...it's your favorite stalker...come out come out wherever you are...
    Yami SSF: She's not going to come out, baka hikari. And after than chapter I can see why.
    SSF: Fine. I'll do it the other way. *falls to knees outside the bombshelter* PLEASE DON'T LEAVE IT THERE! *Puppy dog eyes* I'll give you creme horns and plushies...just please don't leave us hanging! I just want another chapter...or a sequel...or an epilogue...or SOMETHING!
    Yami Bakura *peeking out from the bomb shelter* Is she always like this?
    Yami SSF: *Sighs and rolls eyes.* You have no idea...
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  • From ANON - ladywolf_Terri on March 09, 2005
    Oh you are an evil woman!! XD...Great job!!
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  • From ANON - Angel Kawaii on March 09, 2005
    *wipes tears* Ahhh! He can't! Please don't Yugi! You'll only cause more pain! *breaks into sobs* Please help him!!! Update soon. Ja
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  • From ANON - ladywolf_Terri on March 05, 2005
    Oh yes..my soul sister you are evil!! *LOL* Great job!! Now you have to update this soon!!..^_~
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  • From ANON - cathrath on March 04, 2005
    That bomb shelter is not going to help this time. Oh man what a cliff hanger, it is isn't (reviewer gives puppy dog eyes at Author). Kage is dead GOOD. what a bastard but Yami had better not be (chews fingers nails). Puzzle's still got to play a part right? AAAHH to many unanswered questions
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  • From ANON - ~!~Shelly~!~ on March 04, 2005
    OMG!!!!!!!!!Before your eyes is the sadest chapter ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AHHHHH RITE MORE>>>YA GOTTA RITE MORE X.X
    bye
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  • From ANON - Lady Laran on March 04, 2005
    *hand twitches to move towards the wombat kennel and finds that she has been pounced and pinned by Yugi and Yami* Now I know why you made me promise not to throw anything! lol....better get a move on with the next chappy though because I want that happy ending! Great installment, Drac...

    See..no wombats!!! :-p
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  • From ANON - Angel Kawaii on March 04, 2005
    *wah* This is soo sad! I love it! Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens. Ja ne!
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