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Reviews for Going On

By : DracOnyx
  • From ANON - shy on March 03, 2005
    *looks shyly at the bomb shelter door before revieving a poke from her muse to knock* Um...pretty shyly please I'm really very sorry....I...I just *gets another poke and a whispered "go on" in her ear* I just wanted to shyly say that this fic.....shy wowness. I .....I really am shyly jealous. Um.....pretty shyly please I hope you feel better and I'm really shyly sorry to have bothered you *shyly grabs her muse's hand and breaks into a run away from the bomb shelter before the authoress can send a tomb robber or Seph after them*
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  • From ANON - Stargazer7281 on March 03, 2005
    OOOOHHHH, so far so awesome. I'm in love with this story. I can imagine all kinds of separate directions this story could go from here. Although I do have a good idea how a happy ending would work out, it may not be the happy ending. You are a wonderful writer and I look forward to seeing where you take us with the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Chaos Dragon on March 03, 2005
    Damn wow, that was a great chapter! lol but i guessed that put a damper on the gang's plans. Can't wait to read more!! that was an evil ending lol
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  • From ANON - Usagilikesduochan on March 03, 2005
    *shakes head and grins as much as she is able to after reading such a story* Don't think that I will believe for one second that Seto just stabbed Yami's body, because I won't. I even refuse to. :p Woah, this story really IS angsty as hell. I always loved a good portion of angst and drama but... you just... woah, WOAH, this is even too much for my poor heart. I think I died at last ten times from a heart attack per chapter. And there are really people out there who call ME evil for my cliffhangers. But... do I allow for Yami to be dragged apart from Yuugi when they were just about to finally come to terms with each other? ^^; That was a really mean thing to do from you. But HELL did I enjoy reading those chapters, especially the lemon there. ^^ Anyway, with that scene with Yami in the latest chapter, him just going through the door after overcoming his own fears and pain, I really won't believe that you kill him off now. There were no signs that he was sharing his body with Kage. From the description it sounded more like the had something of a link, but nothing more. If I am guessing right here I would just be veeeeeery sorry, that Kage had never the chance to learn that Yami is quite well and will not join him to hell. ^^

    Anyway, I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter. This story really has me bound to its feet. I am glued to it and waiting for the next chapter to come out hopefully soon. ^^


    *UsagiLovesDuochan /`^_^´
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on March 03, 2005
    YES!! THEY DID IT! Granted it was by total accident, and if Yugi hadn't solved the Puzzle and Yami stepped past his fears, they would have lost. But Yami's back in the puzzle, right? And Kage's dead. (I hope I'm right, anyway.)

    Oh. btw - if you want a beta reader, I'm available. I noticed a couple glitches in the text - nothing major.

    Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Cathrath on February 28, 2005
    Wow fast update, great. Loved it. Please update again really soon.
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on February 27, 2005
    Well, I thought of one way they could kill Kage, keep Yami alive and in his own body to boot! The Ring could seal Kage's soul into another object. Of course, that might be easier said than done.

    Great chapter; you've got me thinking about that clue. The Puzzle is the key...

    Please update when you can! Thanks for the early chapter!
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  • From ANON - Sansi on February 27, 2005
    That was fast. I hadn't even time to review the last one.
    GOOOOOD JOB. I really love a good angst story. And this is definitely one of them.
    Though I'm not very fond of the Shadi-person. He always shows up at the most strange occasions and than he always talks in riddles!

    HOpe you are fine (unter the circumstances)
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  • From LadyLaran on February 27, 2005
    GAHHHHHHHHHH...evil cliffies!!!! Please don't leave me hanging for long! And no wombats, I promise..lol. Btw..thanks for helping me with my story today. Your opinion is always one I value. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Angel Kawaii on February 27, 2005
    *sniff* This is soo sad but then who doesn't love gore? and seeing other people suffer? It's all part of life... I guess?? Please update this is soo cool I want to see the ending! Ja ne!

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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on February 26, 2005
    How about we lock Kage and Kyoshori (Yami's dad from my story) in a room together and have them beat each other to a bloody pulp? I think we could sell tickets to that...

    Anyway, great chapter - and my vote is for a happy ending, but I like happy bishies. And if you don't end it happy, you know I won't stop pestering you (nicley) for a sequel, right?

    Wonderful job - the emotions were intense, and I want to just cuddle Yugi until he feels better!

    Please update when you can!
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  • From ANON - shy on February 25, 2005
    I'm ever so very shyly sorry to bother you and...and if at any time you want me to stop pretty shyly please tell me and I never will again. I...I just wanted to shyly say that 1) I'm so very shyly sorry about what's going on for you in real life. If....if any of this is too hard to write....well.....shyly anyways and 2) If....if it's not too hard on you well....*blushes crimson* I'd shyly like a happy ending and 3) I shyly need tissues now. *shyly scuttles away before she can irritate authoress even more*
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  • From ANON - aspiker on February 25, 2005
    Seems it's only a matter of time before Kage/Yami wakes up to get Yugi....

    As for your question about a happy or sad ending... I'd say sad ending. The killing of Yami would probably be the only way to rid the world of Kage.
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  • From ANON - Cathrath on February 25, 2005
    I tell you girl you’ve got my up most admiration at coping with all the shirt life keeps throwing at you. The fact your musses keep heading to hills is perfectly understandable. Keep up with the writing though your most definably at the top of my favourite authors list, you really do have the gift. I'm attempting to write my first lemon at the moment and the pile of screwed up paper behind me just keeps getting bigger. Right on with the review. This chapter is no exception to the others, absolutely fantastic. You can really feel Yugi's pain and i have to admit i cried a bit..ok i'm girl enough to admit it. It really can go either way, looks both hopeless and at the same time there's hope, really well written. This fic absolutely has to have a happy ending, it’s written all over it. This fic would go off my charts of if you made it a happy ending. PLEASE MAKE IT A HAPPY ENDING....gets down on keens and begs. Don't normally result to this level of pleading with a writer but the chance you might not make it a happy ending has driven me to it, you've got me hooked and i will reduce to a puddle of tears if you make it a sad ending. You wouldn't do that to me, would you? I just won't be able to cope (OK, is that a suitable amount of begging, grovelling, pleading and attempt a guilt tripping to convince you :-) ). Really looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Crazy Demon on February 25, 2005
    GOOD ending. No sad endings. Angst is for the WEAK. WEAAAAK. We're not a weak bunch here, right? Right. Happy ending!!! Rock ON with ya bad self.
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