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Reviews for Going On

By : DracOnyx
  • From ANON - Lady Laran on February 25, 2005
    *grabs the rabid wombat* HAPPY ENDING!!! Or you'll have to write yet another sequel!!! You can't leave them like this!!!!!

    Great chappy btw!!!! :-)
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  • From ANON - Cathrath on February 21, 2005
    Theres no way Bakura can save you this time.......Digs in fridge for slighly off and squishy vegetables - execpt can't find any because she dosn't eat them. ANOTHER CLIFF HANGER damit im already on fighnail hold at the moment any more and i'm going to drop right off. I really through Kage was going to get Yugi, talk about leaving it right to the last minute. How on earth is Yami going to survive rejoining with Kage. His mind is going to overload. Plese don't leave it to long or i'm going to drop off the cliff in frustration.
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on February 21, 2005
    Well, that is what happens when you block off all exits but one. At least they forced Kage to rejoin with Yami before he'd broken him. Maybe there is still hope that Yugi and Yami together can beat the shadow.

    Thanks for the chapter!
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  • From ANON - ecristy85 on February 21, 2005
    damn, i've been reading this fanfic for a long time and it's pure angst, give Yami and Yuugi a break man!!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Lady Laran on February 20, 2005
    I'm not gonna kill you but OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! The two rejoined? What's gonna happen? DAMN GOOD CHAPPY!!!
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  • From ANON - shy on February 20, 2005
    Ever so very shyly sorry to bother you...I....well...I just had to...after I shyly picked my shy self up off the floor....I had to shyly say that oh my goshness I'm so shyly jealous of your talent. Pretty shyly please I'm sorry and.....I shyly hope .....well...even though I don't know you I'm so shyly sorry for your real life troubles. I shyly wish I could make them all better. *shyly runs away*
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  • From ANON - ChaosDragon61 on February 20, 2005
    lol i won't kill you! makes for a good twist. Hmmm wonder how they are going to fix this now?
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  • From ANON - shy on February 14, 2005
    Ever so very shyly sorry to bother you.again.....I'm not sure if this went through *shyly kicks computer*..I....I just wanted to say that well...I'm shyly sorry your weekend wasn't very good and that I..*blushes*...I shyly hope it gets better. Pretty shyly please keep up the good work on this fic....but at your own pace. I oh so shyly hope it has a happy ending *bites lower lip* One more shy thing and then I shyly promise to go....I..I just wanted to say that it's....well I shyly appreciate that someone else out there calls Marik's dark have Malik and Marik Marik.....I'm shyly sorry to have bothered you. *shyly dashes away*
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  • From ANON - Shy on February 14, 2005
    Ever so very shyly sorry to bother you...I....I just wanted to say that well...I'm shyly sorry your weekend wasn't very good and that I..*blushes*...I shyly hope it gets better. Pretty shyly please keep up the good work on this fic....but at your own pace. I oh so shyly hope it has a happy ending *bites lower lip* One more shy thing and then I shyly promise to go....I..I just wanted to say that it's....well I shyly appreciate that someone else out there calls Marik's dark have Malik and Marik Marik.....I'm shyly sorry to have bothered you. *shyly dashes away*
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on February 14, 2005
    I'm terribly sorry to hear about your difficulties with your husband, and I hope something works out for you.

    As for the story - I thought I was going to cry at the very end, when Yami and Yugi are so close and so far. Yami's passive resistance is a perfect stragety...Kage can't break him as long as Yugi is safe. Greatest strength and greatest weakness...I just hope Yugi's promise holds when Kage offers his devil's bargain.

    Good luck, and I'll pray for you.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on February 14, 2005
    I don't normally leave reviews. I know, it's terrible. But I love reading your stories here. And you said you needed reviews. You are the best author I have come across on the whole internet! I actually lose sleep because I stay up too late reading your fics. Late at night is the only time I have to do anything on my own. I love your writting style and even the lemons. In most fics the lemons have no purpose to the story and I usually just skip over them. But yours always have a point. You describe what the character is feeling and how they are changing inside. For example, in 'Gravitation' (great fic!) Malik used sex to almost destroy Yami, but then Ryou uses sex to heal him. It wasn't just some random pointless sex scene that the author felt like plopping in, it had a very important purpose in the changes Yami went through. Same thing in 'Going On.' I really like how you describe the characters' felings in a way that is comlex, like real emotions, but still easy to understand. This really adds to your stories. I always hate it when in the middle of a very good fic, the author decides to put a very descriptive, sometimes distasteful sex scene when the story would be just as good or better without it. Anyways, that is what I think of your writting. You have awesome plots, and great everything basically. I love all your fics. Keep up the good work. I, on the other hand, am terrible at writing, as you can maybe tell just by reading this. I am in high english classes, but barely passed this one state writting test thing. So I will never bother poor readers with my undescriptive, confusing, boring pointless crap. It is basically everything opposite of your work. So keep writting!!! Please!!! I hope this review helps you recover from your 'hellish' weekend. Love ya.
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  • From ANON - Lady Laran on February 13, 2005
    MEAN CLIFFY!!!! Poor Yami and Yugi...I hope that Kage gets his...really and truly....hmmmm...maybe lock him in a closet full of rabid wombats or something.

    UPDATE SOON!!!

    *Glomp* love the story and really enjoy chatting with you
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on February 13, 2005
    Awww.... so sweet, picturing 'Kura cuddling Yugi... *keeps tight reign on Lane to avoid any comments that could get us both killed* Well, like I said in my pre-review-review, I knew this would be a good chapter. I love that they can still talk when Yugi's in the hallway -- at least it's something. Can't wait for the next update, talk to you soon, *hugs*.
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on February 06, 2005
    AAAHHHH!!! Holy Ra, Drac, that was so mean! Very well written, as always, but MEAN! Really though, great idea to force open the link, and have 'Kura trying to close it. Poor -- hell, poor everyone! Please please send more angst. As much as we hate it, we love it more. Hee hee, talk to ya later. Off to read Roses now! Ja!
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  • From ANON - Cathrath on February 04, 2005
    Cool, you updated and really quickly. Man i really want to go an give Kage a good kick (i know me and everyone else). Poor Yami, and Yugi having to suffer as well ...again. It going to take a lot to break Yami but how much more can he take. Yugi loves Yami so badly but unless he can get over what Kage did to him hows he going to win. This story just gets better and better. Please keep up with the quick updates i'm right on the edge of my seat here. Oh, and i've still got the veg out so please no more cliffies my nerves just can't take it :-).
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