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Reviews for Going On

By : DracOnyx
  • From ANON - Lady Laran on February 04, 2005
    Okay..that bastard has to die!!! Excellent update..I can't believe how HORRIBLE that Kage is! Don't leave us hanging too long!!!
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on February 04, 2005
    That was NASTY! Excellent chapter... But God Kage's nasty, using the link against them.
    I don't know why Yami's apologizing...he didn't have anything to do with it. Please update when you can!

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  • From ANON - zombiedarkelf18 on January 31, 2005
    Oh this story is so cool your a great writer please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Shy on January 29, 2005
    I am ever so really very shyly sorry if....if this is a repeat of my review. I....I shyly tried to review last night but my computer went um...wonky...and so I'm not shyly sure if it went through. If it did....pretty shyly please I'm so sorry for taking up more of your time with repeating myself. If it didn't...here it shyly is.....just in case.

    Ever so very shyly sorry to bother you..but..I....I just had to shyly say.....I just read Giving In and the 10 chapters of this fic straight through. You.....you are the best writer I..I have ever had the shy pleasure of reading. I....*blushes a thousand shades of red* I....get so lost in your stories that I shyly feel like I'm right there with them. I shyly haven't read fics like that. I'm shyly so very sorry for such a long review. I shyly hope that...that well...life is good to you. Pretty shyly please I'm shyly sorry and write more when you get the chance. Good stories...should never be rushed. *shyly runs to hide before I really shyly bore/upset/anger/drive the authoress insane*
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on January 29, 2005
    ACK! 'Kura, you moron, don't /spell out/ how Kage is going to torture Yami to Yugi! Great chappie dear, can't wait for the next one. Off to read the rest of your updates, ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on January 29, 2005
    Oh, man. Kage has Yami...this is SO not good. He needs time to heal, not time at the hands of that psycho. To be perfectly honest, I think rape is the least of Yami's worries at this point. He almost gave in to Kage's wiles once - and that was when he was more or less whole. This...could get very nasty. I want to read more! Onegai?

    As for the fuel for creative fires... Just ask - e-mail and bounce ideas off me if you like.

    Je ne!
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  • From ANON - aspiker on January 28, 2005
    Here's another log for the fire....

    Good chapter. The tension in the knife fight was good.

    Will the dream link between Yugi and Yami be used more while "lessons" are being done...


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  • From ANON - Lady Laran on January 28, 2005
    HOLY COW!!! This just keeps getting better and better. I'm glad you didn't make us wait too long for the update. I'm glad Kage didn't get Yugi, but I hope that Yami can hold on until the others can find him. I'm really hooked on this tale and hope to see another wonderful update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - cathrath on January 28, 2005
    AAAAHHH. I can't believe you did that. You left me in suspence again. That was a fantastic chapter. I loved the fight with Kage but what of Yami. Whats Kage going to do to him. You have to update soon. Man i really can't take this. What a ride. Please up the great work. I love every minute of this fic.
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  • From ANON - Sansi on January 28, 2005
    Awww Yami is just sooo selfless. He is already broken and there is no chance for his spirit to heal if this f** Kage keeps interfering!

    SOOOOO frustraiting. Now when you think things were looking up ... with him and Yugi!!! Ahhh update soon, pleae
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  • From ANON - Med on January 25, 2005
    I love da story so far i wish i could write as well as u could. anyway plaease comtinue with da story and yes u r evil for ending it there but i can get ova it as long as u update sometime. ^.^ ciao.
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on January 23, 2005
    AAAHHH!!! You and your cliffies. I had a friend on another mailing list once that routinely got kicked off her own cliffs... if we start doing that to you will you stop doing this to us?!? Hee hee, kidding, luv ya. Great chapter, really good scene.. I'd say it was truely inspirational, but I've decided I just can't write lemons. So, unfortunately, I think Rings is screwed... Actually though, reading your great writing always does inspire me, so I'm off to work on Rings, skipping the lemon. Thanks for the great chapter and motivation, hope you break your writer's block soon! We're all waiting on pins and needles. (Some of us more litereally than others.... OW! Lanie, quit it!) Okay, ja ne, and tell 'Kura that Yami torture is fine and all, but he'd better start musing more or Trelane is going to have a long, painful (and not in the good way) chat with him...
    Ja! ~~,~'~~{@
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  • From ANON - aspiker on January 22, 2005
    Good Dream, Evil Cliffhanger!

    It will be interesting to see what Malik is up to. Most likely play both ends off the middle so he can gain power and laugh too... 8-)
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  • From ANON - ChaosDragon61 on January 21, 2005
    wow that was yummy! this is really good! course i love all your stories and your website! i can't get enough of Gravitation! lol i think i read that atleast twice a month.... it fills my monthly need of sexy egyptians! and i'm honored that you are reading my story and reviewing it! thanks!
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  • From ANON - Lady Laran on January 21, 2005
    OMG....absolutely stunning!!! Beautifully written chapter. Please update as soon as you can. I've been following this since I found the first one and was delighted to find the sequel started. Please don't leave us in suspense!!!
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