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Reviews for Going On

By : DracOnyx
  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on January 21, 2005
    Yami SSF: *Readying overripe fruit and veggies*
    SSF: No, Yami...if you pelt her, she might not write the next chapter!
    Yami SSF: But evil cliffy...authoress must be punished...

    Wonderful chapter! Loved the lemon, and the fact that because they both thought it nothing more than a dream, they could let down their inhibitions. And the fact that they might be on the verge of a breakthrough...if Yami can get to Yugi before Kage does!

    Yami SSF: So please update quickly, or I will lob cyber tomatoes at you!
    SSF: *Grabs yami and duct tapes her hands.* Ignore her. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Cathrath on January 21, 2005
    What...man..no you can't do that to me (rummages at back of fridge for old vegetables). What an total evil cliffie. Fantastic chapter though they really are the perfect couple and you wrote it beautifully. Love the dream idea, a nice way to get them together without them knowing. Yami really is the perfect gentleman. You have to update soon. Yami's going to kick Kages ass. Right?
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on January 16, 2005
    Gods, Yami is stubborn enough to make an angel swear!
    Great chapter - it makes me want to jump up and down in sheer frustration. Oh, and I love the bit with Malik and Marik. Poor light...he's really confused, and I don't blame him.
    Please update when you can, and thanks for the chapter!
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  • From ANON - aspiker on January 16, 2005
    dun dun Dunnn indeed!

    Now that Malik is in the mix it should be interesting to see what side he goes with --> and for how long...
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  • From ANON - L-Bird on January 09, 2005
    Thanks for continuing this - I wasn't satisfied at the end of the first story and I was hoping there'd be more. I'm enjoying how the characters have matured and here's hoping Yugi can bring yami around....


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  • From ANON - take-chan on January 08, 2005
    Ohhhh my god! that was such an intense chapter.....so heart breaking-ly sad (hurrah for made up words)
    Your story totally rocks, and I think that the meeting between yami and yugi was really realistic, not to over the top or anything like that. Great job ^^
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  • From ANON - Lady Laran on January 07, 2005
    I truly hope you'll update quicker. This story is getting better and better. I hate the distance between Yami and Yugi, although I do understand what the human heart is capable of. Great job! Please hurry with another installment!!
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  • From ANON - Cathrath on January 07, 2005
    Fantastic. Great chapter. I have to say Yugi and Yami's meeting brought a tear to my eye i can almost feel the pain their going through. Please update soon this story just gets better and better. Please keep me on your mailing list.
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  • From ANON - Sansi on January 07, 2005
    I don't know which of the two is suffering more. Though I think that Yami is carrying the bigger part of this. They are so close together and at the same time they couldn't be further apart. Will they ever find together again? I hope so ...
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on January 07, 2005
    AAARRRGGGHHH!!! So...close...damnit! I don't know how much more of this I can take! *grabs Yami* He loves you, baka! Just take it SLOW on the physical stuff! *Grabs Yugi* No matter what he says, don't let him get away! *shoves them both in a room and locks the door* Now go make up!
    Yami SSF: Happy now?
    Yes. Thank you.
    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on December 26, 2004
    AAAAACCCCKKKKK!!!! Oh, Kami, obviously I got AFF working again, and Wow, hot chapter.... all right, must be off, but love you and your fics, please please update again soon, hope you have happy holidays, and mmmm...... please update soon. This waiting for Yami and Yugi to see each other is absolutely killing me. Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Deb on December 24, 2004
    Ooooo excellent chapter huni!
    Great lemon scene too!!
    I hope Yami will begin to feel normal again with his friends, but i guess that wont happen..
    Please update again soon huni!!!
    Much Luv
    Debs xxx
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on December 24, 2004
    Ooo. Interesting twist. Looks like Malik might have decided to join the good guys side...now if he can just get away with double-crossing Kage...
    Great chapter! I loved the scene with Yami facing all his friends, and hearing from their own lips that they don't blame him. It's wonderful. :)
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  • From ANON - pluto on December 19, 2004
    The format of the latest chapter is messed up a bit, but reading it was definately worth the effort. Hope you post more soon!
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on December 18, 2004
    Ahh, it's great to have your writing back. What can I say, great chapter (if a bit short -- hey, short's better than not at all tho!) and we're waiting on pins and needles for the next update. I'm glad to hear it's going to be longer than GI, gotta love stories that take time to develop plot and twists. Ja ne!
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