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Reviews for Going On

By : DracOnyx
  • From ANON - Sansi on December 18, 2004
    Ah ... this is really different than the last time ... so much better. Though I have one quesion: Are Yugi and Marik (or Malik I don't know at the moment who the hikari is) together?
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  • From ANON - Deb on December 18, 2004
    Yay! Go Ryou, make old Yams see sense!
    Great chapter huni!!!
    I loved it!!!
    Please please update again soonies!!!
    Much luv and huggles!
    Debs xxx
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on December 18, 2004
    No, I am not stalking you. I'm just a rabid fan. :)
    Anyway, another great chapter. I love how you take the characters and make them so human, with faults and desires and emotions, while still remaining true to the character. This is a great talent.
    Until next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Lady Laran on December 18, 2004
    I have been waiting for a while for you to update this. I was very excited to see the next installment. Great job on portraying so much emotion in both Yami and Yugi. It'd be interesting to see if Malik is right about this situation. Yugi and Yami are opposite sides of one coin. What better to illuminate the darkness than the light that is certain of both himself and the one who loves him. I don't think darkness can conquer darkness in this one. Don't know but please update when you can! I really enjoyed it!
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on December 08, 2004
    Here's hoping that this review gets to you.

    Just found this story; boy am I glad AFF is allowing uploads again. I was thrilled when you used my suggestion for Kage's name - it just seemed to suit. The sequel is excellent, and I am looking forward to this story! Please put me on the list of people you e-mail when you post again! Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Sansi on December 06, 2004
    Sorry tomodachi. It seemed I have somehow missed the last update. I think it has to do with all the problems this site faced recently.
    Anyway, I like this version much better (I don't even know how this is possible). It was a great idea to bring back Yami and Kage as TWO being!
    I wonder what Yami and Yugi will do when they see each other again. Please continue whenever you can! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on November 26, 2004
    Liek what your doig so far. Good solid story.
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  • From ANON - Deb on November 26, 2004
    Greatness as usual huni!
    Cant wait to read next chapters!
    I love it!
    Please update again soonies!
    Much Luv
    Debs xxx
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on November 22, 2004
    OMG, honey!!!

    I'm so sorry I couldn't review the first new chapter of GO, but I'm here now and it's still as amazing as ever -- and I got to read the first version of GO, but I like where you're going with this one so much more. Kage -- good name, thanks to the other reviewer who suggested it. And hon -- remember the list you used to email when you updated? I've been checking my email religiously but not AFF, and only found your update by accident! I'm all for the update list again -- add me first!! Please -- I think it'd help; anyone who's read Giving In (which, cool that it's on the list right before GO) will want to keep reading this, no matter how long it took you. Also, best of luck in your real life -- you can always email me if you want, though I'm not sure what comfort I can give. I myself am recently divorced, though I instigated mine. Anyway, kudos and good writing and we're waiting on pins and needles for more, hon. Update soon.

    ~,~'~LadyGrey~'~{@
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  • From ANON - burgundy@cutey.com on November 18, 2004
    I don't think the love for you has diminished; I think it's because aff.net has had a lot of downtime. I didn't even see this until today.

    Anyway, love the rewrite, and can't wait to see what you're going to throw our way this time.
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  • From ANON - Lady Shinigami on November 18, 2004
    I'm very sorry to hear about your troubles and I wish you all the best. I'm glad, though, that you have found time to think about your fans despite how overwhelmingly painful things must be. Know that your efforts here aren't in vain--I read 'Giving In' on your website about a week ago and since I'm a happy-ender (which is obvious in my fics ^_^;;) I had been expecting Yami to regain Yugi's complete trust and through the Power of Love they would VANQUISH the evil!! When it didn't turn out like that I cried (okay, I didn't CRY cry, but my eyes did get teary). I can like a bittersweet ending if it's well-written and you nailed it! I figured that was the end of it, but then I saw THIS and I was like, "Holy crap, she's writing a sequel! SWEET!!" And you've made me a very happy person, which my little sister will be glad to know. ^o^ So thank you for building on an already wonderful story and I hope that everything turns out all right for you in the end.


    You'll be in my thoughts,
    ~LS
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  • From ANON - Sansi on November 15, 2004
    Don't worry, I'm sure that you will get more reviews for this. After all, you just posted it
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  • From ANON - narae on November 09, 2004
    Want more!
    I'm sorry to hear you've been having a hard time, and I hope that things get better for you. Hope this review offers a spot of cheer-this series is good and I plan to keep checking back for more! Thanks for writing and sharing.
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  • From ANON - Cathrath on November 04, 2004
    This looks like its going to be a great sequal to the first. look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Sansi on October 30, 2004
    AHHHH! YOu decided to give this story another try! I'm so glad. I do ly hly hope that you are more happy with it this time. ^^ I really can compare to the feeling. I'm total stuck on writer's block. Oh well, see ya with your next update!
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