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Reviews for Blue Star

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  • From ANON - AngeloflightPd on September 27, 2005
    This is a sweet story, I just like it so much I hope you up date it soon
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  • From ANON - zombiedarkelf18 on June 13, 2005
    please update soon
    i really love this fic
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  • From ANON - hailmags on May 11, 2005
    I've read your story before!!! Several times

    First when it was just the three chapters and I wanted so much more for it to continue!!
    I was so excited when you updated with three more chapters! I was at uni when I found out and was reading it in the BEL labs where you're aren't technically suppossed to surf the internet just do work and my sister was with me going we have to go stop reading and I was no way!!

    I love the lemon - it was really thought out for the surgery and stuff. Most people don't go into how one of them gets pregnant which was really cool in this story! And the angst in chapter six - I wanted to hit Seto - I'm so glad that he made up with Jou. It's cool the way you've developed the characters from how they were in highschool. Explained how they've changed and grown with each other. Makes them all seem very in character!!

    I'm surprised no one has reviewed! This is my first review on Adult cause I didn't know if you had to be a member or not!! But I think Adult has had problems with people reviewing. I mean you see so many people have read the stories but very few reviewed - I think that's why Maggiemay left.

    But I love your story so much!!!! You have to continue!!!! ASAP I wanna know what the baby will be.

    I have an idea for another story with Seto/Jou that I want to write where Seto adopts a daughter and Jou becomes the guardian of his four year old cousin (second cousin on his mothers side I'll explain - somehow) and their daughters become friends forcing them to spend time together and we see how Seto grows - cause as smart and good at business he is and raising Mokuba that Kaiba needs to grow up - so what do you think? Cause I'm thinking of posting it on Adult cause I want to include lemons but I'm no good at writing them - I can't even write a decent kiss - but your lemons are really believable and not just the smut so many other use. So I would be really really really really really never out of your debt if you agreed to write lemons for me if and when I write the story.

    But that over with BLUE STAR is really really cool. It was your story along with some others that finally pushed me into writing my own.
    Keep up the good work and UPDATE!!!! PLEASE - I'm begging on my knees and everything!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2005
    soo damn cute....please continue FAST~~
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  • From ANON - sallyandre on January 08, 2004
    hey im hooked on this story! pleapdatpdate it soon!! is jou the one thats gonna be preggy? im not to sure ... although i think its him ... that would be great cuz seto is like the one who wears the pants in the relationship ... lol
    thanks!
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on December 25, 2003
    aghhhh

    i love seto and jou...

    please please please post the next chappy!!!
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  • From ANON - Horizont on October 21, 2003
    Hi there! ^_^x

    I'm writing this review after reading the first chapter (I think I'll read the next ones later!).
    I don't know why, but the whole time untill Seto got the ring out I was just as nervous as he was. I was nearly jumping in my chair... it was funny! ^.^x

    Just one thing, and that made me write this:
    It's about the japanese names. You know, in Japan, they say the family's name first... (that's a bit hard to discribe...)
    For the american version of YGO they called Jounouchi Joey, which means they created a new first name from his family's name. His first name is Katsuya (it means "winner" by the way"). If Joey would marry Seto and take over his name is name would be Kaiba Katsuya (though I don't think this sounds very good... ^^;;).
    neway, I hope that was understandable... *sweatdrop*

    Ciao-ciao,
    Horizont
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on October 18, 2003
    OH, Man why won't they let them finish that is just wrong to disturb such a PRETTY couple~anywho~ I Wonder what this meeting could be?!? Hope you Bring out the next Chappie SOON Cuz I can be impatient some times ^__^ BYE!!!
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  • From ANON - Yaky on October 18, 2003
    AWWW that was so CUTE!!! But I wonder what can this meeting be??? PLZ UPDATE SOON if you don't I'm going to bite of my fingers off from all the nail bitting I'm going to be doing! ~Anyways~ This story is really GOOD Keep up the GOOD work LATER...

    P.S
    Would you mind E-mailing when you Update THANX^_^
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  • From ANON - storm on October 15, 2003
    ALL I KNOW IS YOU BETTER BE WRITING THE FOCHAPCHAP! ITS GOOD! ^_^x
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  • From ANON - AngelicMouseGirl on October 15, 2003
    ^____^ I still like this fic very very much. ^.^ Soo good. You took a long time for this chappy though...=( I hope the next one doesn't take as long. Please! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Wanna read more! ^.~ You left me wondering and curious! Moooorreee...Arigato! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on October 15, 2003
    -falls over- WHAT BUSINESS!!!!!!!! hehehehe, it was so funny, i'm sitting here readihis his fic and i get to chapter two where Seto is yelling at the guy for interupting....and i'm all like "i've read this before!" because i remembered that part -grins- love the fic! ^_^ ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2003

    Lemme guess!..... Baby! Hehe!... Won't I feel smart if i turn out to be wrong.... Oh well! Update anyway, you've got meh hooked on jou/kaiba luvin! (as if I wasn't already ^^;;)
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  • From on October 06, 2003
    Lee-Primary: Awe *pouts* I was hoping this would have been updated by now -_-

    Lee-Secondary: I want some angst... come on L-P, let's go read some angst.

    L-P: *glares at her Yami* But I wanted to tell this author how much I enjoy their writings ^_^ So you can just be patient, L-S we'll go read some angst in a minute

    L-S: *grumbles to self about inobedient hikaris* fine fine...

    L-P: That's be ^_^ ^_^ Love the story and I hope you update soon~!

    ~Lee-Primary/Secondary
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  • From ANON - Shadow Cat on July 18, 2003
    I hope You update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Until then!
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