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Reviews for Engulfed in Darkness

By : Ravenx

From ANON - Heaven and Hell on December 27, 2004
Heaven: well, what can I say?
Hell: You can start by saying that was hella good man!
Sezzy fuck scene w/ Ryou and Bakura, newly mated!
Heaven: ^^ Of course! And Malik's/Marik's baby, SOOO adorable!
And now on with Ryou's/Bakura's and Seto's/Joey's!!
Hell: Excacty! More hot fuck scenes are always the best!
Heaven: *whacks Hell over the head* WHAT?! You mean you don't
care about the sweet love, and cute babies and the wonderful devotion that would
be entailed with such an act??!!
Hell: @_@ Eh heh, well, i guess the babies are kinda cute. Anyway, can't wait for the sequel!
Heaven: I agree ^_^ this was such beautifully done that the sequel should blow me away!
Hell: Hell yea! Yur alot better than some of the others we read so we can't wait for more! So get up off ur
Friggen ass and get moving
Heaven: *Whacks Hell over the head w/ a mallet* How rude! I swear! sorry about that ^^' she can be so ignorant.
Anyway, like she kinda said, it would be greatly apperciated if you hurry up a bit, not to rush of course^^
Hell: X_X uh y-yea. pretty lights! *points*
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From ANON - Natz ^_~ on December 26, 2004
Natz strikes again!! w00t!! w00t!! OMG I drooled so much while reading this that my sis slipped in it and broke her arm!!! I can't wait for the sequel!! Merry Xmas and a Happy New Year!! Love Natz
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From ANON - Sushi on December 26, 2004
Oh my god, this was so great. I can't wait to start reading the sequel. =D
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From ANON - Jo-Lo on December 25, 2004
Hey....what happened with all the fighting....I meen one minute they are fighting next thing they are going at it...What ust happened?
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From ANON - Megan on December 25, 2004
I loved your story. Can't wait for the sequel! Thank you.
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From ANON - Silvershadowfire on December 24, 2004
Well, I found this story again, and I must say I am impressed. It is well done, and well written. I'm looking forward to the sequel! If it's not too much trouble, can you e-mail me when you post? Thanks, and Merry Christmas!
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From ANON - kit on December 24, 2004
I LOVE IT!!!!...its so so so so so cool!!!!...u have to make another chapter!!!..plez!!!...its so wonderful!!.....this is the greatest story!!!....out of all the story i have read this is greatest to me!!!....yeah!!...i can't wait till the next one comes out!!!..plez plez plez update soon!!!! PLEZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Sera on December 24, 2004
I LOVE IT~! What a fantastic ending! Now, I DEMAND that you post the sequel NOW! IT'S AN ORDER!!!!!
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From ANON - Lady Shinigami on December 24, 2004
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! They're MATES now!! *does happy dance* May they live forever and ever and ever in peace and happiness!! Oh, I can hardly wait to read the sequel!!

Engulfed in Brightness . . .

~LS
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From ANON - Ken-z on December 24, 2004
ken-z loved that she did
O.O I will love you forever if you
make a continuation of bakura and ryou's kids and
him satrting his family.By Ra I will bow down to you and carry out
your every command ^.^;
(I know Im gettin carried away but I love your story)
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From ANON - Horizont on December 24, 2004
End? What d'you mean by "end"? I mean, you've been talking about a sequel the whole time! Plus, Ryou needs to take that serum thingy and so on AND Hikaru looked like he wanted nothing more than a child of his own and... and well, I'd like to read more of that. :P

Ciao, and Merry Christmas! ^_^x
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From ANON - Devilgirl255 on December 24, 2004
Another great chapter.I can't wait for your new story Engulfed in Brightness.
Im looking forward to it.

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From ANON - Sarah Costa on December 24, 2004
Great End! Send email to let me now when you update...Ja ne...Merry Christmas!
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From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on December 24, 2004
Wonderful. Simply wonderful! This was so great. Bakura and
Ryou are finally together and will be making babies before
you know it. I stayed up all night (it's 9 am now...) looking
for an update and i am so happy that i did. (i loved bakura's
bathroom, btw. Red & black :drool:) Thank you for sharing this
with us!*glomps you* I cant wait to read the sequel! Joey and
Ryou with babies!! Merry Christmas to ya and have a safe and
happy New year!!
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From ANON - jadedkatrina on December 24, 2004
Great story and I can't wait to see the sequel...
so please continue to email me with updates
and good luck with writing

Happy Holidays, Merry Christmas, & have a
safe and Happy New Year

Jadedkatrina

Ja Ne
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