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Reviews for Teenage Jail

By : rayemars
  • From ANON - amariel on March 14, 2004
    That was mostmost well-written rambling of smut I've ever read! And I've read a lot more smut than I should have. It was touching, if rather bittersweet. It was beautiful. I'm so glad you tied up the plot that way. Aw! I could gush for hours!
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  • From ANON - Pachelbel on February 22, 2004
    Heh. I've been obsessed with this fanfic for much, much too long. I mean...it's probably my favorite Malik/Bakura fic ever. It's definitely my most-read favorite fanfic of all time. It's quite possibly the reason I nearly failed my journalism class. Sure, all the good students were doing their articles; Pachelbel was reading smut! ...And what's truly sad about that is, I think I'd probably *still* choose 'Teenage Jail' over boosting my grade. Poor student, or freakily dedicated reader? I try to be a little of both ;p

    I have to say, I never thought about socks in sex scenes before. I mean, I guess I did to the point where I thought fanarts were more cute than "steamy" if the socks were left on, but...

    Your characterizations are just...spot-on, but it's such a rarity in any fandom to have a character so neatly *in-character* that I'm always incredibly disappointed when I see you haven't added to the Bakura/Malik-ness of this fandom.

    Agh, it's 4 in the morning, I really shouldn't be reviewing, but I've read and re-read this fic so many times over the past year I figured I'd better get around to the feedback at some point. If I waited any longer the rambling would run into raving and you'd have a 4-page review to wade through, and nice as that may seem, A) my hands would fall off before I finished, and B) Do you really want to take an hour to read a review?

    So, I'll cut it off with just letting you know this story is amazing and I love it and *cough*I'dloveitifyouwrotemoreBakura/Maliksmut*cough*.
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  • From ANON - Elle-Fate2x1 on November 09, 2003
    I love the last sentence it was cute. This fic was awsome!! I've just recently started reading your works and I love them!!! Your're such an amazing author!!! Teenage Jail was a wonderful fic and I really really enjoyed reading it!
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  • From ANON - Verinia on May 15, 2003
    You have achieved the rare effect of forcing me to have a deep emotional response to a piece of fanfiction. *Very* nice job, you handled the mental instabilities of both boys very well.
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  • From ANON - Artemis on May 13, 2003
    Another great chapter. *grins* You’re one of the people I know who can actually write a good Yami Bakura. Keep it up! I maintain that the only reason this fic came about, was because you penned up all of your YGO sexual tensions, and thus this is the consequence. Not that I minded for a second. *winks*

    I especially liked the scene where Rishid walks in on th I j I just liked the whole blink part. I actually pictured it. *snicker*

    Anyway, great job. And an ambiguous ending is just as likely to be a happily-never-after ending as a happily-ever-after ending. And if you ever question it…eh…just write a chapter for yourself where Ryou can’t deal with it and commits suicide. Ooh, maybe even have Isis find him. *steeples fingers* Ah, the evilness…

    Anyway! Awesome fic!

    ~Artemis Z.
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  • From ANON - Elys on May 10, 2003
    PLEASE ONE MORE CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OR..OR AT LEST MAKE A SEQUL (I know i didn't spell that right but you know what i mean) PLEASE!!!!!!!! Youe ofe of my favorit authors and one of the best in my opinon (i know i propablely didn't spell that right ether but you Know) PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a great story please make a sequl at lest.
    (making Puppy eyes while saying this) Please Please please please please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I absolutely love this story.
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  • From ANON - Slytherinette on May 10, 2003
    I liked it. I liked it lots!
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  • From Lupusdragon1 on May 09, 2003
    LD: Well that was interesting
    Karen: But not bad at all. I mean, of course Ryou and Malik would have issues... look at what they went through with their yamis.
    LD: Yeah, so considering that, and the nature of the story as a whole, it was a really good ending.
    Karen: Yeah, for once I think the stereotypical happy ending would have been totally out of place.
    LD: Plus it would have ruined the wonderful angstiness!
    Karen: You should write more stories. This one is really good!
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  • From ANON - Lady Yami Bakura on May 09, 2003
    whoa... this story keeps getting better every time I read it. It's perpetually disturbing but at the same time really human, I feel bad for both Malik and Bakura having to go through that and really a happy ending at this point seems impossiable but ever still it's a truly amazing piece of work especially if you like phycology. I'm beyond impressed, this fic turned into much more then just casual yaoi and pointless lemon scenes. Wonderful job ^_^

    -Lady Yami Bakura (fanfic.net author)
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  • From ANON - KK^_^ on May 08, 2003
    I am so horrendously hooked on this(just read part 5). So it was supposed to be a one shot, if it was I wouldn't have more to come back to, would I? So Malik knows he copied the heiroglyphs... Now what's he gonna do? You better update and tell us all soon!

    ^_^
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  • From Lupusdragon1 on May 07, 2003
    Karen: Oh, Ryou is in so much trouble.
    LD: I cannot believe that he is betrying Malik like that. How dare he!
    Karen: Hell if I know. I just hope that things don't get too bad. I like Malik with Ryou, even if it is totally angst ridden.
    LD: yeah, well I like Malik, so he had better not get hurt * stamps foot petulantly *

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  • From ANON - RaveEchidna on May 05, 2003
    nicly written, little Ryou clinging to the ring...aww...i think...so wahts going to happen eh? Keep writing please?

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  • From ANON - Danae2120 on May 04, 2003
    Wow. This is a really good story. Please continue soon, because it's really interesting. Did I mention I love all of your stories?
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  • From ANON - Artemis on May 02, 2003
    Another amazing chapter it seems. I thought you had decided to make this a one-shot, but apparently I was mistaken, not that I mind, mind you. *smile* Anyway, Bakura doesn't know what happened between Yami Bakura and Malik (nice plot-twist BTW). Bakura doesn't want to get rid of the Ring, I actually think that's pretty cool. Is there something going on between Bakura and Yami Bakura that I'm mis? P? Perhaps. Maybe some connection lYugiYugi has with Yami Yugi.

    Either way, Malik wanted to dominate this time, and I'm guessing it's not because so many people requested it in the reviews. He seemed scared and what better way to prove that he can handle it by being the dominant one this time around, right? If I'm wrong just yell at me.

    Great story.

    ~Artemis Z.

    P.S. - Bakura was uber-sweet, in that whole I'm a lying little brat kind of way. He has gotten good at it. *smiles*
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  • From Lupusdragon1 on May 01, 2003
    Karen: Ok, what the hell just happened? What is with all the sneaking around?
    LD: Ryou is trying to make Malik forget about the Ring. He has to be creative about it. That is something he is good at.
    Karen: * pouts * I just don't like him being all dishonest is all.
    LD: Yeah, but he got some mad lovin' ^____^
    Karen: ^_____^ I guess that makes it a little better then.
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