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Reviews for Teenage Jail

By : rayemars
  • From ANON - Pepper Breath on April 30, 2003
    Nice twist. Totally unexpected due to the content of the first chapter. ondeonder what Ryou is going to think now...and how Malik's gonna act towards him.
    ondeonderfully written...and nicely written rape fics are -really- hard to find... And it's actually not the initial intent of the the story either....it just sorta evolved into rape.

    I hope the next chapter either clears things up, or leads to more to keep the story going.
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  • From ANON - Galena17 on April 29, 2003
    Wow. That was utterly depressing, in a very good way. My favorite couple, in all their exceedingly NOT happy glory. I'm glad to see that a second part has been added, and I actually like what you did with Bakura. A huge nt ont of people try to pull of the Bakura-rape thing, very few people are successful in that attempt. In my oppinion, you handled it very well. Nice job, I enjoyed the fic.
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  • From ANON - KK¦ † on December 17, 2002
    The second part totally surprised me. Wow. I didn't see it a all. Is Malik gonna be okay? You have to write more, or else! Or else I dunno what, but or else anyway!
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on April 29, 2003
    Please post again soon! This is really good!
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  • From ANON - Artemis on April 29, 2003
    Have I told you how incredibly cool you are lately? I read the warning and was like 'well, how the hell is goingoing to manage that and then his voice, and then I cackled, and from then on it was entirely too amusing. Perhaps I'm just twisted, or perhaps you write angst in such a way that I find it hous.ous.

    Either way, I have never laughed so hard, in the first few paragraphs of a story in my life. The rest was angsty to the extreme, and I sobered up accordingly, but the few opening paragraphs...

    Great fic.

    ~Artemis Z.

    P.S. - Bakura was really IC, to the extreme. Amazing job with that.

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  • From ANON - Kely on April 28, 2003
    do a sqelue and make it were they are a little older. I'm a sucker for those types of romances
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  • From ANON - Pepper Breath on April 28, 2003
    Yeah!! Two yums up! Or actually...more like four....add two for the pairing ^_- Nicely written...nice characerization...though...characterization can go out the backdoor ifn it's a good lemon! Which this is ^_^ Continue...or write more for this pairing...or something!
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  • From ANON - Bishojo_Shadow on April 26, 2003
    I loved it so very much! You have got to continue soon Onegia!!!!

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  • From ANON - Jane Somebody on April 25, 2003
    Nice one shot. I like the way Bakura was the one who was on top, seems like something Malik would make him do. Anyway, you should try these more often, you're obviously very talented at them. Hope to see more of your stuff.

    ~Jane

    P.S. - Malik is a scary mo-fo when he's possessive.
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  • From ANON - KK^_^ on April 25, 2003
    I like this one. Poor Malik, his sister shouldn't be hiding something like that. Does he still have the rod? Bakura had the ring, but it didn't seem like Malik had the rod. Did Yugi get it then? Anyway, that was reaaly cool. Those two are so hot together. ^_^
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  • From Lupusdragon1 on April 25, 2003
    Karen: * drools *
    LD: * drools *
    Random voice: As both sides are currently speechless, the part of the reviewer tonight will be played by Zia, an OC who was, until this point, stuck in limbo.
    Zia: Hi! Um, Karen and Lupusdragon are at a loss for words due to the extemely erotic situation their favorite hikaris found themselves in. The would like me to say that they love the story and they think that you should write more with this pair. Oh, and LD requests that you make Malik the dominant one if you do decide to do one again... Karen says pretty please...
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