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By : Mellybean

From ANON - Evil MJ on July 14, 2003
*Grabs Keith by the scruff of the neck and draggs him off to her lair*

YOU OWE ME DRAGON!!!!
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From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on July 14, 2003
RD:grrr hey red here again one seck pls*pulls out dark ember from everquest that sends out fire blasts on contact every few minutes*oh joey come here for a sec pls
Joey:ya whats up
RD:*raises her DE and bashes joey in the head* U*bash*have got to be*bash*the lowest most selfish ingrate ive ever had the displeasure of liking*bash*first u pick on yugi when he was in high school then u toss a piece of the millenium puzzle into the river and THEN u nearly got him killed in battle city and NOW AFTER HE HAS GONE TO SUCH LENGTHS TO KEEP U SAFE AND HAPPY AND WAY FROM THAST SHIT(pardon my language)U GO BACK TO IT AND RETURN TO THE JERK U ONCE WERE U ARE SO DAM LUCKY YAMI AND SETO WERENT THERE AT THAT TIME CUZ IF THEY WERE U WOULD SO BE DEAD IN SO MANY WAYS*bash*bash*bash*bash*bash* BASH*like im going to do right now grr TAKE THIS JOEY THIS IS WHAT U GET FOR HURTING YUGI U UNDERSTAND AND U TO YAMI DRAGON I WILL NOT SEE YUGI HURT COPICE FIX THIS NOW OR YOUR DEAD*takes out fire blast and other DDS from ever quest she knows and starts nuking joey and bashing him like as if he is an orc* Bash*nuke*bash*nuke and one more for the record *lets loose an all out onslaught until joey is crisp and past out *well i feel better *sighs* but u better fix this im warning u *waves her DE threateningly*THIS IS THE LAST STRAW YD I WILL NOT SEE YUGI HURT UNDERSTAND THIS DRAGON HAS LITTLE PATIENCE FOR IT AND IF U THINK IM ALONE THINK AGAIN GRRRRR*is so angry she smashes her DE down and it lands straight on Joey*oops eh hehe sry joey*lifts up her DE*eeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh oooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk uuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmm SOME ONE GET AN ME MY CYRSTAL POWDER WE GOT ANOTHER ONE*catches the crystals throwned to her for the 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000Kth time*hoy i loose more guests this way at least cuz they are afraid to come back but im friendly honest i just dont like seeing yugi hurt thats all^_______________________________________________________________^ well lets see*takes out a pinch of crystal powder and tosses it on joey who isnt so badly comatose*there thats better kee keep up the good work Dragon dreamer and i hope u and your yami fix this or u i will fix u ^____________________________________________________________________________________________________________^ ok TTFN ta ta for now

Joey: x__x
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From ANON - Amanda on July 13, 2003
Ahhh! This story is so great! *huggles Joey* I love Joey angst. I can't wait to read more!
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From ANON - Fae of Heaven - The Customized Landscape on July 12, 2003

My favorite device in a story is the use of phophetic gazing, with their appropriate metaphors. I do tarot readings and aura readings in real life, and I just thought I should express my pleasure in seeing the "dream sequence" in this fanfic.

Poor Tristan. *Huggles him* I hope things go well for you.

Tristan: RAPE! MOLESTOR! SEX OFFENDER! CHILD ABUSE! SEXUAL HARRASSMENT!

O.O *Backs away...slowly..*

And Joey, SHAME on you! *Whack*

Joey: ... do it again.... it feels...good *snorts powder*

*Backs away from Joey and goes to Yugi and hugs him*

Yugi: PHEDOPHILIA! RAPE! CHILD ABUSE! SEX OFFENDER!

You're all no fun! *pout*

Tristan: Hehe, yes we are..
Joey: *snorts coke*
Yugi: :D

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From ANON - lupusdragon on July 11, 2003
Karen: *Wacks Joey over the head with so me random, blunt, heavy object*
LD: Wow, that was violent.
Karen: Yeah, well, you should see what I want to do to Keith.
LD: *snicker* I imagine torture is not out of the question...
Karen: I am thinking castration is starting to sound good ^_^
LD: OUCH! and I am supposed to be the evil one.
Karen: *squeal* Yugi is so cute!! And sweet, and *hits Joey again*
LD: *confused by the sudden change of topic* Be careful what you wish for...
Karen: This is so agonizingly good... it is frustrating and enticing at the same time. Update soon, I am begging you!
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From ANON - Kitt on July 11, 2003
;-; dee-yamn.
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From ANON - Neko Jounouchi aka Jams on July 11, 2003
Jams: Joey you evil little shit!
Neko Jounouchi: What'd I do?
Seto Plushie: ::points 2 chapter:: That....
Neko Jounouchi: ::skims over chapter:: You dork! This is fiction!!
Jams:u.uU ::shakes head::
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From ANON - bakurasgirl on July 11, 2003
Poor joey.....I feel so bad for him. Stupid keith. *stabs keith with the millenium marasume as naked Bakura struts into the room*

.......OO

*glomps naked Bakura*

27 MORE DAYS TO CANADA!!
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From ANON - Artyx on July 10, 2003
I just have been reading this story and before that your other st'fr'friends and lovers' >__.
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From ANON - speed on July 03, 2003
Okay, come and update this story.
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From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on July 01, 2003
RD:hey red Dragon here *takes out a mega sized mallet like the ones u see in cartoons and wacks joey on the head angry at his stupidity*nice*wack*story*wack*so far i really liked it*wack*its got a nice plot to it although*wack*im not to happy with how uve been treating Yugi best fix it or *waves mallet threateni at at the aurthoress*U AND I WILL BE HAVING A LITTLE DALK DRAGON DREAMER DRAGON TO DRAGON AND I ASURE U THIS DRAGON WONT BE ON FRIENDLY TERMS*bashes joey with the mallet in her anger*oops uh sry about that joey i only ment to go in wack lvl not bash but u did deserv it u jerk HOW COULD U DO THIS TO TRISTAN AND YOURSELF THAT SHIT U KEEP SHOVING DOWN YOUR SYSTEM IS NOT GOING TO HELP TRUST ME IT HURTS MORE THEN HELPS I WILL BE MOST*bash*DISPLEASED*bash*IF YUGI*bash*WERE TO FINT WHT WHAT U DID*bash bash bash bash bash bash bash* under stand oh and again good story but U BETTER MAKE YUGI ALLL BETTER AGAIN OR THERE WILL BE HELL TO PAY this is your warning have i nice day^_____________________^ and i hope we never have this talk again ok *bashes joey one last time until hes so nocked out he wont be able to see straight for a week
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From ANON - Fae of Heaven - The Customized Landscape on June 28, 2003
... I can't wait to see Tristan and gang beat the shit out of Keith. What a creep! Sadly, a lot of homosexuals I know live in a culture where Keith's behavior is sadly.. not so uncommon.

I'm also glad to know that Tristan is getting more respect than people give him. It seems to me that stories involving Tristan in a homosexual pairing are getting NUMEROUS reviews, and visits. Heck, you got 54 reviews~! Your other story has almost as much (if not, a little more... or less) of these reviews. However, I think it's use use you are a ~very~ talented author, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Another thing I like about your work is you don't have a prominent "dominantory" figure, and/or "submissive" figure in the relationships you depict. You tend to balance out the relationships you depict. I admire that in a yaoi author. Too many yaoi stories contain a couple which consists of "The Man" and "The Woman". First off, I don't believe in gender roles -- for ANY gender, in ANY relationship -- and I could tell by your work that you don't seem to either. Kudos to you! Second off, your story isn't all "aww we're in love! Smoochies! You're the love of my life, and we'll be together forever. Let'olicolic in a field of posies together," nor is it "damn, you're beautiful...let's have STICKY STICKY HOT HOT" -- it depicts a RELATIONSHIP, and quite realistically, I'd like to comment. Not to mention you characterize characters very well, and for the most part, they're not 100% heart-throbs, nre tre they 100% heart-breaking bastards. They're HUMAN.

I do hope the best for these two in the end. Now, I can honestly say I LOVE Tristan and Joey -- usually I read Kaiba x tan,tan, or Honda (Tristan) x Otogi when it comes to YGO -- because of this piece of literary work.

I do hope you turn your talent for writing and charaterization to something more substancial than fanfiction...however.
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From ANON - Neko Jounouchi aka Jams on June 26, 2003
Jams: ::thwacks Joey with frying pan::
Neko Jounouchi: ::rubs head:: Ow!! What'd ya do THAT for!!??
Jams: ::thwwacks Joey again::
Seto Plushie: :: slowly makes his way to the door::
Jams: And just where do you think YOU'RE going!?!?
Seto Plushie: Slowly insane...? I'm getting my ass out ore..re..... You're pissed.
Jams: No shit Sherlock!!
Neko Jounouchi: ::glomps DD and YD:: Hurry and get the next chappie up before she kills us all!! ::runs from room screaming about the end of the world::
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From ANON - bakurasgirl on June 26, 2003
*hands Bakura frying pan* Use that on steven next..

Poor Joey...he wants to go home....BAD KEITH! *hits kieth with frying pan*

Hey, who, exactly, is gonna be busy next week????? *wink* As if I didn't know....

mmmm........turkey.....
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From ANON - Evil MJ on June 26, 2003
Big Evil Smile for Keith....

Keep your handcuffs to yourself or I will blab your secrets to the highest bidder...yes people I can be bought off to tell all of DD and YD's bad, nasty, horrible secrets.

Oh my Keith is doing so much more than I could have envisioned.....Evil is so nummy

it's like..like...FRIENDSHIP...

BWaaahhhhaa..sorry, I just had to do that ....tee hee
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