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Reviews for Stronger Than Before

By : Mellybean

From ANON - KC on December 03, 2003
Me: u've updated!!!
Yami: *yawns* what time is it?
Me: its about six-thirty, why?
Yami: *eyes wide* in the morning?!
Me: *nods* what's wrong koi? Can't stay awake? *laughs*
Yami: um, yea, I COULD STAY AWAKE!!! *eyes dropping*
Me: could you stay awake until two-thirty until i get home from school?
Yamaybmaybe....
Me: NO SLEEPING BEHIND MY BACK!!!
Yami: *pouts* i'm leaving... *leaves room*
Me: don't worry about her, PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I can't wait to see what Yugi tells Justin about what he saw!!! DON'T WAIT 2 LONG 2 UPDATE!!! CAUSE I'M LIKE SQUIRMING RIGHT NOW TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! CONTINUE OK??? CONTINUE 2 UPDATE ASAP!!! SEE YEA!!! *runs after Yami*
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From ANON - bakurasgirl on December 03, 2003
Aww....cute Lexi...she needs a squishing.....BADLY. Tris relaly needs that counselor.
Maybe he'll learn to open up a bit. Bakura can show me his canines anyday.....
*grabs naked, snarling Bakura and jams him into schoolbag for work.* Bakura
can help us fill those baskets.
By the way, Yami, do you have any idea what you are
doing to me starting my day with a lemon?
Do you have ANY idea what that does to me?
Do you just love to keep me in this state all day long???????????????
Oh well.....you don't start my day off with a lemon and not pay the
consequences later!!!
hehehehehehehehe..............mmmmm.......Yami Dragon.
Anyway, here's a large basket of Tan pan plushies just for you! *hands basket of tristan plushies...
clothed to your heart's content...or otherwise.

@-------= a rose for you!

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From ANON - Tik on November 29, 2003
Great! Keep going!
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From ANON - bakurasgirl on November 28, 2003
OMG! A LEMON! SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET! Anyway, Lexi is so cute and i think I want to squish her....in fact,
I think I will......*squishes Lexi* Damn, cs ars are so cute. They just ask to be squished! In any case,
Bakura s tos to kick some serious butt........naked...horny.....and.....wearing a leather collar....
OO....where did that come from? Anyway, great job with this chappie and I can't wait to see if Tristan will beat up Joey's former encounters....
BTW, can Tristan do a naked, horny, fighting scene?????? mmmmm.....naked, horny Tristan......
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From ANON - KC on November 28, 2003
Me: aw, Justin saw the kiss
Yami: *smirk* guess Justin needed to go to the bathroom, huh?
Me: *gasped* SINCE WHEN DID U WOKE UP?!
Yami: What? I can't wake up anymore?
Me: uh...
Yami: excatly koi... *leaves room*
Me: i am still confused what Yami just did right now. *laughs* Anywayz, CONTINUE AND CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS TO JUSTIN'S REACTION TO THIS!!! I'LL SEE YEA NEXT WEEK!!! LATER!!! *runs after Yami*
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on November 28, 2003
Oyvey!! Yeah, explain that one!!! Hah, 'Kura does have a softer side!!! Who woulda thunk it? Boy oh boy! Tris, you have some 'splaning to do!!!

Lady Elfskye
waiting for updates soon!

Py huy hubby was reading my sonfic for me on FF and asked me this question. I had to agree with the analogy. Do you? He asked me if Seto was the one who looked like Keanu Reeves in a white trench. I think it fits!!
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From ANON - zatken on November 24, 2003
Ay, the stupid bitch Knowles is planting lots of stupid ideas in Justin's head... And what was that all about (the Keith dream)?

And I don't think I can say this enough, but Lexi is soooo cute ;-D
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on November 24, 2003
Yeah! A new chappie. What a chapie too!! Damn Knowles! She knew who Justin was going to, so she poisoned his little mind. Whatta bitch! I hope that Lexi's liking for Ba-Ra rubs off on Justin. Lol! Justin sounds like my son. He asked me if he had to marry someone I picked for him. I told him no, he could marry whomever he wanted. So, he's marrying a family friend's little girl. They have been friends since he was 3. Lexi is too cute!! And, Tris, Possesiveness is good!!!!

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - gralnak on November 24, 2003
Congrats to Lexi and her new home!

:)GRALNAK
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From ANON - Sapphire on November 23, 2003
WOOHOO! finaly updated!!! Are you feeling better yet DD? You two write the best fics ever!!!! ok enough ranting now...
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From ANON - KC on November 23, 2003
Me: yea, you've finally updated!!!
Yami: when is she going to decide to go and put up a Seto/Yami/Yugi story when they were married or something?
Me: good point koi, i don't know yet
Yami: *shrugs* probably she doesn't want to
Me: hey, it was just a suggestion koi!!!
Yami: perhaps, but still...
Me: humph *leaves room*
Yami: *looks at computer screen* OH NO I'M NOT DOING THE REVIEW KOI!!! I HATE DOING THIS DAMN REVIEWS, COME BACK HERE!!! *Groans* damn, i hate it when she doesn't listen 2 me. Anywayz, please continue ok? Can't wait for the next chappie!!! Don't wait 2 long!!! *runs after me*

CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! *PUPPY DOG LOOKS*
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From ANON - Tik on November 23, 2003
Oooh, Tik like . . . Tik like v. much . . . nice bit w. Keith . . . yup, Tristan IS getting possesive . . .
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From ANON - bakurasgirl on November 23, 2003
hehehe....GO YUGI! Sex crazed light.............mmmmm.....sex crazed light......OO.....EVEN BETTER.....sex crazed yami! Lexi is so cute, i want to hug her and squeeze her and squish her until she can't breathe anymore! Justin is so cute, too! Poor Tristan and Joey......so cute...*hugs Joey and Tristan* OMG! I HUGGED TRISTAN!!!!!
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From ANON - gralnak on November 21, 2003
aHHH!nooooo!

well...he is a doctor.....or is he....

:|gralnak
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From ANON - bakurasgirl on November 20, 2003
OO....BAD WIFE! BAD! Teasing Joey like that with the drugs....BAD, BAD, BAD, BAD, BAD DRAGON!

mmmmmmmmmm..........Bad dragon.......*thinks hentai thoughts*

In any case, GO BAKURA! he's too sexy for his canines, baby! I can just imagine Seto naked sleeping with Yugi and Yami. There's a scene I'd like to wake up to. Anyways....Can I squish Lexi until she stops breathing? I think she is really asking for a squishing in the worst way.

If not, it's ok...I can squish Aten...*cradles Aten plushie*

Anyways, since you are waiting to read your reviews, I'm gonna get off the computer now. I love you, my Yami Dragon!
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