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Reviews for Stronger Than Before

By : Mellybean

From ANON - KC on November 20, 2003
Me: *cheers* go, JOEY AND TRISTAN!!!
Yami: why r u cheering for those loosers?
Me: LOOSERS?! THEY WERE MAKING HOT LO! *! *laughs*
Yami: *blushes* i knew that...
Me: i thought u were reading the chapter in the other computer koi
Yami: *sneers* did it ever occur to u that there weren't any computers 5000 years ago?
Me: *wide-eyed* u mean, u were just starring at a blank screen?
Yami: damn right!!! Don't know how to turn on a computer so i just bang and tried to hit it
Me: U DID WHAT?! THAT'S MY BROTHER'S COMPUTER U BAKA!!!
Yami: ah, oops?
ME: OOPS?! I'M GOING TO BE DAMN TROUBLE WHEN MY BROTHER GETS BACK THIS WEEKEND FROM THE DORM!!! YOUR SO GOING TO PAY FOR THIS YAMI!!!
Yami: ha, ha... *leaves room quickly*
Me: YAMI!!! DON'T U DARE RUN AWAY FROM ME!!! I KNOW WHERE U LIVE!!! U SHARE THE SAME BED WITH ME U KNOW!!! *Sighed* later, i'll give her a pep talk and tell mom and my brother what happened. *sighed* PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! CAN'T WAIT 2 SEE IF JOEY IS GOING TO GO AND DO IT OR NOT!!! PLUS, MORE WITH SETO/YAMI/YUGI OF MAKING LOVE!!! *Smirk* LAST TIME WE ALL SAW THREE OF THEM MAKING LOVE WAS IN CHAPTER 1 I THINK. SO, PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! OR WAS IT LIKE CHAPTER 8 THEY WERE MAKING LOVE, BUT PUT THE 3 OF THEM BACK!!! CONTINUE!!! *RUNS AFTER YAMI*
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on November 19, 2003
WTF!! @_@ NO WAY!! It's a test. Come on, Joey, don't do this.... I hate you

Wonderful chappie!! Heh, Oh, I love an evil 'K!! H!! He so mean!! *snuggles Bakura, then gives him back to bakurasgirl* *Snuggles Lexi* she is so cute!!!!! I cannot wait for the weekend!! UPDATE NOW!!! LOL!

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - Tik on November 19, 2003
YAY! COOL CLIFFE!!! What's Joey going to do . . . da dum (dramatic chord)?
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From ANON - Amber on November 19, 2003
*wails* No! Joey! DON'T DO IT!!!! *falls out of chair* Owwww....
I hate cliffies
But I luff this story
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From ANON - KC on November 15, 2003
Me: My Yami is out so be glad!!! She's been acting like a bitch tow u, u, so don't tell her that i said that about her. Cause she'll get mad at me!!! *blushes* wow, that fuckfucking hot chapter, but... did u made a request in my suggestion about the next story? Cause u could make a story about Seto/Yugi/Yami's wedding, u know? Heck, i mean, i wouldn't mind at all. So, what do u think? PLEASE MAKE IT A!!! !!! I really want to see what happens in the story between those three!!! *Smiles* i'll see u next time, ok? LATER!!! *LEAVES ROOM*

CONTINUE 2 UPDATE PLEASE!!! *PUUPPY DOG LOOKS*
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From ANON - bakurasgirl on November 15, 2003
GO JOEY X TRIS!!!Man, you gotta love lemons....who doesn't, eh? Grr....Bakura, go kill that orphanage woman...AND MAKE SURE YOU ARE NAKED WHEN YOU DO IT!

Bakura: *Bakura walks in naked* I'm always naked....*sigh* Can't I at least have a loincloth???
Bakurasgirl: No......stay naked!
Ryou: GREAT JOB ON THE CHAPPIE!
Love ya, babe! Great work on ALL these chappies! Can't wait to see the next update!
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From ANON - zatken on November 15, 2003
Come on, Bakura - kill the bitch from hell! How dare she stops Tristan and Joey from adopting Lexi. I hope between Kaiba and Bakura, they'll give that bitch her just drts!rts!
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From ANON - Joey Fanatic on November 15, 2003
I LOVE IT!!! Joey and Tristan work so well together! Lemons can be so sweet at times . . .
Oh, BTW, from now on I'll sign my comments with my username Tik.
THIS CHAPTER ROCKED!
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on November 14, 2003
Arrghhgh! It ate my review! Let's try this again, shall we??

Lemons!! Yummy!! If Tris doesn't get that &(^($*#( Knowles Bitch first, Seto will. If Kura doesn't beat them both and send her to the shadow realm!! Damn her anyways. Oy vey! Wonderful chappie as always!! Lemon again next chappie?!? You are too good!!

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - zatken on November 12, 2003
Good Lord.... I soooo wanted to kill that Knowles woman (ay...the tomb robber within me just wants to come out ;-D

I looove the story. Lexi isadoradorable. Justin's great! And thanks for showing the good side of a bad boy (namely Bakura). Ay... this chapter brought tears in my eyes (wanting to kill someone for depriving those poor kids while she lives in luxury, doting over two distinctively cute kids, the relationship between the characters). So awesome!

Keep up the good work, guys ;-D Love to see more!

Luv lots, Zatken

ps: Warmest regards to the entire family (and especially your Chibi ;-D
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From ANON - Sapphire on November 11, 2003
WOOHOO! Loved this chapter, and I hope you are feeling better soon if I didnt already tell you that.... ok now, bakura and triss, I'll start the music. :the toon of 'the wicked witch is dead' plays over a loud speaker: bakura and triss sing: Lets kill the orphanage bitch, orphanage bitch, orphanage bitch...
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on November 11, 2003
Oooohhh...Someone is gonna die!! And if they don't, they are gonna wish they were. Heh, I really feel for 'Kura. This was another excellent chappie!!! I will try really hard to wait for the update, but I'm not sure if I can!!!

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - KC on November 11, 2003
Me: *smirk* that was a nice chappie!!!
Yami: but it took her damn long to put it up!!!
Me: Me: *sighed* some things never changes
Yami: what does that mean?
Me: oh nothing, by the way, Seto is really going to get pissed off
Yami: *rolls eyes* well duh, Mokuba and Seto used to live in an orpanage
Me: I KNEW THAT YAMI!!! Anywayz, who was Mokuba talking on the phone?
Yami: *smirk* must be his girlfriend or boyfriend
Me: that could be it *kisses Yami*
Yami: *moaned* um, aibou? Your review? I'll wait for yea upstairs!!! *leaves room*
Me: *pout* fine her then, but continue ok? DON'T WAIT UP 2 LONG 2 UPDATE!!! HURRY!!! *Followz Yami*

CONTINUE 2 UPDATE PLEASE!!! *PUPPY DOG LOOKS*
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From ANON - Joey Fanatic on November 11, 2003
Yay! Another chapter . . . the bit with the orphanage is REALLY amazing, this story is great!!!!!!
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From ANON - Joey Fanatic on November 08, 2003
Yay! More chappies! Keep going!
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