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Reviews for One Way Street

By : Mellybean
  • From ANON - IYYASHI on August 03, 2003
    Yuji: Poor Tristan! He shouldn't go through this
    Yumi: He was raped what do you think
    Yuji: It's to sad
    Yumi: It can only get better
    Yuji: Thank, Yami
    Yumi: No problem Hikari
    Yuji: Update Update Update
    Yumi: Yes do what she says It's terrible when she's sad
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  • From ANON - bakurasgirl on August 03, 2003
    awwwww......poor Tris. He really over did it.

    Bakura: You're telling me......
    BakurasgirO...O...Into the supply closet with you!
    Bakura: Hah! You'll only have that supply closet anotanother three days! And you can't shove me under the desk! Now what are you gonna do??? *insane laughter*
    Bakurasgirl: Simple. I'll stick you in my closet at the soap shop I'm opening with my wife. How would you like them apples???
    Bakura:........
    Bakuasgirl: thought so. Great chappie, baby!
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  • From ANON - gralnak on August 03, 2003
    keep it up
    :)gralnak
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  • From ANON - gralnak on August 02, 2003
    this is f***ing brilliant!
    I can't wait for the next chapter.
    I'd love to see what happens to Joey........mmmm.....Joey and Bakura..........
    :)gralnak
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  • From ANON - ashes on August 01, 2003
    "i laughed, i cried; it moved me, bob."

    really; very moving. i anticipate the future. (wait, was that english?)
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  • From ANON - Shakster on July 31, 2003
    Hello, I just wanted to tell you that I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Both the "shower" scene and Tristian and Seto's first sexual encounter struck me as quite realistic. I could tell you both spent time planning the entire thing out, it was very well oragnized. I usually don't review stories unless I find them particularly well written, and I must say that I really liked it. The idea that Tristian and Seto would fight for dominance seemed some how perfect to me. My only criticism would be the idea that the doctor who treated Tristian after the rape wouldn't call the police. I would just think he'd be a little "weirded" out by treating someone who was in pretty bad condition in a residence. It's one thing to set a broken bone, quite anotho tro treat trauma like rape. And since both rape and assault are crimes, I would just think he'd contact someone. However, the story did end in a cliffhanger, and for all I know you could be adding another chapter as I write this. Anyway, I'd think it would add to the realism if you at least mentioned the fact the doctor said something to someone. Seto Kaiba probably has friends in high places anyway, so it's not as if there would have to be an investigation or anything. Any a s a small complaint, in an otherwise fabulous story. : )
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  • From ANON - clhuff on July 26, 2003
    Thanks for the fast update! I just love this story! So much drama in that last chapter. Is Tris going to be able to cope? I hope you reveal where and why Bakura left to go to. I will be waiting for the next chapter!
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  • From serialcabbit78 on July 25, 2003
    Wow... This story is getting better!! I love it.. but I think poor Seto needs this ::Huggles Seto::
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  • From ANON - EVil MJ on July 25, 2003
    OH, the pain, the pain of it all. Poor Seto so confused and unable to control the situation...he he

    Where did Bakura go anyway..yeah, like you would tell me

    Poor Joey, and you think I was going to torture the poor guy. I was just going to mess his life upa bit, your twisitin his poor mind completely

    The Most Holy of Fowls bestores his cluck of approval.
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  • From ANON - zatken on July 25, 2003
    Man, this story's getting better and better. Yes! Psycho Brad's still gone and I'm still doing my dance :-D

    Hope Tristan's going to be okay, but I feel so bad for Seto, Yami, and Yugi....although I have an idea they'll end up together.

    BTW, when are you going to update that other story of yours?

    Well, good luck with your nuptials... Can't wait to read that "wedding gift" that Keysha wrote for you guys :-D
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on July 24, 2003
    eagerly awaiting the next chappie!!!! Poor Seto! Man.............t het hell Tris has gone thru. Keep up th egood work!!
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  • From ANON - bakurasgirl on July 24, 2003
    awww...Tris, you should feel happy soe loe loves you as much as my tenshi! Great chappie, babe. I reviewed MJ, too! Poor Tris and Seto and Joey and Everyone......
    *hugs naked RYou and bakura*

    Bakura: Why do you feel like you HAVE to hug us naked???
    Bakurasgirl: I don't see Ryou complaining....
    Ryou: *sigh*
    Bakurasgirl: See? He loves me....Besides...I love hugging you. I need someone to hug while my tenshi is so far away.
    Ryou: *s* th* that's so sad!
    Bakurasgirl: It's ok...we have a present for hern'tn't we.
    Ryou: YUP! She'll love it......
    Bakura: What do I get if i let you hug me naked?
    Bakurasgirl: I'll let you have a nice lemon with Ryou soon in Anything for you.
    *Bakura glomps Bakurasgirl* See? It works every time.

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  • From Lupusdragon1 on July 24, 2003
    LD: *wacks Tristan and Joey* Now what would be the fun of asking YD & DD never to write again... I happen to like their writing. It un tun to torture the boys * grinning maliciously*
    Karen: Wow, that was some good shit *giggle* Very angsty chapter, but not totally melodramatic... you are good with the balancing act. I love the bits of humor ^_^ That is good friends for you, joking with you even when you feel like shit.
    LD: Blah, blah, blah, I don't care about the jokes, when are we going to get the Bakura/Joey action? I know it is coming dammit!
    Karen: o.O Ooooooookaaaaay
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  • From Suta on July 24, 2003
    *wipes at tears* my babies..pooor oor Seto. Tris needs to trust him!
    *waits for next chapie impatiently*
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  • From Jams on July 24, 2003
    Jams: ::pats Joey and Tristan's heads:: Sorry boys can't do that. I still want them to write! ^.^
    Neko Jounouchi: ::groans:: I have to wait again!!!
    Seto Plushie: Oh don't get your panties in a bunch!
    Neko Jounouchi: But I wanna know what happens next!!!
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