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Reviews for Father, Mother, Lover

By : BishojoShadow
  • From ANON - vtsfy on September 18, 2005
    I can't believe I sat and read through 23 chapters of constant HEARTACHE. I wanted to stop reading so many times, but I was hopeful that things would turn out okay. And then the last chapter induced a heart-stabbing/squishing experience. Owch.... -_-;

    But, it was a good story. Quite a few typos and html errors, but other than that it was amazing. Good job.
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  • From ANON - black fox on March 13, 2005
    omg thats so sad.... but you know its true. in death you feal no pain. i gess im kinda like ryou, my souls been tourn but i have no idea why and iv tried to die at least 5 times. the pain will just never go away. iv got meny scars on my wrists from trying to get rid of my pain and sorrow. but i cant do it right. is it a sign not to end my tourtcherd life? but then if so what do i do.my heart is torn along with my soul i cant even think anymore. but i did like your fic. its helped me chose. in short ill see you from hell.
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  • From ANON - chaos queen on April 05, 2004
    AWESOME storey. i love how you made the ending work.
    The song at the end made me cry, but yugi, yami, bakura and ryou all dying made me happy for them.
    I govisivision of angels screwing.
    don't think I'll ever forget this fic.
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  • From ANON - shadow on March 05, 2004
    HOW DARE YOU THAT HAD BETTER HAD BEEN AN ALTERNATE ENDING THERE IS NO WAY IN HELL I JUST READ THAT ALL THE WAY THROUGH JUST TO HAVE IT END LIKE THAT!!!! THAT ENDING WAS ARRGHH I CANT EXPLAIN IT A QUADRUPLE SUICIDE YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!!!!!!!!!! BAKURA WOULD HAVE NEVER DONE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2004
    Well that was depressing.
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  • From ANON - Tanaskarel on February 20, 2004
    OOOO I HTE YOUUU!!!!!!!
    Making me CRY like that
    you're SOOOOOOOOO MEAN!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on February 11, 2004
    I LOVED IT HON!!! great job!!
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  • From ANON - Cynicalspiritvalea on December 17, 2003
    Aww this was such a great fic! Angst prdie! Even though they all died it was optimistic of you to have it so they all do meet up one day, though youd think that they would go to the window before he stepped out! but yeah your a good writer, this is some of the best angst i have seen!

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  • From ANON - Emily on November 25, 2003
    That was the best fanfic I have ever read~! ^_^ Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on October 12, 2003
    RD:GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR GOD DAM THOS SON OF A BITCHS ILL TEAR THEM APART oh um author dont get me wrong im not mad at u just yugi and ryou's "parents" YA PARENTS HUH ILL SHOW THEM PARENTS BLACK RED DRAGON

    BRD:yes u rang sister

    RD:YES I DID GET MY WEPEONS AND YOURS TO WERE HUNTING PARENTS TONIGHT TWO CERTAIN PARENTS BY THE FUCKING NAME AS BOSHI AND YATEN OR WHATEVER THE BASTARD CALLED HIMSELF
    BRD:O.O;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; oh my ^____^;;;;;;; sure id be happy to*snaps her fingers and a million and a half racks of wepeons from every country and every time period appeared they bothe graped all they could carry and brought the others with them by trucks* ooooooooh boshikins yatenii were are u

    Y&B:OO;;;;;;;;;;; er nowere*start runing like mad only to have a solid wall made of forty layers of heavly condensed metal so they can scope nor go through and turn around with pure terror in their eyes as bothe RD and BRD came down on them and u here screams of blood curdling bone chilling pain that was so bad even set and satan would be afraid of it while u here comments such as "take this u bastards"and "this is what u get for hurting yugi and ryou and always getting your digusting way"and "and this goes double for forcing yami to do that to ryou u sick bastards"and of course"DIE DIE DIE U BASTARDS DIE FEEL THE PAIN U CAUSED YOUR SONS THATS RIGHT TAKE IT U BASTARDS TAKE IT LIKE THE DOGS U ARE U BASTARDS DIE DIE DIE DIE"

    RD:whew well thats all for now and it looks like our "guests"are worn our for now but we will finish our "fun"later MWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

    BRD:my gosh that actually was an evil cackle ^_____________^ im SO PROUD but yes this was fun well thats all for now right boys

    Y&B:X__X

    BRD&RD:thats what we thought well again later author TTFN ta ta for now
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  • From ANON - Rurouni_agra on August 29, 2003
    Rurouni_agra: *Sobbing and screaming uncontrolably* I HATE YOU! HOW COULD YOU KILKL THEM ALL! I MEAN IT DIDN'T HAVE TO HAVE A FAIRYTALE ENDING BUT YOU KILLED THEM! SUISIDE NO LESS! YOU COULD AT LEAST HAVE LET YAMI AND YUGI LIVE!

    Yami Kitsune: *sigh* she doesn't mean that. You really pissed her off with that last chapter. So since my Light is too busy ranting, I'll you you what we really thought. The fic itself was well written an bot both liked it (exsept for the last ter ter on Ruouni's part) She actually cried through most of it.

    Rurouni_agra: *still is crying but has stopped shouting* It *sob* It was *sob* It was so sad! *wail* I-I-I-I cryed!

    Yami Kitsune: Your still crying!

    Rurouni_agra: Shut up Kitsune. You didn't even blink at half the rape sceens.

    Yami Kitsune: They were well written and enjoyed them a lot, but I don't blink at much of anything.

    Rurouni_agra: Well... at least your not laughing like you normaly are when we review rape/angst fics. What do you kmow. This fic even got to my yami. 0.0 Wow.

    Yami Kitsune: I'm not sure if that's a good thing... Anyway we liked the story. it made us cry (well rurouni cryed,) it made us laugh (uhh...that was just me,) it made us stay up till 1:30 reading it because it was so adicting. All in all it's a great fic in out book.

    yami Kitsune: I just don't recomend it to people, like my light, who are over sensitive. Hell, like rurouni said...this fic even got to ME! Don't get me wrong I loved it. It's a good fic, just be sure you have the stumach for it. And to the author: I was just wondering why you unsed Joey (the name from American version) and then Honda (Japanesse version for Tristen) I just thought you might not have noticeed so this is for future reference for other fics. I hope you write more. Can't wait to read it. Ja.

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  • From ANON - Shadow Cat on July 18, 2003
    O.o That was soooooooooo sad!!! How could you kill them? But it was written very well! And you are a good writer!
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  • From ANON - Naomi on July 13, 2003
    Okay you begged for a review all the way through, so here it is. THIS FIC ROCKS!!!
    I did feel a bit angry at Ryou being beaten up at first, but I loved the rescue. I'm still laughing at them burning down the house. Poor Yami though, having to do that to Ryou. I did like it, it was well written and thought out too. ^_^ Keep writing then! Inspiration: Why not have rty,rty, birthday for Ryou, and give him a good one, or catch the others who conspired with the fathers? ^^ I hope I've helped! Lol, mail me^^
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  • From ANON - Lime on July 05, 2003
    *gasps in shock* you killed them all.....
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  • From ANON - Frankie on July 05, 2003
    This ending was lovely but so upsetting it kinds spoilt the fic. still i really think its sweet that they wood all meet up again after.
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