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Reviews for In My Heart

By : serialcabbit78
  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on May 29, 2003
    YD: HEHEHEHE!!
    DD: Geeze Joey! Be a little less obvious why don't ya!
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  • From on May 29, 2003
    The concept of the story is good, but just so you know, It's way too fast paced. For being how short the chapters are and being vague on thoughts and emotions it seems rather random to have them already wanting to have sex. Another thing, after one kiss and having your crotch grabbed isn't enough to make you break. I believe Jounouchi would be a lot stronger then that. Like I said you concept is good, along with the word structure and poetry. Just try to put a little more effort into developing things before throwing them into bed.
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  • From ANON - Rhea on May 24, 2003
    Awww, that was a really good poem. I like poem-writing too. ^_^ I love the Kaiba/Jou coupling, hope it all works out in the end.
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  • From ANON - bakurasgirl on May 23, 2003
    Aww.....Seto wrote it didn't he???? You are a really good poet. You really are. It's nice when the words come to you so easily, huh? That's talent! Can't wait for chappie 2
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  • From ANON - aniron legolas on May 23, 2003
    GAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!! You must continue!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kitty Kat on May 22, 2003
    Daisy: *grabs TheMysticalDragon by the neck and shakes 'em back and forth* YOU MUST FINISH THIS AS SOON AS POSSIBLE SO WE CAN SEE SOME ROMANTIC STUFF!
    Nuva: And some possible lemony goodness. ^_^ Ahem, hikari? Calm down.
    Daisy: 0_0;; *lets go of author* Sorry. I just want to see Jou see Seto. After all, it was him thaote ote the poem, right?
    Nuva: Well duh. The whole 'only one person calls me a dog' thing pretty much gave it away.
    Daisy: *squeels* This is a Seto/Jou fic! ^.^ At least... i hope it is. Can never be to sure. ^_^;; Anyways, please get the next part up! *bows repeatedly* We are not worthy!
    Nuva: -_-;;
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  • From ANON - Ballroom Blitz on May 22, 2003
    Yay!! Now where's the rest of it. {Makes a grab for the fluffy baseball bat of annoyance, instead ends ups brahinghing the rubber frying pan} I demand More!! Please ^_^
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  • From ANON - kay on May 22, 2003
    akr...youv got to be kitting me...this is kinda funny...dont rush to much....hope you write more

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  • From ANON - rubyred on May 22, 2003
    very very cute
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  • From ANON - Keysha on May 22, 2003
    Awww...what a sweet poem!! I wonder was it Seto that wrote it? *grins* Add more soon..I like this a great deal!
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on May 22, 2003
    YD: Where in the name of all that is holy is the REST OF IT!?!?!
    DD: Calm down yami, I'm sure it'll be out soon.
    YD: It better be!
    DD: If you threaten the author, they'll get mad, and maybe not put up the next chapter.
    YD: *grumbles* sorry
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