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By : MagicReeni

From ANON - Tsuki Kage on March 25, 2004
I love your writing! This is probably some of the best I've seen up lately and I 'm so impressed! Do you have any more stories? I love Yu-Gi-Oh and approve of yaoi pairings! e-mail me and tell me if you do have any more stories! I 'd be so happy if I could review them! Domo Arigatou!!! ^.^
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From ANON - Lina u on June 30, 2003
does that mean we can only vote for thoes two, cause i wanted the one with Malik Marik Ryou and Bakura in
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From ANON - AiAiAi on June 28, 2003
Wow this fic was so *burst in to tears* i could never write this much and this Good. so what if it wasnt orignal. Anywho, i thin that 'With you' sound good and 'Unexpective love' sound even better please *puppy dog eye'd*
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From ANON - Ch on June 28, 2003
couldya do 'With You' and Unexpected love' they sound the most intresting ^.^
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From ANON - Taryn on June 28, 2003
I vote for With You

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From ANON - Yami on June 27, 2003
Love is unexplainable sounds good for the two tie-breakers.
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From ANON - ... on June 27, 2003
I vote for 'With you' ^___________^ BTW, this story was sooooooooooooooooooooo good!
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From ANON - kura\'s girl on June 27, 2003
i want with you please
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From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on June 26, 2003
RD:hey Red here again good fic but god dammit those stupid bullies and that tea is no different grr i hate them all for hurting yugi and causing Yami troulble really as much as i love the guy and believe me i really do*looks over and shrine she made in dedication to yugi and Yami made of the finest silver,gold,diamond,rubies and all riches of the world*hehe but really Yami how could like guys like them when they try to hurt ppl like Yugi who didnt do anything hey White Dragon get the remote

WD:what for*looks at RD nervously*
RD:cuz i want to get the artilery and show those bullies and Keith to cuz i read this story before what happens when u mess with yami and yugi and tea(aka Bitchempress of the es)ues)uh whats with that Yami-kins thing i mean really Yami is a masculine guy here so pls no stupid lovey dovey names unless its something like ni-chan whatever that is so WD get the weps out now pls
WD:alright*takes out the remote and presses the button to bring racks apoun racks of wepons from every region of the glope from every time zone and from reality to fiction(u know like wizzy staffs and stuff)ok i get lets see *picks a bebe Gun a lazer gun two rocket launchers two farsights and three samurai blades* and my fav the AR 47assult rifle alsown awn as the Hiei imitator cuz its just as brutal as he is

RD:-_-;;;;;;;;;;; ooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkk and i guess i choose*picks three farsights two slayers four mage staffs and high lvl druid spells includ nukes Dots/damage over time spells and wolf form two BEWD and five REBD and seven DMs and eight DMGs*ok im done now lets get to killing *snaps fingers all bullies appear* ok rdy aim and FIRE *takes all her weps and attacks the bullies with WD following in close persuit* oh and one more thing author good story keep it up and JA WD:ja
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From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on June 26, 2003
RD:hey Red Dragon here again and i just wanted to say great ficcy oh and like i said before im going to make tea and keith pay NO ONE AND I REPEAT N O E H E H U R T S YAMI AND YUGI AND LIVES IM GOING TO BRING THEM HRE WITH THE REST OF THE YGO CAST AND TORTURE TEA N KEITH TILL THEY BEG TO DIE WITH MY SISTER AT MY SIDE*puffs in anger* what about u White Dragon
WD:well i for one am going to make tea pay for using poor ryou's mystake against him the two timing half witted nendrathalian bitch from planet whoremania grr get the heavy artilery these two are going to know pain like never before
RD:i second that pulls out remote control and every sing wepon imaginable is brought out(uknow like in the matrix when all those wepons show up)and now to bring out the the cast and the presents for yugi and Yami for having to deal with all this pain *glares playfully at the author* ur lucky arthor i like your fic else ud be joining tea and keith for what u did to Yugi and Yami ::glomps author and gives her a new rare diomond tha has the power to grant her her most greates desires:::
WD: k inc ygo cast *creates a whirl wind it goes off and five minutes later reappears with the ygo cast all winded and confused*
YGO:what are we doing here and why are all those wepons out
RD: u will se but first could yugi and Yami come here pls
YY,Y*come forard a little nervous especially yugi* what is it
RD: here *gives them some gifts* these are diomonds that can grant u what u wish for when u wish for it and these two cans yugi are for repelling insults and punches and bounce them back at the one who gave it and the other is to basically having them believe u are a god sent from heaven to make them quiver in awe hehe and now finally bothe of u get a set of animals that i feel make great friends for u and protectors like two dragons,two unicorns,two eagles and two wolves one set is white the other is black and they all only obey u and live off your emotion in other words if u feels threatened by someone then they wil react and attack same for yami and his troulbes*glares at Keith*so what do u think
YY,Y:wee the thnks now can u tell us why we are here
RD:sure basically we r angry at tea and KEith and want 2 hurt them for hurtin u 2 so grab a wep ive got plenty from every age every dynasty and if u wish to know a style just give the name and u will know it like for example*grabs a samurai's blade unsheethes it and says then name of the styles she wants to know*hiten mitsirougi style *begins to preform that technique* see easy and thats how they work and u can also choose a wep like that your fave monster hasbecobecom that monster if u want ok who want to kill tea and keith now oh and before i for get as for a sequal um maybe take off were yami takes yugi to his house for the summer and then things can take off from there and as for my vote the its only game plus that one were yami and yugi are bros and the one were the hikaris go to ancient egypt ok lets go guys*all graps wepons and start killing tea and keith* All:ja
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From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on June 26, 2003
RD:hey Red Dragon here nice ficcy lots of drama and sweet passion though i kinda just skimmed past the part were Yami get u know t wor word by that SON OF A MOTHER FUCKING WHORE SEARCHING BASTARD sry for my tounge but it gets me so mad when someone thinks they can just hurt Yami and not get away with it and Tea(aka the bitch from twitsvile) she is no better tormenting yugi like that what kind of twisted female is she i swear ppl like her give us decent loving females like myself a VERY BAD NAME*glares at tea for ruining all female reputation* in fact white Dragon bring all the YGO cast in pls i think there are going to love this

WD:*glances at RD nervously what did u have in mind

RD:simple im going to torture tea and i know everyone will enjoy every minute of it and Keith to and not just by myself but with my beloved siste wel well

WD O_O:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::; Y-YYYOUR KIDDING RIGHT !?!?!?! i mean i know your angry but really is your sister REALY nessecary u know what she can do

RD:oh i asure i am serious and dont tell u think keith and tea dont deserve this i mean incase u forgotten she used RYOU"S little mystake against Yugi REMEMBER

WD:>_< DONT REMIND ME THAT TWISTED SELF SERVING DITSY HEADY BITCH ID KILL HER WITH MY OWN BARE HANDS FOR NEARLY DESTROYING YUGI AND PRACTICALLY PUTING THE BLAME ON RYOU U KNOW WHAT ILL JOIN U AND YOUR SISTER IN TORMENTING THESE TWO THEY URNED IT*puff in extertion from bringing out half of her anger*

RD:O_O well im glad u are willing to join us now *calls her sister over* OH BLACK RED DRAGON come her sis i need your help WERE ABOUT TO TORMENT TEA AND KEITH WITH THE ENTIRE YGO CAST WATCHING

BRD:great so were are they ive got some great new ways to torment MWAHAHAHAHAHHA*starts cackling insanly with a devilish look in her eyes* so come on already bring them out

WD: alright alright here we go* blows out a twister wich leaves and five minutes later reapears with all the YGO cast members looking a little winded and confused*

YGOcast:were are we

RD: this will be fun oh um tea Keith could u come here pls we want to show u two something

Tea:oh realy finally im getting the attention and respect i deserve

Keith:no prob toosts and maybe after this u and your two friends here would like to spends some R&R with me huh

RD: R I G H T whatever anyways look what we've got for u*pulls a whip with electro shock of 100K volts of electricity and whips it forward and slashes tea who shrieks in pain and the shock numbing her from the inside out* ha houd do u like it know tea nots so much fun is it when you are on the recieving end and pain that seems to shock your heart now is it

YGOC:*cheers loudly supporting RD's actions*

RD: and now sis u and WD can have a crack at keith and then me and WD will finish whats left of tea and then get rid of bothe of their remains oh wait *looks and the cast* is there a Yugi Motou and Yami Hitokage and a Ryou Bakura with Bakura Yuwimba any were

YY,Y,R,B:yes

RD: well for your trouble with these two pests*glares at tea and Keith who is currently screaming at the pain he is getting from WD,BRD who are laughing in great joy at his pain*im granting u all your hearts desires by way of gifts lets see here* whistles and a bag the size of MT emerest apears and she digs into it for the gifts to Yugi,Yami,Ryou,and Bakura*ah ha here they are lets see for yugi u get * takes a Giant breathe for its a lot of stuff* a spray can that deflects all insults and aims back at your bullies a spray can that emmits and fragrance so wonderful that all u smell it wil think a god is walking among them who radiats beauty and charm a infinite supply of candies,chocolate and my personal fave SODA under these name hersey,nesly,etc moutain dew and again etc and a copy of mesmeric control were u can have a person do as u wish them to and two sets of dragon balls so u can have whatever wish granted to u not beyond the dragon's limit for he has no limit and lets see here oh yes a complete new wardrope with all the latest hotest leather outfits all in red,blue,black dark green,gold, and neon white and a white dragon a white horse a white Unicorn and white Pegesas(the horse not the man)a white gizel and oh yes a white eagle and white hawk and a white artic wolf as companions and thats its *gasps for breath*my that was a quite extensive and so i dont end up repeating myself and risking passing out from lack of breath all u get the same thing excetp the animals wil be what fits your char and will be a color similar to what u like and now hows it going WD,BRD*looks over to see Keith writhing in agony with bothe WD,BRD smirking above him* OOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooookkkkkkkkk i guess that answers my question now before i forget authoress my votes on new fics are its just a game and that one were the hikaris wind up in Egypt and the one were Yami and Yugi are brothers and as for the sequal um have it were Yugi and Yami are starting a new life outside of Highschool yeah and Yami is starting College and Yugi is to but they also split back and forth running the game shop and with Seto's help make it a blooming buisness and have it were after his visit with yami over the summer Keith decides he'd like to have Yugi as well and tries the same tactic on him but every time he get haulted and has to wait and soon when he knows yugi is alone in the game shop tries and succeeds barely but as a result he gets busted thnks u Author rebecca and of course Yami and his friend and naturally u have to show yugi starting off his final year yami agreeing to looking after yugi's shop until he can while he is going to college and they still see each other very often and then yugi goes to college as well and thats how i see but up to u so YGO cast care to join in the killing of tea and keith

YGOC:YEAH LETS MAKE THOSE TWO SCUM SUCKING BITCHES PAY *goes after tea and Keith with me,WD,BRD and yugi,yami,ryou,and bakura after thanking us for the gifts and give me and WD a kiss for their fans join them in massacuring tea and keith* RD:THIS IS A WARNING TO ALL IF U HURT YUGI OR RYOU OR YAMI OR BAKURA U WILL ONLY END UP HURTING YOURSELF GOT THAT ja for now

YGO:ja ne

WD,BRD:JA
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From ANON - Anon on June 25, 2003
Do Love is Unexplainable.
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From ANON - Anon on June 25, 2003
I Love Sappy endings!
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From ANON - Ashley-chan on June 25, 2003
I personally like the one with Malik x Ryou. So, there's my vote. As much as I love the Yami x Hikari thing(Courtesy of Edmondia Dantes, author of 'Possession'), nothing beats a good Hikari x Hikari ficcie. Or even a Yami x Yami. Like Ryou x Yugi, or Malik x Ryou, or Malik x Yugi....or Bakura x Marik, or Marik x Yami, or Yami x Bakura. -Hentai grin.- I am soooo corrupyed, but oh well. Ciao!
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From ANON - cy on June 24, 2003
Hey
Great story,

I got a few ideas for a sequal,
if you want to hear my ideas e-mail me, OK!

Again Great Story!!!!
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