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Reviews for Sins Of The Pharaoh

By : Aten
  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on October 11, 2006
    *growls dangerously while twitching* Okay...Now I never EVER EVER flame anyone...except people who put things in the WRONG catergory...there is a Hetro section back in the menus...quite frankly...I have no idea what HET is doing in the YAOI section GO POST IT SOMEWHERE ELSE!!! I'm sorry Bakurasgirl but seriously...it's disturbing...think of it as a polite warning...please replace this story in the right section..no offense or anything
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on June 05, 2005
    EWEEEE....that was grossss! I loved it! You did a wonderful job describing Ravana's death and that nasty rotten wound. I really think we need to find out why Yami is such a prick, I mean...wow. *shakes head*
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on May 10, 2005
    Damn! Anubis needs to die a gory nasty death, he's so mean! I wish Aten would stick that sick fuck with his sword!
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  • From ANON - Doodie on April 08, 2005
    I'm hooked with this fanfic, please update soon before I explode >.< Oh yes.. I meant a pretty please in there by the way :D
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  • From ANON - neferu on March 14, 2005
    just read this, hmmm interesting take on the whole dark yami theme. anubis cruel, his wife, a bitch, yami in this one, is an asshole, sorry but as much as i like him, in thi one he is DARK, REAL DARK. killing children, not called for. but at least veria seth and mariks wife showed some human kindness , good for them, hurray, i hope anubis gets his just deserts , interesting fic there, and update soon?
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  • From ANON - anon on March 14, 2005
    yami, yami , yami, don not shed the blood of innocents, it will be your undoing,
    um interesting fif, gory tragic and strange, but good
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  • From Pussycat on February 20, 2005
    The Thief King had removed his clothes!
    LOL just to add insult to injury huh?

    “A common girl?! A boy from what family? I can’t make it out!”
    Mnya, sucks to be you, Pointy Hair

    With a sad look he waved goodbye to them.
    Aten sniffled. “Hamadi…..”
    Oooo you know that's a permanent good-bye

    The wall suddenly began to reveal an image of Hamadi kneeling with his arms crossed in front of his chest.
    Below read the inscription: The Helpless Child.
    Okay, Hamadi died and all and that's bad, but I have to say one thing about the sealing in the wall: COOL!!

    Aria was backing up and didn’t look where she was going. Aten knocked Aria into the tub of water.
    *laughs*

    Anubis approached the city gate where the hungry dogs were already fighting over the scraps of food tossed into the gutter.
    “Here’s more meat, pooches,” Anubis called as the foaming, snarling dogs caught eye of their feast.
    Ewwww. That's just nashtay!

    “I have found a way to become immortal and have ultimate power over the people of Egypt…and the known world.”
    *snorts* Crazy much?

    “Nobody will stop me from getting the power that I deserve!”
    Oh yeah... he's gone completely nutters...


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  • From Pussycat on February 16, 2005
    Aria nodded. “I slept with all the mommies! It was fun!”
    *laughs* Bet Seth would have liked it more....

    Butcher of Cairo, huh? It fits.

    Seth was snapped from his thoughts as he saw Yami grab Rayna and pull her to her feet. He removed a dagger from his belt and Seth’s heart froze.
    “NO! SHE MAY BEAR YOUR HEIR!”
    Oy, took you long enough to react.

    " I would bring him into my harem to stay with my children, but, if I ever
    have Aten in here, Yami would have his hands on him in no time. Yami
    favors boys his age. He favors their innocence. "
    Ohhhh yeah... that's why Seth never took the boy in.

    "MY LAW IS ABOSOLUTE! MY POWER IS UNMATCHED BY THE GODS! I AM RA!"
    *snorts* Ehhh, bite me Starfish Head.

    Seth narrowed his eyes at the cheering tyrant.
    Someday….Yami had to be stopped.
    Now would be nice.

    “There will be one rule of this bed, Aria: You will not kick your feet.”
    “Why?”
    Seth bit his lip. “It would hurt me….alot.”
    *falls over laughing* Yeah, you might bruise the Priestly Jewels.


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  • From MarikIshtar77 on February 15, 2005
    Sheesh, the Pharaoh friggin' scares the crap out of me! What a *insert long string of curses*!
    Bakura...damn! That poor guy! I hope he eventually gets to rape the bloody hell out of Yami.
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  • From ANON - Lakota on January 24, 2005
    WOW!!! What a story! It's very intresting though. I'm eager to keep reading so please update it!!!
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 23, 2005
    I still say that Anubis must die. Now I say that his brak Akil must die too. Evil little shit.

    "Your soldiers are ill, it is YOUR job to see that they are brought back to health."
    *snorts* a priest knows more about running an army than the general does. Figures.

    “Look at all the mommies!”
    *laughs* cuuuuute

    “Nighty-night, Seth! Have good dreams about stuff that smells nice!” Aria called to him as she waved to him.
    *cracks up* that's just too damned cute!!


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  • From ANON - Kat on January 16, 2005
    Anubis must die. He's really beginning to be annoying. That's all I have to say about him.

    I feel sorry for Aten. Poor kid. I'd forgotten that he meets Marik. Totally spaced that.

    Awwwwww, he made a new friend. That's so cute.

    Seriously, Anubis must die.

    Kat
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  • From ANON - Blinky on January 09, 2005
    Brilliant story, please update soon XDD
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  • From ANON - Kat on December 24, 2004
    *reads first half* I'm so glad Khalfani dies painfully....

    The baby looked up at Seth and smiled.
    “Are you a happy boy today?”
    “Ahh! Da!”
    AWWWWW sooo cute!

    “Who’s a big boy?”
    The baby squealed and laughed.
    *falls over howling* Ohhhh the visuals of tough, strong Seth doing this... just too fricken' funny!!!

    Seth narrowed his eyes at her. “I will return the child when I’m ready.”
    oooooo somebody's pushy.....

    Yami looked at the thin child. “Such radical thinking hardly becomes a High Priest, Seth.”
    *snorts* get knotted pharaoh.

    ‘This is the life,’ he thought as he relaxed.
    *laughs* spoiled priest.


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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on December 24, 2004
    thanks the decent gods for the high priest. and i hope yami rots in the deepest bowls of ammut's stomach one of these days. i hate royalty who thinks women can't rule it's pathetic! aye well it's sweet to see that aten has taken a liking to the priest. he even said 'da!' so cute ^^ and poor little aria. i still think bakura should have at least cut off that whore mongel's dick off and shove it up his ass to see how he likes it. godess i am bloody minded today...
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