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By : Aten
  • From ANON - Kathryn Coll on June 25, 2005
    Wow, short.... I know what you said at the bottom about Hayden falling in with a bad crowd, but I'm hoping he gets hit by a car.

    yeah yeah, I know. Not nice.

    Kat
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on June 17, 2005
    *points and laughs* Bakura got peed on! That's too funny! :::runs off and dies in a corner laughing:::
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  • From ANON - Kathryn Coll on June 15, 2005
    Bits and pieces? And here I've been using that phrase to describe what the cat leaves behind when he's eaten a critter....

    "Ryou chuckled quietly as her snoring reminded him of her father."
    *laughs* yeah, that's what I thought....

    “Hello, my daddy’s friends, I---uhh….” Umi continued to snore and talk in his sleep.
    *laughs* cuuuute

    “Come on, Ryou…get your hands out of Malik’s pants and let’s go,”
    *cracks up* now that sounds like something one usually hears in that house.

    “Damn, that’s hot,” Marik said
    Oy, he just channeled that Hilton chick!

    Nice lemon... Glad to see no one said "bits and pieces" though...
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on June 13, 2005
    Kick ass yami/hikari lemons! Well worth the wait, that's for sure. Hope that necklace works!!
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  • From ANON - Kathryn Coll on June 11, 2005
    Cabbage better than sex? Dude, he must like farting better than orgasms.... Weird

    “He’s charged with rape and attempted rape of a minor, murder and attempted murder.”
    *snort* You know, the normal stuff...

    “Don’t give me that, Yami! Who did you hurt?”
    Yami shrugged and backed away. “You act like this is a big deal.”
    *cackles* Psycho much?

    “Then pull the Millennium Rod out of your ass and stop acting like an asshole!"
    *falls over laughing* perfect parting shot!
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on June 09, 2005
    *hugs Yami and gives him a bag of red shoe-string licorice*
    Awww, the poor Pharaoh! I think he deserves another chance! Granted, he's done some bad things, but so have Bakura and Marik, and Ryou and Malik accept those things. Too bad Yugi isn't a little bigger than Yami, because I think what the Pharaoh needs is for somebody to dominate his sexy ass. I mean, he's always on top, I bet he'd like it if somebody would do him for a change. (Yami... shackled to his own alter... getting spanked for being a baaaad Pharaoh...whoa...hotnesss...*_*)
    I'm routing for the Pharaoh, I know there's some decency left in him. (or maybe it's because I've been trained to stay loyal to the Pharaoh, even if he's acting like a dumbshit? I dunno...*shrug*) He's only being a dick because he was nice to everybody for so long and got no appreciation for it. Yugi always got the credit for the good things the Pharaoh did, not fair at all. I'd be evil and pissy too, if I were in the Pharaoh's place. There's still hope for Yami, he just needs the right person to show him some (real) love and bring him down to earth again.
    ~The insense and candles are ready, looking forward to the lemony hotness!! GO BOYS!! YEAH!

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  • From ANON - Kathryn Coll on June 06, 2005
    Oh, so it's Eric. Okay.

    "I’ll never forgive you for beating me in that duel! For that alone, I should spill your brains all over this alley!”
    blah, blah, blah... little dog barking.

    *snickers* Married or not, Aria's so busted for calling her dragon.

    A thunderous roar stopped the yami short.
    “Ryou???? Umm…..was that you?”
    *laughs* that's like blaming the dog, right?

    He quickly pulled them up and buttoned them.
    Good thing he doesn't have zip-fly jeans...

    Yugi frequents gay strip clubs??!!!!!
    Go Yugi!

    Glen's the stripper? Well... now's a good time to check him for a vagina..

    "Is that okay, cutie-pie?”
    *snerks* spreading it on a bit thick?

    “Thank you, sweet-cakes.”
    okay, that's using a shovel to spread that uhh.... flattery

    *eyeroll* Hayden just needs to be put down.


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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on June 05, 2005
    BWAHAHAHA! I loved the part where Bakura and Ryou were getting snuggly and Aria went and blew it for them! Kids! They're always interupting!! LMFAO! GO ARIA!!
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  • From Yamima on June 05, 2005
    That was great is there anymore?
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  • From ANON - elusive_dreamer on June 05, 2005
    Wow! I'm really flattered that you liked my suggestion of a conflict *blushes* I guess re-reading your past stories inspired me in thinking of ways on how Yami can screw with the Ishtars and Itemris lives, heehee^_^
    Anyway, I've got nothing to comment about on the last chapter but can I ask something? About the mystery person residing on the shadow realm, when will this character be finally revealed? Will he play a large part here in 'Journey to Heaven'? Don't get me wrong, I'm not complaining or anything but I'm really just curious because you haven't mentioned anything about him since you've introduced of his presence. Another thing, will there be another 'situation' between Ryou and Yami and will Bakura find out about this anytime soon? (Sorry, but the whole "Hell on Earth" thing that Bakura said really caught my attention...For me that line about him promising hell on earth really made him a million times sexier than before) I wonder what Bakura's reaction will be and what will he do to Yami? (*Thinks* what's worse than hell?)
    Finally, I hope you'll include something about Ryou and Bakura on your next chapters; I really miss moments between those two.
    Okay I guess that's it, see you next chapter! ^_^

    Note: One last thing, will there be future 'bloodlust' moments between either yamis and their hikaris?

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  • From ANON - Iluvkenshin on June 02, 2005
    I just read chpt 48 and I was listening to Seal's State of Grace; this song fits the relationship of Aten & Robbie to a T.
    And I don't know that you are Seal fan or not, but you need to listen to the song. Another sequel? Can you give a sample of what's to come? Also, Aria is on my Sims(the Urbs version) and tried to get the all guys except Seto and Joey...the game doesn't have white(plati) blond hair for the men only the women. I wish that I can download of pic (Aria) to send to you. Gasoline Row is where she hangs out on the game and live 98th Apartments. Well that's all...can't wait for another exciting chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kathryn Coll on June 01, 2005
    “Asher, when we get home, you can light Seto’s fireplace on fire. Okay?”
    well, at least he didn't say he could light Seto's fire....

    That family is nuts enough without in-breeding.
    Now there's a fricken' duh statement. *cackles*

    “If that was the only way to do it, I’d do it for Aten and I.”
    Two words: turkey baster *falls over laughing*

    “That’s the grossest thing I have ever seen in my life.”
    Ha! Wait for the creamed spinach and strained peas!!!

    “You know, Aten, only you and your father can mention ‘Rod’ and ‘Hang’ in the same sentence.”
    That's because they're the only ones who would mention that...

    Aten’s hair spiked. “That was not meant for you!”
    *snorts* cue the over-reacting

    It was then that I looked into the familiar pair of souless, masochistic eyes of my assailant
    yes, but which one?
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on May 30, 2005
    Whoa hell! Hayden's really turned into a nasty little shit! That kid curses almost as much as my yami's do in Hellraisers II. Joey and Seto certainly have their work cut out for them.
    Nice Aten/Robbie lemon! I'm glad Aten was able to relax for once; that makes me happy.^_^

    Have a great holiday!
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  • From ANON - Kathryn Coll on May 27, 2005
    Robbie took a deep breath and saw Aten sitting there with at grin on his face that matched Marik’s when he was up to no good.
    *snorts* cue strutting: like father, like son

    Asher turned and left, leaving Robbie red from blushing.
    don't know why Robbie's worried. Asher only looks at things that are burning. Like Robbie's face. la

    "He’ll be surrounding the torches all night. You know how that guy gets around fire.”
    Hope Asher is gonna bring an extra pair of pants... he'll cream the ones he's wearing when he sees all that fire.

    “On the beach?!”
    two words: gritty lube

    Aten snickered. “Us Ishtars are flexible.”
    Understatement of the Year!!!!

    “I’m not in a private place. I don’t feel….scared.”
    Those Ishtars are exhibitionists too! *snerks*

    Robbie’s eyes looked up to see Aten laughing as he was being prepared.
    oooooooooookayyyyyyyyyyyyy boy's laughing with a finger up his bum.... riiiiiiiiiiiiight

    *cackles* the key to revving Aten's engine: sex in public


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  • From ANON - elusive_dreamer on May 27, 2005
    Hey! It’s been a while huh? Looks like I’ve missed a LOT already and the chibis are finally married! The Itemri-Ishtar household sure has gone a long way! Anyway, I don't have much comment about the last few chapters but I really love Bakura's whole "Hell on Earth" thing if he loses Aria. It makes me wonder then on how he will react once Ryou dies...or when he finds out about Yami and Ryou (Something worse I guess?). Speaking of Ryou, I got this whole idea of a possible conflict while re-reading some chapters from your past stories. I was just wondering on what Aria and Aten's reaction would be if they find out about Ryou and Bakura's past relationship, not to mention Ryou and Marik too, since both Yamis were ones very abusive towards him and Malik. In my opinion, this "skeleton in Bakura and Marik's closets" could very well be a trump card for the Pharaoh to finally cause chaos in their family (sorry, but I really like the way villains always find a way to ruin everyone else's life) Please tell me on what you think of this, anyway it's just an idea so if you don't think it could work it's okay. I think that's it for now...see you next chapter! ^_^
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