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By : Aten
  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on December 31, 2004
    OMG! You'll never guess what I just finished watching. It was a hentai movie (Don't think of me weird. It was mine and my boyfriend's anniversary today...3 years! woo!) and it ended scarily like what happened in one of your previos fic in this series. You know how Ryou slept with both Bakura and Marik and had the twins one belonging to each? Well that same thing happened in the movie! I was like "OMG! It's like the fanfiction!". I just thought it was so ironic. Anyway, Keith must die. I don't like him being with Aria. It's just so wrong. I could never picture her sleeping with him. *shudders*
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  • From ANON - anubiset on December 30, 2004
    Thank god I found you fics somewhere else. I can`t get onto mediaminer. I`m not what is going on and I had my computer checked. It`s not on my end. Oh well, enough of that. I just read the next chapter (7) and I hate those friggin idiots. Let me guess that guy at the end was Yami. If they hurt Aten I will never forgive them. And don`t you dare let them hurt Robbie. I love all of your stories and can`t enough, never stop. je ne.
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  • From ANON - Kat on December 27, 2004
    Marik grinned at Bakura. “So do I. Let’s go, Itemri.”
    *cackles* violent films: better than Viagra for Yamis (okay, healthy ones).

    “Well, after we sedate Father Bakura, he will still feel like raising hell.”
    *laughs* true, very true!

    “Even at fifteen years old, he still manages to collapse anywhere when he gets tired.”
    *howls* it's so damned cute! Hell, I know boys that do that into their 20s!

    Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay *sings* Malik got his lemon!

    “He won’t take this lightly, Ryou. Be prepared for anything. You know Bakura may have changed, but he is still Bakura. He can be unpredictable.”
    Ding ding ding ding ding Understatement of the year award goes to Malik Ishtar!

    “You pulled my pants off and threw your boxers onto the front lawn. Honestly, Itemri…..what if a kid came by and saw your underwear on the lawn?”
    *falls over laughing* Lawn Ornaments! *cackles*

    “What is it with you and contorting your lovers like a pretzel? You know, Ishtar, there are some ways that men were not meant to bend.”
    *pauses to drool* Ooooo flexible, bennnnndy

    “How long does this last, mother? I’m so tired of feeling sick in the morning!”
    *snickers* Can't wait till she starts hearing the horror stories about the women who have morning sickness for at least 6 months.

    Aten opened the front door and heard a cry of pain.
    “ATEN, THAT’S MY HEAD YOU HIT!” Robbie cried out in pain.
    *falls over laughing hysterically* Took his mind off his foot for a moment though!

    “Why not do something radical like…..enjoy a day off from school?”
    “And do nothing?”
    Ummm, am I the only one who thinks he's beginning to sound like Seto?? *smirks*

    Aten snickered. ‘After his reaction to the video in health class, I wouldn’t be surprised if doesn’t want to be anywhere near the delivery room.’
    *laughs* I can see him reaching for Seto's stomach medication.

    No rage.
    No movement.
    Just…..stillness.
    Eeep *dives for the nearest bomb shelter*

    Marik and Malik didn’t see the fast hand that connected with Bakura’s cheek.
    whoa.... Ryou walloped Bakura? Shiiiiit, he's gonna pay for that.

    "And I refuse to be the monster to my kids that you used to be to me.”
    Oooooo and there's the punch.

    “Bakura?” Ryou looked around. “’Kura?”
    Silence.
    Ohhh boy...

    Yami laughed. “Time to pin some dirt on Bakura.”
    *snort* and it gets worse....

    “This is only the beginning,”
    I'm thinking that Yami's not gonna have to do much pinning of dirt. Bakura's doing a good job of getting dirty himself.


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  • From ANON - Kat on December 24, 2004
    Yaaay he got it back! A rodless Marik is just... *blinks, cackles* a girl. I mean, not right. Yeah, it's not right to be rodless. *blinks innocently*

    Marik grabbed the polish and started to clean the Rod. “Damn pharaoh got his germs all over it, I bet.”
    Ewwww Pharaoh germs on his rod...

    ‘Great….more mood swings. I can tell we’re going to go through a shit load of more toasters, seeing as I always end up sending the Ra-Damned things to the Shadow realm when they burn my toast.’
    *laughs* yup and everything else that gets in her way... Poor Bakura!

    The birthing process is a beautiful thing, especially when the body is pulled, tugged, and stretched in ways never thought before possible by mom.
    *falls over laughing hysterically* oh yeah, beautiful... *howls*

    Aria watched as Robbie looked at her for the first time with disdain. “I never thought you would stoop so low, Aria. I thought you were better than this.”
    Whoa... Well, Robbie always could get his point across.

    Horror movie night is father/son bonding time.... yesssss, that sounds right. *shudders* At least it ain't broadway musical night!

    “I’m never having sex with a girl…EVER.”
    *laughs* I think this is going to become Robbie's motto....

    Marik stepped into the door way. “I can make a sex ed video.”
    I wanna take that health class!!!

    “My little pussycat likes to….slap the meat?”
    Oh fu... *laughs hysterically* Tristan + Otogi = more fun with food than imaginable.

    “Hmm…Bakura in panties….”
    Oh yeah.... black lace all the way!

    Glenn and Otogi let out identical squeals.
    Oh my god, there's two of them!

    Joey’s body changed, turning back into Yami.
    Ohhhhhhhh that explains why he was so... un-Joey like.

    “This is not good. The pharaoh is up to something.”
    boy, I'll say....

    Cool, monday! Can read between loads of laundry.
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on December 24, 2004
    *beats the crap out of Yami* You do not interfere with Aria's pregnancy! She's already as freaked out as she could be! *beats him more* Heh sorry. I needed to get that out of my system. I just hope Bakura won't murder her...
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on December 24, 2004
    ... honestly? what are hte odds that the baby's is umi? what if the baby is keith's? either way... yami is kinda doinga favor for aria. but, and you can delete this review if you want sicne this is your story, but damnit aria use a fucking condom!! its girls like you that have no future because they are so honry to get laid!! again i apologize for this. and otogi, can we say world's biggest motuh and i don't mean in the yaoi way. but as sick as this sounds, it's a kinda blessing in disguise. poor helpless child... and the birthing video. i know how hte kids feel. i didn't see it under my second year of bio in college and the entire class was still grossed out. no wait, we show how hte eyes and ejactulationw orks but it still grossed us out. laterz.
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  • From ANON - Kat on December 21, 2004
    “Waffles, pancakes, toast, and an egg! Oh, and a blueberry muffin! And coffee! Lots and lots of coffee!”
    *groans* Ugh... enough to feed an army!

    “We haven’t seen Dice-Boy in a while. What makes you think he has my Rod?”
    “Maybe you left it in his vagina,”
    *laughs* Ziiiiiiiiiiing!

    “Chibi Yami, no sending teachers to the Shadow Realm!”
    *laughs* Damn, that's a good idea too!

    “Hello, Aria! It’s so nice to see you! I’m so not awake this morning. Are you tired? I’m tired. Why do we have to go to school, anyway?”
    Shit, does that girl ever breathe?! She reminds me of that cartoon mouse, Sniffles....

    Wow! Principal's got balls! Good for her!

    "Causing death, destruction, madness, and chaos can be done after school.”
    *falls over laughing* Gotta love Robbie's priorities! *cackles*

    “Where did you get that kind of money? Bake sales? Avon parties?”
    Meow! *smirks*

    “I’ll pay you five million dollars if you never do that again. Besides, you’ve got more estrogen in you than Miranda!”
    *cackles*

    Wow, Bakura and Aria going fighting... oooo fireworks.

    "The tough CEO felt his heart shatter in tiny pieces inside his chest."
    AWWWWW, Poor Seto.

    "I’ll find the scummiest guy in Domino. I’m going to do what I want."
    *rolls eyes* Ah yes, rebellious teenage logic. *snorts*

    Wow, Aria's good at the cold-hearted "let's be friends" speech. *snorts*

    "Aten sniffled. “She doesn’t even know I exist sometimes. We don’t do anything anymore.”
    Poor thing.... good fricken' luck getting through to her.

    “The name’s Keith. Bandit Keith.”
    EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

    tsk, evil cliffie too. naughty
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on December 21, 2004
    bandit keith?!?!?! *utters every known curse* oh lord this is so not gonna be good. bakura and seto need to chill out i mean the girl can send anyone she watns to to the shadow realm she can take care of ehrself! and aria is young but she has got to know they would jimp like that. and umi... ooh ppor thing. lord i honestly thought she was gonna go out wiht jason or eric *shudders* ooh very bad image!! well, i need to read hte next cahpter!! i can already picture waht's gonna happen >
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  • From ANON - jadedragon on December 21, 2004
    Hey this storie is good I hav'nt been reeeading latly so i lost my other name but anyway this is good I haaave a questioon though Isn't Bakura techialy Yamis slave still . It would seem that yami would ggo back an clam what is his sence he is evil youu no. I just thought yami would haave kiddnaaped bakura in stead and pimmmped heim out. but im glad Marik is free though and they figure oout who the imposter is and get the rod back
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  • From ANON - Kat on December 19, 2004
    While I like the idea of Marik tied up, not like this!

    “That’s ‘Horus’ Servant’! He’s my master’s card! What is he doing going into the Badlands?”
    Ooo I wonder how Aten will react when he finds out his monster betrayed him.

    “Stop being such a fucking drama queen and let me go!”
    *laughs* Oooo that's good!

    Marik used his leg to kick Yami back, making him fall on his ass.
    *cackles* Sweet move

    The Feral Imp raked its claws down Marik’s face in retaliation.
    HEY! Don't be ruining the pretty! *blinks then snickers*

    When the wind died down, Marik was looking up into a carbon copy of himself.
    Wow, speaking of ruining the pretty....

    The Celtic Guardian sheathed his sword. “I can’t even survive one duel with Yami. I can’t even survive one battle! I’m no sooner summoned and then I am killed! This is my revenge.”
    Whoa... even his monsters are leaving the ship...

    “You can block me, too, Aten! You probably WANTED to feel Umi inside of you!”
    *gasps* Wrong thing to say!!!

    "But I see that Understanding is wasted on a prissy little princess like yourself!”
    OOOOO you tell her!

    "How many others have dipped their nets into your ocean?”
    “I could ask the same of you!”
    Oh my god... what a cold thing to say!

    Aria looked up and saw her brother leave the room. “Aten…What have I done?”
    *snorts* do the words: wounds, acid and rub mean anything?

    Horus’ Servant opened a portal to the Shadow Realm. Aten walked through the portal and looked around in the purple haze.
    *is confused* Umm, does this mean that Horus' Servant is playing both ends against the middle?

    “Horus has been working undercover, so to speak. He’s been keeping an eye on the evil pharaoh’s plans."
    Ohhhhhhhhh, so that explains it. Okay.

    When Yami Aten turned to Bakura, even the thief had to resist the urge to shudder in fear.
    Dude, now that is a scary thought!

    Okay, so Aten and Aria made up... That's good.

    “Ancient Magic of centuries old
    Release yourself from this Item’s gold
    Remove the powers from this ancient piece
    Obey my command and let all powers cease!"
    Ohhhh, that does not sound good for Marik!

    “You always kick my ass in that game.”
    Glenn stepped behind Yugi and wrapped his arms around him from behind. “Yeah, but I always kiss it and make it all better, don’t I?”
    *laughs* nice way of putting that!

    Yami growled. ‘Yugi, you will pay DEARLY for your betrayal.’
    *plays suspence music here* Damn, that isn't going to be a good thing!

    *snickers* On the other hand, nice to see Yugi being top! *laughs*

    this was gooood!
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on December 18, 2004
    Can I torture Yami? Please? He's so totally deserving of the pain I can inflict..... NOBODY HURTS MARIK and gets away with it! Grrr....... he needs to leave Yugi alone too! Yugi doesn't need Yami if all Yami is going to do is be a pompous crazy ass!
    I'm really glad Aten forgave Aria......fighting chibi's are scary......fighting yami chibi's would be a friggin' nightmare!! I really got a kick out of Aten's tinker toy comment......so cutey, yet so evilly! *squishes chibi's*
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  • From ANON - Black-Butterfly on December 18, 2004
    (just gonna review here for now) O.O eep! Yami's back again! And now he has the millenium rod. >.< Great. Bleh. And what's this? Aten and Aria fighting? That's something new...Ah well. Great chapter, as always
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on December 18, 2004
    whew! i seriously thought he was gonna kill glen! yay not all the gods are narrow-minded retarded fat heads! and that first between aria and aten... i kinda expected something like that to happen. aah no helpless child!! stay away you freak!! *picks up bat and begsin to pound remains of doll into nothing* u gonna update really soon!!
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  • From ANON - Uke Kit & Uke Io on December 17, 2004
    Kit: Yay~! heh, I was worried that AFF was messing up when I only saw a little bit of the second chapter. ^-^
    Io: I love this chapter~!! ^-^ can't wait for the next one~!!!! ^-^ ja for now~
    Kit: And Aku is back! ........._> I don't know if I should be this exsited about it....but Aku means more torture. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Shadow of Light (from mm.org) on December 15, 2004
    i tired reviewing on mm but it said i needed to be a member so i logged in but i still couldn't review so ehre i am. first off, very sweet lemon between aria and umi. heh they make a very nice couple. also the scenes between aten and robbie is too cute. the triplets are adorable and hayden... at least he's not forgotten. i gotta go i'm sick.
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