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By : Aten

From ANON - elusive_dreamer on May 27, 2005
Hey! It’s been a while huh? Looks like I’ve missed a LOT already and the chibis are finally married! The Itemri-Ishtar household sure has gone a long way! Anyway, I don't have much comment about the last few chapters but I really love Bakura's whole "Hell on Earth" thing if he loses Aria. It makes me wonder then on how he will react once Ryou dies...or when he finds out about Yami and Ryou (Something worse I guess?). Speaking of Ryou, I got this whole idea of a possible conflict while re-reading some chapters from your past stories. I was just wondering on what Aria and Aten's reaction would be if they find out about Ryou and Bakura's past relationship, not to mention Ryou and Marik too, since both Yamis were ones very abusive towards him and Malik. In my opinion, this "skeleton in Bakura and Marik's closets" could very well be a trump card for the Pharaoh to finally cause chaos in their family (sorry, but I really like the way villains always find a way to ruin everyone else's life) Please tell me on what you think of this, anyway it's just an idea so if you don't think it could work it's okay. I think that's it for now...see you next chapter! ^_^
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From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on May 27, 2005
Oh Hell, Yami! Why! Why must you keep doing these things! Shame on you! *smacks Yami* Bratty Pharaoh...I love Yami, but I'd like to smack the shit out of him too. *snicker*
I'm glad Marik finally knows the truth now though. Even if the truth sucks, it's better than being in the dark.

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From ANON - Kathryn Colll on May 24, 2005
"Men with Meat"? It sounds like an ad for the Atkins diet! *snicker*

The rule with videotapes:
If it's under a bed
If it's not labeled
If you're not supposed to watch it

It either has porn or gore on it. *smirks* If you're lucky, it's got both. Horror smut....

“I think I would remember sleeping with Miranda.”
and he'd still be strutting about it too....

Bakura turned and saw Marik’s eyes glow a fiery red. His entire body trembled with fury.
oooooo somebody's gonna get a beating....

beaucoup points to the boys for clearing Malik's name though... even if they did almost give Ryou heart failure.

“I’m going to tear that pharaoh’s eyeballs out of his sockets and shove them up his ass so he can watch me kick his ass!”
isn't that redundant, given the fact his head's already up there??

The pharaoh fell forward and slid on the floor, scraping his knees.
*snerks* Slide Yami, Slide!

//Define ‘not well.’//
/’Not well’ as in collapsed on the ground with no warning./
thaaaaaat's a good definition...

“I’ll carry him. Malik, can you help Bakura with his head?”
You know, under other circumstances that question would be funny.

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From ANON - Draza on May 24, 2005
hey you! i'm glade Bakura and Marik got to kick some Yami ass!!! woohoo!!! anyhoo! your joining Karate? that's awsome! you can help bakura and Marik soon!!! Good luck in therepy.......it's not as bad as it sounds...trust me...anyhoo!!! hope you update soon!! i don't mind waiting, your chappies are always worth it!!!
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From ANON - Kathryn Coll on May 20, 2005
What? Does she get pregnant every time she and Umi have sex?! Sweet Isis!’
Yup, just call her Fertile Mertle...

“I tried to behave. I tried to block you. Did it work?”
Aria smiled faintly. “No.”
Whooooooopsie!

"and if you’re going to tie Robbie up, make sure you don’t leave rope marks.”
Well now, that's always good advice.

“Very true. What are us Ishtars without our Rods, huh?”
Umm.... girls? Otogi and Glen??

“How come every argument with you two ends in the bedroom and a shaky chandelier over our heads?”
'cause, it's fun

"A moonlight walk on the beach…..maybe even do some skinny-dipping in the ocean.”
*snort* Wait until he finds out that means sand in unmentionable places...

“That’s something Marik would say.”
True, true... but then he'd say "That's my boy!" and strut...

“A videotape?”
and I bet it's not dragon/puppy porn either....
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From MarikIshtar77 on May 19, 2005
Hey, cool! I'm actually signed in for once! *snicker*
I hope Malik's idea works. (I'm pretty sure it will...^_~)
I agree with Marik and Bakura -all disputes should be settled between the sheets. If more people did things that way, the world would be a happier place. *throws the boyz more magic lube*
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From ANON - MI77 on May 18, 2005
*sobs into kleenix* Two chibi's married off now, what will Ryou, Bakura, and Marik do with all their spare time now?
Bakura: Crush the Pharaoh, what else?
Marik: *mind wandering* magic lube...Twister...banana cream pie...
Ryou: I think I have an idea of what the chibi's will be doing...*big grin*

Great chapter! *hugs*
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From ANON - Kathryn Coll on May 14, 2005
‘Robbie’s mother gives us a romantic night at a suburban Inn for a night….my father gives me lubricant for sex. What is wrong with this picture?’
*snerks* nothing, it's called GMTA

“It’s good to see you both up to no good….as usual.”
no good... yeah, that's what one does on their wedding night.... umm, sure.

Umi kept staring at Aria….his eyes wide and his jaw still hanging.
ah yes, the definition of pole-axed... la

“I said, ‘Sea-Man’, Ishtar….Not ‘Sea-Men!’”
don't know about anyone else, but I heard sea men.

Otogi and Glenn broke into sobs. “I promised I wouldn’t cry!” the two men wept.
Yugi and Tristan rubbed their lovers’ backs.
“What are we going to do with these two?” Yugi asked.
Tristan shrugged. “Beats me.”
Do what Bakura always suggests: check 'em for vaginas. Lordy, no one in my family cries at weddings....

Lordy if Bakura cries any more, someone might make the same suggestion for him too....
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From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on May 12, 2005
Very nice chapter. I loved this part- “I just want to know one thing, son….did you make him scream?” Aten’s color deepened. “Umm…yes?” Marik grinned with pride. “That’s my boy! Keep up the good work, Aten!"
That's SO Ishtar. *snicker*
Great stuff! XP

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From ANON - Kathryn Coll on May 11, 2005
Oh my god! 'Togi forgot the raw beef for the Yamis!!! *cackles*

I’m having a hard time writing it in plain English.”
[Then write it in plain Arabic.]
*laughs*

“What was Bakura’s vow?”
*snickers* to provide Ryou with lots of orgasms? Oh wait, sorry. Just channeled Anya (from BTVS). La, although it'd work for Bakura too!

“Because Marik’s going to be over here more than usual and I’m afraid poor Malik’s going to get it in the end….literally.”
*falls over laughing* Bet Malik might buy her a thank you card though!

"I even polished my cane for tomorrow.”
*snerks*

“We wanted to surprise you, babe!”
*laughs* and here it comes!

"Aten?” Daniel asked raising his eyebrow.
SURPRISE! *falls over howling*

*snickers* bad side of Marik's rod....

“I just want to know one thing, son….did you make him scream?”
*laughs* Proper question!

Marik hugged Daniel tightly and pat Daniel’s right buttock.
*falls over laughing* Go Marik! Cop a feel of that nice ass!

“True. This isn’t the right place to be talking about orgies, Marik. This is a church.”
Translation: talk to me about it elsewhere. (right?? *snerks*)

Proper Ishtar Pre-wedding proceedures:
1. threaten with evisceration
2. welcome to the family
*falls over howling*

*laughs at the chorus of "I will not cry"*

In the audience, identical sobs could be heard coming from Otogi and Glenn.
“That’s so…BEAUTIFUL!!!!” the two men sobbed.
*howls*

Daniel sighed. “Marik, can you not touch my ass for five minutes?”
“Why not? It’s fun.”
and yes folks, this is Marik _sober_

Daniel sighed. “I don’t want to know, Marik.”
*snerks* wuss

*laughs* pacifier... *howls* hand it to Marik, I'm sure he can find something fun to do with it!

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From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on May 10, 2005
Ooh...I forgot my gifts for the chibi's and their huni's! Since I like to be fair, both couples are getting the same things; their very own camcorders, along with an all expenses paid, 5 day, 4 night stay in Cancun at the Ritz-Carlton.
I hope the kids like their gifts!

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From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on May 10, 2005
*SO sorry I didn't get a chance to review until now. My bad...*
BWA-HAHAHA! Marik can't dance! That's too funny!
Robbie taping Aten's ass, uber-cuteness! (the dialog between them both had me rolling! LMAO!)
“Wouldn’t you like for me to be inside you again, Aten? I can hear you calling my name, begging me to fill you up with my essence.” Yami! You fuckerhead! You can say that to me, not Aten! Bastard! *kicks Yami* I'm glad Robbie whacked that shithead with a stick!
Seto's couch. *snort* Bakura and Ryou rock, that's all I can say. wOOT!

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From ANON - Kathryn Coll on May 08, 2005
Marik planting bulbs?! ahm, not gonna comment...

“I pounced dad! I threw myself at him and actually knocked him down!”
cuuute

Joey needs to realize that Hayden ain't gonna get better... 'course, he needs to deal with his own obsession with Hayden too.

"Asher will enjoy the bonfires and the torches.”
*snort* Yeah, he'd have fun at the luau...

‘I got you this time, Miranda,’ Seto thought with a grin.
*laughs* ten points!

“Yes, and you made me re-upholster Charlemagne’s couch, Bakura,” Seto said
I bet that old fart Charlemange would have been happy that his couch saw some action.

“Marik, you may be great at controlling people with your Rod, but you suck at dancing.”
*snickers* He would mention sucking and rod in the same sentence....

Nope, still no idea for presents.
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From ANON - Kathryn Coll on May 04, 2005
Tears flowed out of his eyes as he walked through the purple haze.
*laughs* Great now I'm hearing Jimmy Hendrix!

The pharaoh growled as he remembered Bakura’s furious face as he twisted the Trident in his body.
*howls* hand him a tee that says "I was forked by Bakura"

“Itemri…….did this.”
I was Forked I tell you! Forked! *cackles*

“The Spirit of the Ring impaled you?”
*falls over laughing* Oh yes he did, he did! He forked him goooooood.

The pharaoh struggled to stand up and then fell back into his chair. “I must regain my strength.”
*snickers* yeah, it does take a while to recover from a really good forking...

“Marik’s Millennium Rod doesn’t work anymore either. Now it’s no better than an elaborate paper-weight.”
And what a paperweight it is!!!! *smirks*

“You Ishtars are such hentais…”
A phrase that belongs in the "well, duh" category!

Oh man, i gotta think of presents! I can't even do that when I go to where people are registered...
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From ANON - Black-Butterfly on May 04, 2005
Ok, i've been so lazy about reviewing this wonderful fic lately. -____- bad me...any way...loved
the lime, and that flash back was so adorable! Poor little Aria...Cuteness. ^__^ *squishes Aria plushie* Now, as for the gifts....heeheee...
body paint and a huge yaoi porn collection for Aten and Robbie! whee!
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