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By : Aten
  • From ANON - Black-Butterfly on March 26, 2005
    *Gets all teary eyed* That was so sweet...Finally, they got the wedding over with! sheesh! *sniffles* Excellent job...and once again, you've left us with a cliff hanger. -___- Such an evil authoress, you are! Evil, but wonderful. Yeah, i've been lazy about reviewing. I'm gonna try and break that habit. Any way...really great chapter! ^___^ I did enjoy it, very much. Looking forward to the next one!
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on March 26, 2005
    Aww...very nice wedding chapter. *sends Seto and Puppy-kins a new espresso maker*
    I love whenever Asher makes a cameo, that dude is just on fire...er...no pun intended. *grin*
    Awwww....chibi REWD!! SWEEETNESSS!!
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  • From ANON - Kathryn Coll on March 23, 2005
    "Mmm…raw, bloody lamb chops. Maybe I can talk mother into cooking some tonight for dinner.”
    Damn, lamb does sound good. Makes me wish I hadn't given up red meat.

    Ryou sighed. “Well, honey, if you do use your Rod, remember that Robbie’s probably still sensitive.”
    *falls over laughing* That sounds like a Marik comment! *cackles* Rod... sensitive.

    “I’m a big boy now! I’m using the potty by mysewf and every-ting!”
    *laughs* awwwwwwww

    The yami stood up and brought the child out of the swing. “Do you want to play? Do you want to play with me, baby girl? Who’s a big girl?”
    Bakura held the baby in the air and laughed as the child’s legs dangled. “You’re so cute I could eat you alive!”
    *smirks* Ya know, it's a real pity he doesn't like that kid...

    The baby grabbed Bakura’s batwing and pulled.
    “Ow…Lanie, let go of…AH!”
    The baby laughed and tugged harder on the white spiky hair.
    “Lanie…don’t pull on that…OW!”
    The baby tugged and played with the batwing, squealing happily.
    *laughs* Note to Bakura: put hair into a ponytail when playing with the grandbaby. *stops and blinks* Oooo Grampy 'Kura. *falls over laughing*

    Okay Yami Aten + heart eating = me glad I did give up red meat! *G*

    “If you two are going to get busy before the movie, you two will have to go upstairs.”
    The Egyptian looked up at Miranda with large chibi eyes. “Me?”
    “Yes, you, Aten Bakari Ishtar…..the pout doesn’t work on me, mister.”
    *snickers* Yeah, she's used to Marik's pouts!

    Miranda looked over at the two boys, seeing only Aten’s back. “Are you two boys paying attention?”
    “Yes, mom,” Aten said with a smile.
    “Are you sure?”
    “Yes, mom,” Aten repeated, biting his lip against the devilish grin.
    *laughs* You know, he's the only one I know of who gets all hot and bothered by comedies...

    Ooooooo so it's gonna be Robbie and Yami Aten? Ohhhhhhhhhhhh so he only started things... okay. Got it.

    “Aten! That felt good…”
    Aten snickered. “Bingo.”
    Robbie, meet your prostate. *laughs*

    “Yeah…just…umm……twisted my hip……………..ow.”
    *laughs* yeah, riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight.
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  • From ANON - Uke Kit, and Uke Io on March 23, 2005
    Both: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
    Io: I've been waiting SO long for that lemon!
    Kit: *nods* Yes! It was deffinitly good. ^-^ I still love this story.
    Io: I do too, but sadly to say. I am starting to loose my intrest. I will still read once in a while. But, Yugioh is getting broing for me.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on March 23, 2005
    YES! They did it! I'm so happy for Aten! He made it all the way through! *snicker* Did they keep Miranda up all night???
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on March 22, 2005
    Ryou: "I don’t know where the rest of the guys are, though.”

    *snicker* Oooh...Ryou...if you only knew! That was a helluva sexy lemon! An Ishtar-Itemi sandwich! Mmm-Mmm GOOD!



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  • From ANON - Kat on March 19, 2005
    “Hey, Ishtar, maybe you should give Lanie your Millennium Rod. Aten covered that damn thing in drool all the time.”
    *blinks* Noooo, I'm not gonna comment while running a fever. I got a dirty enough mind when I'm not ill! *smirks*

    “Hey, Lanie, does our little girl want to see the Millennium Rod? Do you want to cover it in drool and make it all slimy???”
    *snerks* Gonna keep quiet about this part too.

    Marik shrugged. “We already did diaper duty once, Ryou.”
    “Yeah,” Bakura added. “I’m glad not to do that again.”
    *cackles* who's a smart yami? Yesssss, dey's smart yamis..

    “While we’re checking Otogi for a vagina, I say we check Ryou, too.”
    soooo, does this mean they're gonna check Otogi the same way? 'Cause some how I don't think Fin Boy will go for that. *smirks* I'm thinking Marik would ruin him for anyone else. La

    “Geeze, Otogi….does that mean you knit when you’re boiling furious?”
    *laughs* nah, it'd screw up his gauge! At least it does that to my knitting.

    *howls* They store cake and cookies in their soul rooms? Well hell, that explains a lot: millenia long sugar highs!

    “That is the real miracle. That is what is important.”
    Yup. Amen.

    No sound. Odd. Normally you’d hear moans…chains….a whip crack….something.
    *laughs hard enough to start coughing*

    I heard the door close behind me and saw Marik and Malik standing there with identical grins on their faces. Both of them were dressed in their purple and gold bath robes.
    Uh-oh. This can’t be good.
    *snickers* So, explain to me how finding three hot, horny guys in your bedroom can't be good. 'Cause I'm all confused about that!

    *cackles* supervising...

    “So, Ishtar….did you …get a chance…to see if Ryou…had a vagina?”
    *laughs* I still wanna know if they're gonna check Otogi the same way!!

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  • From ANON - kat (not signed in) on March 17, 2005
    Warning 1: Kat has a fever
    Warning 2: Kat hasn't slept well in three days
    Warning 3: ummm, errrrrrr, well, see the other two warnings.

    Aria’s head rested against the seat. “Men…suck. Ra-damned…..men!”
    *snickers*

    Bakura turned and saw Umi looking under Aria’s dress. “Tsunami, get your head out of there!”
    /Yami, calm down. He’s going to marry Aria anyway! And he got her pregnant the first time. Don’t you think he would have seen THAT by now?/
    Bakura groaned. “Too much information, Ryou.”
    *falls over laughing* Ryou's got a point!

    Aria’s hair spiked and her eyes turned dark. “Do you think I had a fucking choice about this?!”
    Ryou pat Aria’s shoulders. “Aria, honey, calm down. You don’t know what effect going yami will have on the baby.”
    *laughs* Ooooo "exorcist" voice!

    Aria opened her eyes. “Mother?”
    “Yes, honey?”
    “Childbirth…..sucks.”
    *falls over laughing, coughs and laughs some more*

    //Ryou, what is it?//
    /A baby./
    //Wise ass.//
    *cackles* that sounds like something Marik would say.

    “Don’t tell Seto you pushed something the size of a watermelon out of your vagina.
    I don’t think we’ll ever get him off the floor.”
    Ohhhhhhhhh tell him tell him tell him!!!

    Marik raised an eyebrow. “That’s strange. Your Ring always reacts to my Rod.”
    The blond yami burst out in a fit of laughter.
    *falls off bed laughing* true!!!

    Marik walked out of the room.
    Bakura struggled to his feet. “Yami’s tearing us apart. It’s starting.”
    Wow! Boy, I'll say...

    “You had my baby?”
    Aria giggled and closed her eyes tiredly. “No. The baby isn’t yours, Robbie.”
    “Are you sure?”
    *snickers* uhhh, yeah!

    Joey groaned. “Am I STILL Unkie Puppy?”
    Aria nodded. “Yup. Get used to it, pup-sicle.”
    Seto smiled proudly. “Aria’s sounding just like me!”
    “Can’t one of the kids in my family call me Uncle Joey? With no…references to dogs? Just one! That’s all I ask!”
    Aria snickered. “Don’t count on it, canine.”
    *laughs* pooor Joey.

    Aria crossed her arms. “Unkie Seto?”
    “What?”
    ”Vagina.”
    Seto’s face turned red from blushing.
    *shrieks and coughs*

    Robbie groaned. “Where is my baby?”
    “Baby? Robbie…you don’t have a baby. WE don’t have a baby.”
    Robbie raised an eyebrow. “Are you sure?”
    “Robbie…we’re two guys…we’re together….and gay. No babies here.”
    Oh gods... *hacks up a lung* that's just hysterical!

    Robbie’s eyes widened and his jaw dropped in shock. “I’m gay? Since when?”
    I love this line best!! Well, after the rod and ring comment that is.

    awwwwwwwwwwwwww sweet ending.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on March 14, 2005
    Damn, I thought I reviewed, but I guess I didn't! I'm sorry!!! *begs forgiveness*
    Poor Bakura! OMG, what will he do now that he's..uh...normal?
    I hope Marik gives Yami the rod up the ass for being such a jerk. Maybe that would set his head on straight! *evil grin*
    *big hugs to Aria* (I can't say it enough, I love that girl!)
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  • From Pussycat on March 11, 2005
    “My father controlled the nurse’s mind and made her open the door for me.”
    Ginsby raised an eyebrow. “And…how did he do that?”
    Aten approached the bed. “Actually, he was flirting with her and talked her into opening it.”
    *cackles* Behold the power of the "other" Rod...

    Ryou trembled and reached for Bakura’s dagger. The hikari grabbed the handle and lunged, slicing Yami’s leg.
    Oooooo, coool!!

    “Do you want a little bit of punishment…Ryou? How long has it been since you’ve been…really…punished?”
    *wrinkles nose* ew. Just ew.

    /Yami! Say something!/
    //……………………….ow.//
    /Well, that’s something./
    *laughs* true, very true.

    /Bakura! This is Yami! Don’t give into it!/
    Yeah.... PHARAOH COOTIES!!!!

    Yami turned to Ryou. “How does Aria like the little curse I placed on her?”
    Important rule when trying to become an evil dictator... never give the good guys all the information!

    "You were an asshole then and you are an asshole now!”
    *laughs* you tell him!

    “I called…you…an asshole!” Ryou said confidently.
    WOOHOO!!! Dat's some set of cajones you got there Ryou!

    Aria stood in front of her parents. “What did you guys get into?”
    “The…pharaoh,” Bakura whispered.
    EWWWWWWWWWW

    Aria banged the Millennium Ring against the couch.
    *falls over laughing* Don't let her near a car. She'd shoot the engine to get it to turn over...

    Aria looked down at the carpet as it became wet under her knees. “I…I may be wrong…..but…I think my water just broke.”
    *snickers* It's always one damned thing after another in the Itemeri/Ishtar household.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on March 09, 2005
    Uh-oh...This isn't good. Hopefully Robbie's memory loss is only temporary!
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  • From ANON - Kathryn Coll on March 09, 2005
    What would life be like with those two around?
    All she knew is that there would be a lot more horseplay….
    *snickers* Is that what they're calling it these days?

    “It’s Robbie’s blood….I can’t be around blood. It…does things to me that you should not see.”
    Ya know... at least the ol' softy was honest.

    //I will have to do something about that mortal later….right now, Robbie is more important.//
    Hand him over to Asher. He'd make a nice grease stain on the pavement.

    *rolls eyes* Yami needs a life. Or better yet, a death: his.

    *shakes head* doilies at a wedding?

    Otogi screamed again and brought his knee up to Yami’s groin.
    *cackles* sweet!

    “Hey, my eyes doth wander of their own accord. I can’t help it if I….admired her ‘degrees.’”
    *snerks* Methinks he doth protest too much....

    “Do….I……know….you?”
    Aten looked down at his fiancé. “It’s me…..Aten. Don’t you remember me?”
    Robbie blinked as he looked at the stranger before him. “No.”
    Tsk... evil. Evil, truly evil.
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  • From Pussycat on March 05, 2005
    She giggled. “That’s part of being half yami. Good eyesight and good hearing.”
    *cackles* weird-ass sex drive, hang-ups about rare steak, PMS that could scare the gods...

    “No……I’ve been….burning the midnight oil here. Watching it burn….” Asher’s left eye twitched and spasmed.
    *laughs*

    “Bad men hurt Aria! I make them go BOOM!”
    Do it! Go on Asher, do it. *smirks* Make 'em go BOOM

    “Something’s wrong if I’m dreaming about my Uncle Seto that way.”
    *cackles* Ya think??

    “Wipe you from everyone’s memory.”
    Oooo do me next! *smirks*

    “Birth Order, Ishtar!” Bakura snarled.
    “Tradition, Itemri!” Marik snarled back.
    *snorts* fuck you both. I say send the kids to Vegas. *smirks*

    Robbie opened the door and slammed the door behind him angrily.
    I wondered when the blow up would happen.

    The old man laughed and closed the curtains.
    Ohhh lookee... there's someone for Asher to play with.

    BANG!
    The sound of a gunshot resonated through the forest as its target fell to the ground lifelessly.
    Tsk, that cliffie is just wrong...
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  • From ANON - Catertfree10 on March 05, 2005
    Konichiwia!

    AAACCCCKKK!!!! I AM GUNNA MAKE YOU SUFFER YOU BLASTED SHE-DEMON!!!!! RAWR!!!! *Tries to get to bakurasgirl via moniter but falls flat on her face instead* X_x Ow...
    Kyasarin: 7_7 Oy vay... methinks you need mental help, Cat-chan...
    Caterfree: That's Caterfree-sama to you bitch... *Faints*
    Kyasarin: Anyways, I think she wants to know what happens next. AND SO DO I!!!!! I DUN WAN ROBBIE DEAD!!!! BAHAHAHA!!! *Sobs*
    Caterfree: *Miraculously awakes* Oh? Have I turned you into a bakurasgirl follower as well?
    Kyasarin: O_O Um... um... um...
    Caterfree: I take the stuttering as a yes.
    Kyasarin: *Runs off*
    Caterfree: Ahahahaha!!!! Anyways, UPDATE SOON OR I SWEAR I'LL HUNT YA DOWN!!! RAWR!!!!!!

    Ja Ne! ^_~
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on March 05, 2005
    GAH! That cliffie is as evil as evil gets, you! Shame on Eric and his little pack of asshole retards! Eric needs to die in a very slow, bloody, very excruciating torturous manner. I hate that stupid fuckling infinate...grrrr.


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