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By : Aten
  • From ANON - Uke kit and Uke Io on March 05, 2005
    Kit: AHHHHHHH!!!!!! NO! NO BAD CLIFFY! BAD BAD BAD!!!!!!!!

    Io: O_o......I thought *I* was the one that was out of control at cliffies...not you

    Kit: BUT I LIKE ROB! AND ATEN! T_T I KNOW you can't kill either of them. BUT WHO DIED!?!?!?!?!

    Io: hehehehe, ^-^ nice chapter! I'll keep my eye out of the next one!
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  • From ANON - kathryn coll on March 05, 2005
    “But, Aten, your parents were CLOTHED! This…..This is people UNCLOTHED!”
    *snorts* Well yes, porn usually does have unclothed people....

    “Aten! He’s sticking his finger up that guy’s ass!”
    *rolls eyes* His education is sorely lacking...

    “Well, I’ve always known he was strange, Aten. I’m not going to lie to you about that.”
    *cackles* I think even Marik knows he's strange....

    “I want a burger! PATTIES ARE LIKE FRIENDSHIP! YEAHHH FRIENDSHIP!”
    *left eye twitches* ugh

    “I haven’t seen you in such a long time, Mawik-poo!”
    *shudders* Mawik-poo?

    Marik screamed as the girl pounced on Marik, knocking him to the ground.
    ewwwwwwwwwwwww

    “Can you please not bounce on me there?!"
    *blinks* Something I never expected to hear Marik say. *checks to see if pigs are flying*

    Eric screamed as he felt a fist slam into his stomach. One of the boys slapped Jason roughly.
    Sweeeet!

    Eric grabbed Robbie’s collar. “You made me look like an ass, Robert!”
    “You are an ass. Point being?”
    *laughs* 10 points to the curly-haired boy.


    “I’ll teach you not to make me look like a fool, Morgan!
    *snorts* Gonna teach him to look like someone else then??

    Eric grinned devilishly. “Morgan.”
    Ah, I'd wondered whether he'd pick Robbie or Aten.

    Still say the barnes family needs to die. Asher would be perfect for that job.
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  • From ANON - Kathryn Coll on March 02, 2005
    Umm, chapter??

    Yeah, leave it to Ryou to have a tea party instead of a batchelorette party. Honestly, tea and scones? There should have been at least one male stripper. Or maybe a game of "Pin the penis on the man".

    *smirks*

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  • From Pussycat on February 26, 2005
    Otogi took a bite out of a piece of cracker and cheese. “Now, with the spaghetti sauce, the trick is the oregano. Don’t put too much in. A little dab will do ya.”
    Glenn sighed. “Nobody has ever complimented me on my cooking before I met Yugi. He loves everything I cook him!”
    Those two so need matching aprons.... *smirks*

    Wait... Joey's "batchelor" party is a tea party?! Sheesh. That sure as hell makes it the Batchelorette party then.

    “The boys are out having a good time. How rowdy can they get?”
    Seriously rowdy, I hope!!

    “’Oh, look, I’m the pansy little Pharaoh Yami. I like dollies and unicorns with looooooooooooooooong eyelashes!’”
    *falls over laughing* Now that's fun!

    “Seto, is that your cash box pressed against me or are you just happy to see me?”
    *cackles* Depending on how he uses it, it could be considered either...

    “Why do I have a feeling I’m going to be scarred for life watching this?”
    *laughs* like watching those two go at it is a bad thing...

    “He’s asleep,isn’t he?”
    Malik opened Marik’s closed eye. “He passed out….cold. Well, it’ll be useless to move him.”
    “You’re going to leave him on the stairs?”
    *laughs* carpet patterns on the face by morning

    “Father Bakura, I am not mommy! Go down the hall!”
    Bakura turned around. “Down the hall?”
    “Father Bakura, go!” Aten ordered.
    *laughs hysterically*

    “You call this nothing? This doesn’t look like nothing to me.”
    me either *grins*

    “Pi-wets!”
    *snickers* sounds like a bad dessert....

    Jeanie laughed. “I think he’s seriously considering a vasectomy. Four kids is enough for him, I think.”
    *cackles* Yeah, I'd send him a pair of scissors and a sewing kit.

    Aten covered his mouth and his face blushed. “We found Uncle Seto’s pornography stash!”
    WOOHOO! Grab the popcorn and watch 'em! Wait... or should you just have a couple of meatball subs? *ducks and runs*

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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on February 26, 2005
    Holy krud, babe! That was the funniest chapter yet!! (and the R/B lemon was uber tasty!!) I must say, Marik's Pharaoh impersonations were right on!!! (They keeeeled me! LMFAO!!!) OOOH..I can only imagine what Yami would have done had he seen that!! *ROLMFAO!!* (Take THAT, PHARAOH! hahaha!)
    Wonderful chapter, mah' dear!
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  • From ANON - Shredded soul on February 24, 2005
    .....I need to find another word for perfect.......


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  • From ANON - shredded soul on February 24, 2005
    hey i havent review this story yet, cuz i'm not up to the updates >< but i do scan through all the chapters, and i saw that Aria and Umi are going to get married ^^. And i dunno if you were planning on writing the wedding, but i think that if you did like a daddy daughter song, that you could use Martina McBrides "in my daughters eyes" cuz i was listening to it i though it would fit perfectly. Like if ryou and aria, or aria and bakura shared a dance, i think it would be the perfect song. Although i don't know if you've ever heard it lol, but it's one of the most touching songs i've ever listened to, and i think it would be perfect for a dance between aria and bakura, or ryou. It would be perfect
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  • From ANON - Caterfree10 on February 24, 2005
    Konichiiwa!

    Yay! Thankies for the Plushies! *Glomps it* It was fun playing mt solo. ^^ And I also got to rent XENOSAGA!!!!! w00t!!!!! KOS-MOS OWNZ ALL!!!!!!!! JR. AND MOMO FOREVA!!!!!!
    Kyasarin: Wanring! Warning! Hyper Xenosaga fan alert!
    Caterfree: And best of all EPISODE TWO CAME OUT LAST WEEK!!!! WOOHOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Kyasarin: TAKE COVER!!!!!! *Hides*
    CAterfree: WAHOO!!!!!!!!!! *Explodes*
    Kyasarin: *peeks out and then emerges once she confirms it's safe* Phew, that was fun. OH well... She's going to be insane for a while now. 7_7 Anywayus, you know what Cat would normally say, update quicker and woohoo for a lemon coming up. And the Lime was quite nice. I personally liked that one.
    Caterfree: You just have no enjoyment for the finer things in life! *Sticks out toungue*
    Kyasarin: 7_7
    Caterfree: Teehee! Gotta go now! Time for finding things to kill time with since SakuraMB's down today. *Sigh* I hope hackers didn't attack again...

    Ja Ne! ^_~
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  • From Pussycat on February 23, 2005
    Robbie closed his eyes. “Okay, Umi, I get the idea. Let’s not discuss Aria’s breasts, okay?”
    *cackles* Time to get Robbie some of Seto's stomach meds.

    Robbie raised his eyebrow. “And slightly insane like her father.”
    *nods* Yup, true enough.

    "I would hate to see something….unfortunate happen to you….if I ever see you harm Aten.”
    *laughs* He sounds like Aria. Yes, I just said that Yami Aten sounds like a girl. So there. Nyah

    Yami Aten buried his face in Robbie’s neck and growled.
    *laughs* Someone's got an interesting idea of foreplay.

    Aria’s sharp canines cut through the strong rope.
    *snickers* She does understand that doesn't count as flossing, right?

    “I just want my husband to look extra sexy on his night on the town,”
    *cackles* Yeah, we all know he secretly likes watching people trip, walk into things and slip in the puddles of drool. Sadist that Ryou is...

    “Otogi coming over….and Glenn…..and Yugi….You’ll have more vaginas here than you know what to do with.”
    *falls over laughing* Gotta agree with that...

    "Sweet Isis, daddy….let mommy breathe for a minute!”
    Why? He's so pretty in that shade of blue... *snerks*

    “Itemri, have you seen my Rod lately?”
    *left eye twitches*

    “Marik, I haven’t seen….your Rod."
    *muffles snicker*

    "Sweet Isis, Bakura, what has gotten into you? "
    *snerks* Obviously not Marik, recently.

    "Check to see if Aten grabbed your Rod by mistake. "
    *falls over laughing* no comment

    “You’re enjoying this, aren’t you?”
    “Malik’s limp tomorrow will answer that question.”
    *laughs* Someone should warn him. He's still limping after that Miranda episode...

    “I promise to see that Itemri behaves himself. If he doesn’t……can I punish him later on? Huh? Can I?”
    Screw what Ryou says. I say HELL YES!

    “There goes my horny,” Bakura grumbled.
    *laughs hysterically*

    Seto looked around and his jaw dropped. “This place is wonderful!”
    Amen!

    Marik smiled. “And that is how you can stimulate your partner with a simple banana, spatula, and egg beaters.”
    *blinks a few times* I hate when I walk in on the end of a conversation like that.

    Marik wiped the drool off of his chin as he watched the couple dance on the stage. His hands went up Bakura’s shirt. “Bye, son,” he said keeping his eye on the stage.
    Those two are so damned much fun. They're the friends that you don't call to bail you out of jail. They're the friends that are sitting next to you and saying "Damn, that was fun."

    [Seto Kaiba’s wedding reception. By the time we’re done, we’ll have cleaned Domino City of Seto and his faggot family. No survivors are to be left behind.]
    dude, Jerry and Barnes need to die.

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  • From anubiset on February 23, 2005
    HELLO! Bet you didn`t expect me here too. You are not listed in the yaoi only section on this one. Suckage. ???????? Did I just make up a word. Oh, dirty thoughts. Very dirty thoughts. (goes off to drool over an image of Yami Aten and Robbie)
    Plot bunnies starring at her. (ryo: now what happened to her? granite: not sure. ted: I think it is this story. ryo: not another one?)
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  • From ANON - Black-Butterfly on February 23, 2005
    'ey, what happens in the batcave, stays in the batcave. ;) Geez! First you drive their son insane, then you trash their wedding! You just love to torture pretty boys, don't you? hmmmm? *Sneaks around while humming the mission impossible theme song* Jerry must die...dum dum dum! *cough* ahem...Please don't kill Seto or Jou! Have mercy on them, great authoress! Well...begging aside..lots of yummy citrus fruit in this chapter. Heehee...and definitely looking forward to the Bakura/Ryou lemon...once again, PLEASE don't kill any yummy pretty boys! :'(
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on February 23, 2005
    Very nice work with Yami Aten/Robbie, that was really awesome how you handled that bit!
    Phrase of the day: “I’m not as think you drunk I am!!!” (PRICELESS! LMAO!)
    So what did Bakura do with the fishies from young mister Tsunami? Bury them in the garden for fertilizer, perhaps? *snicker* (That's what I'd do- Fish! EWE-NESS!)
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  • From Pussycat on February 20, 2005
    ‘Bakura, could I please marry Aria? PLEASE???????’….That sounds down-right pathetic…and sad.
    *laughs* Yeah, whine for her hand Umi...

    "What’s the worse he can do?”
    Umi swallowed hard, afraid to answer that question.
    I vote for making him listen to Broadway tunes. That's torture to me!

    “Can’t you go five minutes without touching, slapping, grabbing, pounding, or kissing my ass?”
    Marik grinned as he past, his own hips swaying as he walked away. “Tried…..I can’t.”
    The white-haired yami’s eyes focused on the rear end of his former lover and he licked his lips. Bakura shook his head when Marik was out of sight. “He needs help. I think he has an unhealthy fixation on my ass.”
    And I think Bakura is projecting! *falls over laughing*

    Umi watched Bakura stand in front of him.
    Silent…
    ………
    Still……
    His eyes narrowing…..
    ‘Oh shit,’ Umi thought as he heard a deep rumble coming from the bottom of Bakura’s throat.
    *laughs*

    “You bet! I’m going to go out there and get you the best present that any father could receive as a dowry!”
    I can't wait to see this...

    “I don’t want to be a part of a church who doesn’t respect my right to marry whom I want based on sex.”
    *cheers* You tell him!

    “Sex! Sex! Sex! Sex! Sex! HOT THROBBING SEX! I scream it out to the heavens!”
    *falls over laughing*

    Her black hair flowed behind her as she threw open the large wooden doors with force. She walked up to Vidello’s office and banged on the door.
    Pity Marik's not there to see her be a force of Nature. He'd cream his pants... *smirks and waves a "Kick His Ass" penant*

    It was about the Boob-inic Plague.”
    Robbie covered his mouth and snickered. “That’s the ‘Bubonic Plague’ not the ‘Boob-inic Plague.’”
    *falls over in hysterics* Yes all those boobs wiped out a third of the population of Europe!

    “Do not tell anyone that we are hugging….it could be bad for business.”
    *laughs hysterically* Ooooo scandalous!

    “You thought that George Washington worked in a laundry!”
    *snerks*

    “You also thought that the Cotton Gin was the first liquor ever made! How could that be? We had wine in Egypt!”
    *cackles*

    “How come every argument they have has to end up in the bedroom?!”
    *laughs*

    Umi turned over the burlap bag and thirty fresh fish fell out of the bag and onto the kitchen table.
    *snickers* Sushi on the hoof!!

    “You told me to go out and find a gift equal to what I thought you daughter was worth to me. These fish are valuable. With fish such as these, I promise your daughter will never starve. Food is valuable. Wasn’t fish valuable back in your day?”
    Smart boy!!! He wins!

    ‘Now I can ask Aria to marry me!’
    I suggest getting her a ring instead of fish. *smirks*

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  • From ANON - Black-Butterfly on February 19, 2005
    O.o oy. Haven't reviewed this one in a while...*sheepish grin* I've been busy. Real life, ya know. Doesn't it suck? -_-' Any way....BLARGH! *hops on the "father" and beats him over the head with a shoe* Narrow minded bastard! How dare you say such things to Robbie?! *grins* Sex sex sex, hot, sweaty, fuck-like-horny-bunnies gay sex! Nyah Nyah. :P Go Robbie! hehehehe...Wow, 3 marriages. "O_o" 'Togi has a lot of baking to do, eh? *relieved sigh* Oh, good..Yugi didn't write the letter...suddenly, I didn't like him very much after I read the end of the last chapter. Feh...Awww...Seto/Yugi friendship fluff..how precious. ^_^ So now, the bedroom's like Marik and Bakura's Batcave? O_o *laughs* Quick, cock man! To the bedroom! dum dum dum!!! *cough* Ok. Enough randomness. I'm still enjoying this story. ^_^ Very much so! Can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From KikiItemri on February 16, 2005
    *hugs Aten and Robbie* They're engaged! Yay! *starts shopping for wedding presents for them* I'm glad Atem is getting better. I just hope all this bad stuff stops soon. It's really getting to me. >.< *Hands Aria and Robbie Hershey Kisses and Atem special chocolate that he can have for V-Day* (btw, this is PharaohYamisPrincess, it's just a new name ^.^)
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